Okay I would love to thank JesseFan0409 for the shout out and all the review she gave my story, Thanks JesseFan0409. Well this story is actually about how emotions can make any thing possible, well it's not really true but I didn't know what else to say- LOL anyways Please R&R thanks!
i want to include this, most dramatic and all mature parts are from my Cuzin so i'm giving her a little bit of credit,
Beautiful Soul
Once Halie surfed, the boys couldn't believe it. Lucas was surprised that she could pull of a 360 and a backspin, it looked like she knew how to do every move. Halie, started off with a simple 120 then a 180 after a few minutes when the tide were high, she did the 360 backspin. Bradin and Lucas couldn't believe that a novas girl can actually surf like a pro.
Halie then got out of the water and went back to the beach.
Halie: so what do u think?
Lucas and Bradin were speechless!
Lucas: wow, how did u learn all those moves, cause the Playa Linda Surf team has been totally tried the 360 backspin, but always fails, and u could pull it off.
Bradin: yea, how and who taught u how to surf like that?
Halie: well, it's a gift; no, I'm just kidding. When I first tried a small wave, I knew that surfing is like snow boarding, so back home, at Canada, I knew how to snowboard so I use what I learned from snowboarding and used it like surfing.
Bradin: wow, that is amazing, u could try out for the Playa Linda Surf team.
Lucas: yea that's a great idea, well bring u to our coach on Monday, sounds cool?
Halie: yea totally, but is he like your coach, is he like my snowboard coach before?
Lucas: what do u mean like your coach?
Halie: see, at my old place, my coach was a total asshole, I mean like he didn't want girls to play at the team or even try out cause we're girls and he thinks that girls are weak and all scared, so that's why I moved here with my parents then stay at my old house.
Bradin: don't worry; I'll be by your side, okay.
Halie: that's so sweet, she then moves to Bradin and hugs him. Bradin hugged her back and Bradin thought that it felt right being with her!
Lucas: yea, what Bradin said, we'll be both by your side.
Halie: that's totally cool! So, boys are u ready?
Lucas: I can cause of my eye! And besides ready for what?
Halie: your not involved in here Lucas, Only Bradin and myself.
Bradin: um… ready for what?
Halie: since u two been so nice to me, I'll teach u guys how to do the 360 backspin, cool?
Bradin: yea that's cool.
Lucas: I wish I could come but my brose really hurts.
Halie: so let go then Bradin!
Bradin: comin'.
Bradin and Halie then went back to the waters and try to do a 360. After Halie taught Bradin the most basic need to do a 360 he was ready. Tide came at the right time and it was a great opportunity for Bradin to test the 360. He swam towards the tide and as he turned to catch the wave, he stood up slowly at his board and surfed he surfed upwards on the tide and then when he past down he tried the 360 but he missed, Bradin flipped as the water hit him and washed him down.
Halie gasp and she jumped off the surfboard and swam to Bradin. Halie couldn't find him, just his board flouting, so she dived in and see if he could spot him. She could barely see underwater and at the corner she spotted Bradin, Halie grabbed his arm and pulled him up. He was unconscious; Halie swam with Bradin under her arm and swam back to shore. Lucas helped Halie and bought him to the sandy beach.
Lucas: Bradin, Bradin, dude wake up!
Bradin was still and didn't say anything.
Lucas tried again: Bradin wake up. It didn't work so he slapped him but nothing; Bradin was still unconscious.
Halie tried calling to him and still Bradin wasn't saying anything.
Halie: Bradin, come u got to wake up, plz!
Halie couldn't stand it; he opened Bradin's mouth and went in. She exhaled air to his mouth then inhaled the air again. Lucas was blushing when Bradin actually kissed Halie, but not like a kiss, kiss but Halie and Bradin's lips did touch, that made him feel the rush of lust.
After a few minutes, Bradin was then coughing water out of his lungs and was spiting water out.
Halie: ewww…Bradin!
Bradin then laid back after a minute of throwing up water.
Halie then came face to face when Bradin was lying down.
Halie: So are u going to be fine?
Bradin didn't answer; his planned was to kiss Halie so he pretended that his still sick.
Halie: Bradin I know your awake! C'mon wake up.
Bradin then opened up his eyes and said: hey with a sweet and soft tone, that made Halie feel like he knows him.
Halie then looked at him; wow! His green eyes are totally adorable; sigh…when I look at him he makes me feel like I'm important, she thought. All of a sudden she closed her eyes and plunged to Bradin her lips touched Bradin's and it was so intense. Halie felt that what she was doing was so right, she had no regrets in what she did neither did Bradin. Bradin lifted his arms and wrapped it around Halie's back. Bradin couldn't resist it, they started to make out at the beach, leaving poor Lucas by him self.
At this point Lucas picked up his thinks and walked towards them.
Lucas: if u guys wanted to make out so badly u could have asked me to leave u guys alone1
Lucas: are u listening, okay whatever.
Lucas: well see u then.
Lucas then walked off and left them alone. Bradin then Placed Halie on the sand and he was kissing her from an angle. Halie spotted two legs stopping near them, while Bradin didn't mind it.
The legs where still standing there like he/she was waiting for them, Halie started to wonder who could it be….
Hey guys I hoped u like this story cuz the idea hit me when it was still 4:00 in the morning, well please R&R, thanks
