I totally want to thank this author again, I don't way but every time I ready this authors story I get a totally amazing brainstorm, an amazing and awesome idea keeps popping for every paragraph I read, I would love to Thank JesseFan0409 for the inspiration, your writing is totally giving me amazing Story idea's I just want to thank-you (if your Reading this) I want to thank-you for inspiring me to fine me true and inner writer, Thank-you. Okay enough of the sappy part; here it is my Story:
Beautiful Soul
As Halie look on forward, she broke the kiss and softly whispered, Bradin, someone's standing right beside us, who do u think it is?
Bradin whispered: do u think it's Lucas?
Halie: no I heard him saying that he's gone off.
Bradin: so, who do u think is it?
When Bradin stopped talking, a very deep voice said something, the person said:
Boy, what are u doing on top of my Daughter?
Halie then gasp and pushed Bradin, Bradin feel on top of the sand and they saw this big and tall man, he had a gray suit on and had his brown hair gelled back.
Halie said with a sweet voice: daddy, hey what are u doing here?
Jason Krew: I was walking along the pier and I saw Lucas, I asked him where you were and told me you were out on the beach so I went searching for you and I see you with a boy you hardly met and you two are kissing.
Halie: daddy I do know who he is, his name is Bradin um… Halie whispered, Bradin what's your last name?
Bradin then whispered back and said: Westerly.
Halie: see daddy his name is Bradin Westerly.
Dad (Jason Krew): yea okay honey. Well hurry up, we have to go somewhere?
Halie: that would were?
Jason: we have to go to this person's place; I think her name is Ava, um… something?
Bradin: sorry to interrupt but, did u say Ava!
Jason: yeah why do u know who she is?
Bradin: she's my aunt; I'll take u there if u want?
Jason: okay so get dress and well drive in my car. Okay?
Bradin: yeah sure.
Halie then ran and hugged her father and whisper, thank-you daddy. Jason then whispered back, you're welcome honey now go before we're late.
Halie: met u at the car daddy!
Jason: Okay!
Halie then rushed towards Bradin and she held his hand. Bradin then looked at her and kissed her forehead. He then pulled her closer and he put his right arm around her shoulder. They then walked to the change room in the beach. They split and Bradin went to the boys change room and Halie went to the girls change room.
After a few minutes they both went out. Bradin was wearing his baby blue striped shirt with different army patches and with blue jeans, while Halie wore a white tube top and a skirt with a slit on the left side; she wore a jean jacket over the tube top. Then they both walk to the lot and Bradin saw a black hammered limousine.
Bradin: wow!
Halie: oh I forgot to tell u that my parents are presidents of the Hollywood Records and the Millions Fashion Industries.
Halie: why are u standing there come on, lets go in. Halie then pushed him gently towards the limo.
The Limo-driver named Alfred came out and opened the door for Halie and Bradin.
Alfred: Hello Ms. Krew, how was the time on the beach today?
Halie: it was cool and I made out at the beach too, she winked!
Halie and Bradin then went in and Alfred closed the door. He walked towards the drivers seat and started the engine and they were off.
Jason: Bradin, water, chaplain, vodka, Pepsi what do u want to drink?
Bradin: water will be fine thanks.
Jason: why not vodka or Chaplain?
Bradin: sorry I don't drink Alcohol.
Jason: that's good; I like people who date my daughter not to be drinking when driving.
Bradin: thank you sir.
Jason: SO Bradin where are your parents?
Bradin: they died in a car accident a few years ago, and now I live with my parents. Besides it cool, I know their okay!
Halie was looking at Bradin with a sad face, actually knowing that Bradin had no parents. So she hugged Bradin even though her father was there. Bradin didn't know why she took that action but he just hugged back.
Alfred: Mr. Krew, were here!
Jason: thank you Alfred.
Alfred then got out of the car and opened the door for Mr. Krew.
Derrick saw a stretch limo at the front of their house. He ran out of his room and ran down stairs.
Nik: wow, Derrick slow down, why are u running?
Derrick: didn't u see it, there's a Black limo out on the driveway.
Nik: owww, a celebrity might be coming in. I go to fix my hair.
Nikki went to the washroom upstairs and fixed her hair, changed her outfit and looked pretty. Derrick ran up to Aunt Ava and told her all about the Limo. Ava then told every one else on the house and every one was scattering and cleaning up. They all got dress in formal clothing and fixed their hair and everything.
Jason then goes out of the limo and approached the door, behind him Halie and Bradin came out after. Bradin went first so he could open the door, but the door all of a sudden opened and there Nikki was.
Nikki: welcome, she said with a great smile. But as she looked at the person it was only Bradin.
Nikki: oh… it's only Bradin, no need for formal clothing.
Bradin: um… okay, he said with a confused looked.
Then after Bradin got out of the way Mr. Krew was standing there and walked in with Halie beside her.
Everyone were turned around, but as Susannah turn back, she made a surprising look with an open mouth.
Ava: Susannah, why are u acting like that.
Ava then looked at what Susannah was looking at and she was in shock.
Ava: oh, hi Mr. Krew, what a surprise, I didn't know that u were coming today.
Mr. Krew then walked down the stairs and answered: well my clients know what I come for surprise visit to check what they wanted or how there work is going!
Ava: well that was a good surprise, but why did u come here?
Mr. Krew: well I have to tell you….
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