Okay just to let you readers know, I totally don't read over my work, I'm trying to do my best to read them again, it's just I I'm so lazy-LOL- anyways forgive me with all my mistakes, and besides, I learn from my mistake. Well here's Chapter 11.
Beautiful Soul- the best days of my life- chapter 11
"Hey, sounds like you need a women's touch."
Jay turned and he saw Erica walking in. " Well as you can see I'm not good with babies" mocked Jay. Erica then put her bags down and closed the door. She then walked towards the baby and gently took him out of Jay's hands.
Erica: there you go it'll be okay. I'm here, she said with the sweetest and kindest voice. " So what's his name?" inquired Erica. " His name, um…Jesse Krew" said Jay without hesitating. " Is he yours?" " No, it's Bradin's."
"What! Bradin has a child already?" said Erica with a surprise look. " No, you didn't let me finish, Bradin's friend, well girlfriend, has a baby brother and that's him" said Jay. " Okay thank-God I though he had a child already."
Jay started to laugh and chuckled. Soon after, Jesse fell asleep around Erica's Arms. She placed lil Jesse in her crib and closed the door at Bradin's room. She then walked out quietly and sat beside Jay on the couch.
" SO, you came back," said Jay, while trying to make conversation. " Yea, my mom's okay now, so I came back. I kinda miss all the drama and conflicts that this part of the family always have" responded Erica. Jay started to laugh. " What, I just miss everyone here and especially my surfer boys." Then the room was surrounded with silence. Jay then started looking at her, wow, she came back, that's a relief, and maybe now I can get a second chance, Jay thought. So he took the advantage and kissed Erica.
Erica didn't hold back. She placed her has on Jay's cheeks and continued to kiss. Jay took his arms and wrapped it around her waist. He then picked her up and carried her all the way to his room.
Out at the beach, Bradin and Halie were holding hands. They just got out of dinner and they started walking back at the beach. Halie was carrying a bottle of water and her purse. Bradin had a rose behind his back. He was thinking of surprising her with the rose before they go back home.
Halie: today has been the best days of my life. " I know how you feel" sincerely said by Bradin. Halie then smiled at him, he then looked at her eyes and he felt like the world was under his feet. This was the first one that Halie really felt like the world has rendered and open a new heart for her. Her love for Bradin grew every time she looks at him.
Halie all of a sudden stopped. " Hey what's wrong?" Bradin said with a hint of concerns. " Nothing's wrong, I can actually tell you how I really feel," said Halie with a sincere voice. " What do you mean?" asked Bradin. Halie walked towards him and put her arms around Bradin's neck. " I didn't tell you everything about my love life" said Halie. Bradin then held her around her waist and moved her closer. " Okay, so are you going to tell me?" " Well the only think I want to confess is this…" Halie then stand on her tepee-toes and kissed Bradin intently. Bradin then pulled Halie closer and closer to him. She then wrapped her arms around his neck and continued to kiss Bradin. She wished that their relationship would last as long as their love for each other.
At the house, Nikki came home with Carmon and Amber behind her. She brought her friends to hang out until they had to go home.
Nikki then yelled: Hello is anyone here? No one answered. So she told her friends to sit down and watch a movie. Carmon and Amber then went to the living room and sat at the couch. Nikki closed the door and walked to the kitchen. She opened the fridge and took out, two sodas and a jug of juice. She then poured the juice in a glass and went to the living room.
Nikki handed Amber and Carmon a soda each. " So did you guys choose a movie to watch?" asked Nikki.
Carmon: I think this one's good, I robot. " Um…no way I think the note book is much better then an action movie" argued Amber. " Quiet you guys, I think I could here someone, either crying or moping" interrupted Nikki.
Nikki walked in Bradin's room, she opened the door and checked if anyone was there. When she opened the door there, Jesse was waiting at his crib. " Hey lil fellow" Nikki said with one of her sweetest voice. She then walked towards him. Jesse then pulled out his arms and Nikki picked him up. She then walked out of Bradin's room and walked to the living room.
Amber: OMG, he is so cute, who is he? " It's my brother's friends brother, his name is Jesse Krew" explained Nikki. Carmon then interrupted and said: so what movie are we going to watch, said impatiently.
Then Jesse crawled off Nikki's lap and crawled to Carmon's lap. " Awww, Carmon he likes you," said Nikki. Carmon then picked him up and placed Jesse right beside him. " So what movie do you like better?" questioned Carmon. " Carmon, he's 11 months old it's not like he knows what your saying" respond Nikki. Amber: Exactly agreed Amber. Then Jesse pointed at Sharks tale at the table. Carmon: see, he knows what were saying, but I was hoping he could have chosen I, Robot.
Nikki then took out the disc from the case and put it in the DVD player. Amber then pressed Play on the remote controller. And they started watching Sharks Tale, with Jesse sitting on Carmon's lap.
Halie then broke the kiss and hugged Bradin. Bradin embraced his arms and hugged her tightly. Then he whispered, " Halie, I would never want this to end", " Neither do I" said Halie.
They then walked across the beach and made it to the house. As Halie was about to enter the house, Bradin grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him. " Bradin, what's sup?" said Halie with a confused face. " I want you to have this," Bradin then showed her a blue rose. " OMG Bradin, how did you know I love blue roses?" Bradin: I could tell, cuz you have a great sense of beauty, she gently kissed him and put her arms around him. Bradin then put his hands around Halie's waist and pulled her closer.
All of a sudden, Halie heard people laughing and shouting. She then pushed Bradin and grabbed his arm; they both walked in the house and, Halie saw her parents and everyone else. She came and hugged her dad and mom.
Halie: you guys came home early, OMG, she started to cry, but it was tears of happiness. She missed her parents so much that she hardly noticed that she was crying. " Oh, honey why are you crying?" asked her Father. " I'm crying cause I missed you so much," said Halie as she sobbed at her Father's shoulder.
Bradin then came closer to Aunt Ava and hugged her too. " So how's everything?" Ava asked. " It's going well, nothing bad or anything happened. Halie's been there when I needed your help, say she's you for a few days," replied Bradin. " She's going to be here more and more often." Bradin then had a confessed look on his face, as Ava walked over to Nikki and hugged her.
Halie then approached him with Jesse around her arms. " Hey, what's with the face?" inquired Halie. Bradin: oh nothing. " Looky here, Hey Jesse" Bradin said with a cute and funny voice.
Ava: Bradin do you know where Jay is?
Bradin: sorry, I went out with Halie when we left him with Jesse.
Ava: Nikki?
Nikki: I didn't see him when I came home.
Ava: that's strange; she then shrugged her shoulder and went on with the conversation.
All of sudden, when Bradin told Halie what Ava told her, Jesse suddenly spoke. " Ewica" said Jesse with a cute voice. Halie and Bradin heard him speak; they were surprise that those were Jesse's first words.
Then as Bradin turned and looked where Jesse was pointing at, he saw Erica and Jay together at the backyard door. " Hey what are you looking at?" asked Halie. She then turned and saw Jay with someone. After that everyone GASP and saw them together.
" Hi, guys I'm Back" Erica smiled.
Okay I just want to thank the following ppl for either helping me or inspiring me with their work. Thank-you Lee-tea, Cwayzee, and Jessefan0409. That's all for now anyways. Plz Read and Review, I would appreciate is thanks!
