Incomplete Part of Me
I've decided not to do a thank you this time because I'm not really happy. I only had one review on the last chapter, which really dampens my spirits. I don't know if anyone else is reading it, and if no one is reading then what is the point in writing? If I don't get more reviews on this chapter I might consider discontinuing this story on here. Since I'm not really pleased, I didn't make this chapter long like I said, and I took longer to post this. I'm hoping I'll get more reviews on this part, if not I'm really not sure if I'll keep this up on here. To let you all know, I have started another story, so if you're interested go and read that one. I'll let you know now, I have the next few chapters already written but unless I get a few reviews I'm not sure they will be posted. I hope I'm not sounding selfish; I'd just like to know that people are enjoying my story.
This time on Incomplete Part of Me: Jou and Seto meet up for a romantic dinner, which helps light a few more flames. Jou discovers something he wasn't supposed to on Seto's computer and Seto's condition takes a turn for the worst as he is forced to stay in bed. Things are starting to look like Seto's going to lose this war but wait…looks like someone's right there behind him to do what he can't.
The ride to the restaurant was a long one for Jonouchi. He was so nervous yet excited, his first dinner out with Seto and a fancy one none the less. His ensemble was enough to tell you he wasn't going to McDonalds. His hair was brushed back out of his face, revealing his honey colored eyes. He had a black suit on, the shirt underneath was a dark blue, with a white tie, black shoes completed the look. He'd never been so dressed up in his life and the tie was killing him! His hands fiddled with the tie as he stared out the window at all the huge buildings. 'I hope I don't embarrass you Seto…' He thought looking at all the people walking around the area. Most were dressed all fancy, walking around with such good posture holding their heads up high. Most talked on cell phones or used a palm pilot. As they pulled up in front of a huge fancy French restaurant quilt struck Jou. His mind began to wonder on the topic if he was really the person Seto deserved. He wasn't rich and sophisticated like all the people walking around here.
Walking into the restaurant didn't make Jou feel any better. Everyone was dressed up fancy having sophisticated meals, they looked and acted rich. He felt like an outcast, he wasn't rich or anything, he worked in a grocery store downtown. He was nothing compared to these people. Nothing.
A familiar face caught Jou's attention as he walked through the restaurant. He looked over to see Seto standing up to meet him. Seto was dressed in an all black suit, with a black undershirt and crimson tie that made his eyes brighter then they normally were. "Hello Jonouchi, I hope the right over here was enjoyable." Jou nodded slightly as he sat down at the table with Seto. "It was thank you." He muttered lightly. "What's the matter Jou?" Seto questioned, hearing the sound of anguish and sorrow in Jou's voice. "It's just…I don't feel like I belong here…I'm not rich or anything, I don't belong…" Seto shook his head reaching out and grabbing Jou's hand. "Don't you dare say that again! I love you and that's all that matters, who cares if there people think you don't belong. You're with me, not with them so don't even bother to think about what they think of you, okay pup?"
Jou nodded smiling slightly. He wanted to be happy, for his sake and especially for Seto's sake. He was scared though, the night before at Seto's house he had found something that really scared him. While Seto was sleeping, he had gone into his office to send an email to his sister and was surprised with what he found. He found files containing blue prints to weapons, how to use them, how to make them. Right after he had found them he closed all the files and left the room. He never told Seto about it and didn't intend to, at least not right now. They had barely even begun to have a relationship and Jonouchi didn't want to ruin it because of one stupid thing that he did.
The rest of the evening was pretty much uneventful. Jonouchi tried his hardest to order something but since he almost always skipped French class, it was difficult. Seto had a hoot watching Jou try to order things over and over. Jou was so frustrated he was eventually just going to settle for the snails, until Seto stepped in finally and ordered him something. Of course then Jou refused to talk with him until it came time to order dessert.
When they got back to the mansion it was already ten, and the next day was a school day. (Unfortunately a school day in the words of Jonouchi) Though, neither of them were tired, so they decided to watch a movie, while Seto did some work on his lap top. Seto was walking in the room with the movie and his lap when he collapsed. He claimed he was fined but Jou declared he was to stay in bed. After a few arguments, Seto gave in.
"Jou, I'm fine I swear, you don't need to worry so much." Seto waved off Jou. "Go on and relax downstairs, I'll be fine." Jou sat beside him taking his hand forcing him to look at him. "I know about the terrorists Seto…and before you say anything or get really mad, I want you to know I'm willing to help."
Seto glared at Jou and shook his head. "No way, I'm not letting you help!" Jou smiled softly and squeezed Seto's hand softly. "You can't do this alone Seto...I'm going to make sure we avenge your brother and get that cure for you."
"I don't deserve you…" Seto muttered as he closed his eyes, leaning back to drift off into a light sleep.
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