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dynamic tenshi - Thank you. I don't write for reviews as such. Iwrite to improve my skills, by getting constructive criticism from people like you.
Lyra Sakura - Thank you, but I can't say I've read that book. After finding out what that book is about, I'm a bit surprised by your interpretation. I doubt my story will be anything that disturbing.
mitthu - Thank you for the criticism, good and bad. I left out the punctuation on purpose to emphasize her youth and lack of understanding, so please forgive me. Emotions are indeed a difficulty of mine and I hope to work on it. Please tell me if Ihave made any improvementsin this chapter. I'd be willing to accept any pointers you may have.
Wednesday 27th April 2005
To Tomoyo
I asked today. It wasn't as scary as I imagined it would be. I'm glad. I'll tell you what happened.
I asked Mommy to get me some lunch, because I was hungry. I think she must have forgotten about lunch because her mind was so preoccupied. But that's not important. I got my lunch in the end and I was not hungry any more. After I ate my sandwich I asked Mommy the question. I asked why she wanted to kill Daddy. She had been looking at the thing they call a laptop. They call it that because it sits on the top of your lap. I think it's a very good name for it. It's very easy to remember. Then she turned to look at me. She looked pained. I don't know why. I thought that maybe I had said something bad. Something I shouldn't have said. Something that made her upset. I was really worried. I tried to think of how to make her happy. All I could think of was to be a good little girl. However, before I could react, she said, "You wouldn't understand, honey. Don't worry your pretty little head about it." Well, I thought, if Mommy says so, then I shouldn't think about it. But then again, what if she's still crazy? I get so confused all the time. She then turned back to the laptop and has yet to speak to me again. I need to go now. I'm getting hungry again. Maybe it's dinner time.
Bye Bye
Sakura x
A/N: Thank you for reading my story.
Celestial Secrets -x-
