Chapter 14: Utter disbelief of what's in front of me. part 1

Disclaimer: guess what peoples! Since J.k. is so nice and kind hearted, she decided to let me have Harry potter for thanks giving and an early Christmas gift. IT'S THE BEST GIFT EVER!!! She said that after she publishes the 6th book, she'd let me write the rest of them! NOT!!!!!

If you believed that, you need to see a doctor.

A/n: YAY! THANKSGIVING BREAK!! Today is the 24th so tomorrow is thanksgiving. But I doubt I'll finish typing this super long chapter by today. And anyways, fanfiction is still on read only mode. I'm really happy that I'm updating, like I am every time I update cause the reviews that I get. But sadly I only got 5 reviews last chappie, I don't know why. I hate it when people don't review; it shatters my heart. But I completely understand that school has started for many of us, that includes me, so we don't have that much time for fun stuff anymore. I don't even read anymore unless it's for school. That's why breaks are like heaven to me. Well here are the only 5 review responses.

Christine: hey! I don't see you at school anymore except when I go to my 2nd period class to drop my stuff off and then come back to the cafeteria. Well thanks for reviewing. And I thought I gave you my e-mail address. So if you read this before I see you again, you can just go to my bio, it's there in the first paragraph.

Sacagawea: HIII! WHAT A COWINKY-DINK! I WAS JUST READING YOUR E-MAIL!!!! Anyways...anyways... anyways, I have nothing else to tell you, it's all said in the e-mails. But as soon as I upload this, I'll come up with tons of things to tell you.

Wrath-o-bushyhair: YAY! A new reviewer! It feels like the time when I was getting tons of reviews and everyone was complementing me. But for some reason all those people went bye-bye, and never came back. starts crying

Sassydiva2004: please bare with me, from your reviews it seems like your not really enjoying the fic, which is why I write them; for people to enjoy and to get reviews. So if you think that I can do some things to better the fic, please do give that advice. But if you are really enjoying it, put more "enthusiasm" into your reviews.

OverXposed: I saved the best for last!!! I love reading your reviews, well the few that I have so far. To bad you didn't get to see any cooking, anyways the outcome is this chapter but Draco doesn't get to see till next chappie.

Well here's the chapter!

I picked out one of the many dresses that Rosa had grabbed off a rack. I slipped it on and looked in the mirror.

"Why dear, you absolutely lovely!" The mirror said, and boy was it wrong. I didn't look lovely, I looked AMAZING!!!! " The color of the dress goes perfectly with your eyes and hair." I blushed at this comment even if it was coming from a mirror that was charmed to complement you. The dress was a sweet peachy color, with small golden sparkles all over it. Even if I stood still, it would sparkle like crazy. And it wasn't too fancy or tacky, nor was it too dull or simple. What it was was elegant. Best of all it looked AMAZING on me. I immediately made the choice of picking that one, even if I had 52 more dresses to try on.

"Narcissa?" I called out.

"What is it dear? Have you found a dress?!!" She yelled excitedly.

"Yes" I said, preparing myself for the tourture to come in my near future.

"Well then, come out and model for us sweetheart!!" She yelled. I took a deep breath and stepped out of the stall. "OH-MY-DEAR!!!!!! YOU LOOK LIKE A PRINCESS!!!! THERE AREN'T WORDS TO EXPLAIN!!!.... But...But.... there's one problem."

"What?" I said, clearly shocked from the last bit that came out of her mouth. What could there be wrong!!

" Your hair dear. Your hair." She said closely observing my hair.

"What?! There's noting wrong with my hair!" I yelled, and them looked at the mirror again. She was right; the hair ruined the whole "princess" look. It was like tumbleweed. For once in my life, and never again will this happen; I was concerned about how I looked. " Well, what can we do?"

"Well, I know the perfect place to get your hair and make-up done!" Rosa said excitedly, "Madame Ann's Hair and Make-Up!" As soon as she said those words bad memories of makeover failures flashed through my head. The rainbow highlights, the purple lipstick!! AHHHHH! THE TORTURE!!!

" Um... Are you going to give me highlights?" I asked Rosa, scared.

"Of course not dear! Your hair color is perfect the way it is!" Rosa responded. " Okay ladies, lets not waste anymore time here! We've found the dress! Let's go already!"

I sat there. Wondering why the hell I agreed for this makeover thing. No, I wasn't regretting this. I had some trust in these two completely insane, old, and weird women. Yes, I did. What I am worried about is; WHAT IN THE WORLD THEY WERE DOING TO MY HAIR THIS VERY MOMENT!!! They had me blindfolded and they also covered the mirror so if I peeked I couldn't see. I really hate it when I don't know what going on. Especially when it's on my body.

"Hermione dear! You're all done!" Yelled one of the crazed women. Both of them practically sounded the same. Both of them always says 'dear' and have that sweet-grandma-who-bakes-you-tasty-cookies voice. They took off the blindfold-

A/n: ha-ha! cliffy!! I was gonna put in the whole thing this chapter but I decided not to because I really want to update, and I need to send lewisa the chapter before ya'll because she was the 100th reviewer. So what I'm gonna do is upload this bit, and send the rest to lewisa when I finish typing it. And I didn't put in her review response at the beginning because she didn't review till later so here it is:

Lewisa: I hope you got my e-mail. Well if you read the author's note you should know that you're the 100th reviewer! Well like I said I'm gonna e-mail you the rest of "utter disbelief of what is front of me" and I'll post what I'm sending you as a part 2. I hope this is a clear explanation of what I'm doing, if you don't get it or have a question feel free to e-mail me. You can get my e-mail address from my bio.

after upload A/n: I just read over the chappie, and it's not that great is it? well ya'll should've got it before butI couldn't upload because they were doing something cause the bug. but i promise the next chapter will be waaay better and surley a bit longer. please review!!

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