This chapter has been Re-written and Chapter two will also be re-written and Posted

Introduction

Hello! This is my first fan fiction and I'm not entirely sure what I'm doing so please be kind!

This is going to be my permanent disclaimer that I don't own Harry Potter, J. K. Rowling does soon so forth…

Summary of Story

Lord Voldermort does not have the prophecy but he can start once again to get rid of all muggle-born witches and wizards. He starts by destroying Schools established all over the world for the education of young peoples. And what better place to start then the next generation? The Story comes from the POV of 5 girls who are going to an American witches school. They end up at Hogwarts and meet up with Harry potter. ( I must warn you Harry potter is not the main character here). Basically this is an action-packed story with dragons, dark creatures, and a mild case of Gore. There is no Mary-Sue's or Gary-Stu's. No one is on the run from Lord Voldermort. No one is stronger than Lord Voldermort (except Dumbledore but we all know that, right?). No Girl is beating Harry Potter up, No Character is in a love-hate relationship with Harry Potter. No Slash. Very meek Girl-friend Boy-friend pairings, though they do exist.

By now your probably wondering why I'm telling you what the story is not. This is because I want to Address all the pet peeves of many writers here. I'm trying to write a story that seems…original? Oh and the plot will not entirely form until chapter 2-3 as this chapter is more a Prologue.

The Dawn of Attacks

Aawista's light brown eyes watched in horror as right before her eyes her beloved school, Horizon's Specialty Girls School,went up in smoke. Her long shoulder length greasy black hair flew in all forms of disorder. Her olive colored skin stretched in awe from fear. Her full round lips pulled into a thin line. Her high cheekbones flushed of color. Her small round nose seemed to melt into her face. Her ears pressed to the sides of her head. All of her senses went temporarily void as she remembered how the destruction had come to be.

"We shall be studying the cold fire series of spells for the next week" Ms.MacGregor had said.

"Cold fire? What's cold fire?" Laura had whispered to Lucy.

Lucy had simply shrugged her shoulders but Aawista answered Laura's question, "If you'd done your homework, YOU'D KNOW! Cold fire is a name given to a series of spells th…"

BANG! There had been a loud rumble and shake

Then came the Pandemonium. There were loud screams and continues banging. Ms.MacGregor had dashed to the door. She had barely peeked out the door when suddenly she began screaming "GET OUT! GET OUT! LEAVE! QUICKLY GIRLS! LEAVE BEFORE THEY GET YOU! I'LL HEAD THEM OFF!"

The 16 girls in the room had begun looking around confused. They had not known at that moment how crucial it was that they get out.

Luckily what they didn't know couldn't hurt them. For just outside of their classroom stood two demeantors, three down the hall, and two more in another corner. Horizon's Specialty Girls School was under raid from He-who-must-not-be-named.

Ms.MacGregor looked panic-stricken as she looked around casting any and every spell that had come to her mind. None of her spells had any effect.

A pale whispy white hand cloaked with black reached into the room. The hand firmly grasped Ms.MacGregor around the neck,

The teacher had squealed and squirmed like a piglet, but to no avail.

When the firm hand around her neck had squeezed, her eyes had taken on the appearance of tennis balls being squashed. Her face had become an un-earthly pale white color. Her Hands had tried to loosen the dementors grip on her neck. Blood had oozed out from her nostrils and mouth, as her windpipe was crushed.

Then her body went limp. Her tongue lolled out of her mouth, while her eyes lay twitching. Every one had watched in horror as their teacher was murdered at the Hand of Voldermont.

The hooded figure came gliding into the room, causing even more pandemonium amongst the girls. They screamed and ran in every possible direction.

But there was one girl, Lucy, strong and determined, she charged with all her might at the hooded creature. Her long black hair had been flyingafter her. Her chinese features hadstreched to determination. The wholeskinny 5'6" of her thrust at the dementor.

She had thought quick and had come up with a quick solution.

Lucy had charged and wrestled with the dementor, forcing it to the ground. She had brought out her wand and had done the most deadly spell she could think of.

"AVADA KADAVRA"

The green flash echoed through the halls of the school, but most importantly the spell did away with the dementor.

Lucy had raced out of the room. Aawista had raced after her, with certainty she would be safe with Lucy.

The two girls had raced out of the building in time. For as they had barely stepped out, the building's main structure had come tumbling down.

Aawista felt so illogical, as she stared at the now crumbled building. It felt as if all of everything was a dream, everything was so blurry. The sounds around her were so disoriented, and all over. Aawista keeled over, and then fell to the ground.

Deep into the realm of oblivion.

FIN

P.S if you know the correct spelling for the death curse please tell me! Your help will be appreciated!

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