Hey guys. I was reading over some of my work and I've come to the realization that my punctuation has been horrid and not to mention everything seems to be moving much too fast. The dialogue seems to be cut short like the conversation ends much too soon. And also changing location seems to be a weakness of mine. Well, I'm not going to be bagging on my story too much. But getting to the point, I'm thinking I need someone to edit my chapters before they are posted. So if you are interested just email me at, I just want to say thank you to all of the people who reviewed my lovely stories.

Oh by the way I don't own Harry potter even through he's not in these stories, but I do own the cars… The Magical Munchies, but technically no because that's my magic version of mcdonalds, I own Lana, Elizabeth, Kayla (yet to be announced) the plot, their attitudes and personalities. And like anything else that you never heard of…

I just want to point out before I get any comments regarding this. I am taking a spin on the Lily is unpopular and James is popular. James is the misunderstood loser as are the rest of the marauders. Oh so I've gotten a review saying they aren't feeling Lily and Lana…

Lily- long red hair, tall, pale, emerald eyes, and thin. What I'm going for is an uptight girl who has fun, but not what most people consider fun. Her family is completely rich her father is a highly successful lawyer who is never home, her mother was one of those stay at home please your husband mother. Lily had attended etiquette classes and cotillions, most until she was 11, or on Christmas. She met Lana when she was 11 in Diagon Alley, along with Kayla Lantell. She's materialistic to some point. And like I said before she's nice she just doesn't go out of her way.

Lana- long Blond hair, tall, pale, blue eyes, and thin. Barbie girl. She's a true girly girl. Her father is Minister of magic and her mother died during the delivery of Lana. Lana is very opinionated, she always gets what she wants, and she loves to live eccentrically. She was in etiquette classes but few. She's outgoing and can be really mean at times.

Kayla- Strawberry blond, tall, thin, pale green eyes, pale skin. Fun, outgoing, loud, less of a girly girl. Father is a wealthy doctor also never home. She loves to sing and write. She's very opinionated also. Kayla is the nicest one of all three.

If you have any questions you can, A.) Email me, or B.) Review and I'll respond.

STOP ITS STORY TIME

"We're the last compartment, so we'll be last wont we?" Lily asked whispering.

"Shut up." James whispered.

The door began to rattle and finally it burst open.

Lana jumped hugging Lily and they screamed in union as the door flew open. Where a strawberry blond walked in, face white.

"Chill its just me,"

"KAYLA!" Lily and Lana screamed in union.

"We thought you were a death eater!" Sirius said.

"Yeah well close enough…" she said sarcastically as she locked the door. "It was just a warning, old Voldie has claimed future ownership of hogwarts… Riiiight" She slammed herself down exhausted.

Sirius slid over next to her "Hey, you come here often?"

Kayla looked him up and down and with finality she said "twice a year." Looking over at Lily and Lana, "I was looking for you guys I had to physically jump on this thing. I came like 1 minute late. And I'm so sorry I couldn't get to the hospital Lil. My dad was at work!"

"It's alright Kayla. She's in stable condition. I just cant wait until we get to school." Lily yawned. "I am so tired."

"Aren't we all." Lana said. Kayla nodded and looking around she asked

"So who are these guys."

"Sirius Black"

"Remus lupin"

"James Potter."

"Oh, you are those guys who prank snape all the time. The little bastard."

Sirius clapped his hands together. "That would be us!"

Hey I think im just going to keep chapters short so I don't get discouraged. I'll have an average of 2 a day..