If you guys go to my website (which you probably don't) and read my updates
(which you also probably don't or will ever since you people actually have
lives unlike me . . .) or if you read my other active story 'No Sanity
Allowed' then you'll know that the writing style of this story is changing
in this chapter! YAY!!!
Well it's not a HUGE change or anything . . . people just actually talk! ^__^ I was planning the writing style to be this way but somewhere along the lines I forgot and never bothered to change it -_-; I've mentioned many times before that I'm lazy right? Right, so then, when the story ends (don't know when or how . . .) the first 4 chapters will be re-written and posted at the end because I've learned from experience that when I replace the chapters everything gets messed up (story format, chapter placing etc.). That's how the wind blows kiddies! So when the story ends there will still be an addition of 4 chapters at the end . . . it'll be better!!!
Just smile and nod . . . ^__^
Sparklypiggy: Uuuugggghhhhhhhhh . . . too . . . lazy . . . to say where the author bashing is . . . you want to get bashed? Here ya go!
Marik: I HATE YOU! YOU EVIL MAN! DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOODDD!
There! Now everyone is happy ^__^ Is Kiya and O.C.? Because I don't like O.C.s. that much since imagining how they look like and stuff takes loads on my poor sad tiny brain =( Pigs like cheese? Well pigs like everything, they ARE pigs!
Goddess-Of-Anime: Hey you changed your name slightly! I notice these little things . . . Hey saying that you are too lazy to write it out makes you type more than if you do write it out . . . if you know what I mean . . . which you probably don't . . . Ryou looks fat?? -_-; Well he should get some more meat in him! I've read SO many fics about him being to skinny! How can it be a shame that he's going insane because he's insane?!?! 1300 hours . . . there's 24 hours in a day so . . . I have to write it in . . . 54.166666666666666666666666666667 days. I used my calculator =P Well I updated a BIT earlier is that okay? Or should the next time update I'll do it in a bit under 2 months?
Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru: Funny, I'm not good at cheering people up but I did before sometimes by making jokes that makes no sense . . . I make no sense . . . I make no good jokes =(
Nimi: REALLY? YOU REALLY WATCH THAT?!?!?! I don't like watching any soap operas! I'd rather watch a sappy romance!! *Starts chocking* Wait, they're nearly the same!!! -_-;
Ryou Bakura Obsessor: I had to use the dictionary to find out wait 'maim' means and now I am very afraid of you.
Azulfire5: I think I said why I decided to write this fic in the first chapter . . . I'm too lazy to check or remember though
BakaNeko-Chan: Glad you like my writing style . . . but I'm changing it!!! Hope you'll like it better . . . it's easier to write with this style!
Other people that reviewed:
RainOwl
Nerva al'Thor
Life's Light/anime*angel
Uh, I don't know how I got the idea for this chapter. I had it when I was playing a game about leaves. Yes, leaves. I HAVE A 4 YEAR OLD SISITER OKAY! I use her as an excuse for all my child-like actions. She sets a bad example fore her older sister darkshadow-23. *Nods*
Also there is Tea/Anzu bashing. Because in the 'Shadow Realm' Arc (Or Noa's Ark since that's what many call it in the Japanese version . . . Noa's Ark, like the bible story 'Noah's Ark'! I've seen it on a cartoon . . . *is not catholic or religious in even her nationality*) she was so annoying I wanted to throw her into a blender and kill her good. I could 'maim' her if she annoys me any longer.
Disclaimer: Poor darkshaow-23 doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh! She doesn't own 'Passions' either and doesn't even watch it so all the events are completely made up by her feeble brain. Spare her, for she is innocent of all these crimes.
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Na, na, na, na, na, NA!
I just love the sound of salsa music!
I'm at Marik's house right now and Isis just HAD to make us watch that show again. Yes Lloyd, 'Passions'.
She practically forced us down on the couch! Here she comes now.
"Ugh! I can't believe you two are still watching that stupid show! My documentary on the Egyptian exhibit is on the 3 minutes!!!"
And with that she stormed out to buy us chocolate sundaes for being very nice people.
I'm not escaping from the terror on this show just because the people one this is learning to dance 'salsa'.
Yes, salsa! My true calling! One day I will go to wherever the hell salsa was invented and dance the dance of all dances. Salsa.
~
I'm back at Ryou's house now. Since I live there. So it's kind of like my house. Except all I do is annoy Ryou, eat, sleep, watch 'television' and other meaningful things.
It's quiet . . . too quiet . . .
I quickly run up to Ryou's room. I'm not scared of being alone in a house that seems to echo when you think. Not at all.
I sense evil. I run into Ryou's room and . . .
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
I'm too late! It's over! HE'S GONE FOR EVER! THE DARKNESS HAS TAKEN HIM!!!!
On Ryou's neatly folded bed I find - a leaf.
Yes, a leaf.
Ryou always loved leaves, *sniff* once in the middle of fall he told me when he was younger he always wanted to be a leaf . . .
Okay, maybe he didn't I'm just making this up. But he could have! I don't listen to him anymore.
Oh well. I've done my best to save him. His dream of becoming a leaf has come true . . .
Well yes, I made up the Ryou-wanting-to-become-a-leaf thing but he COULD have wanted to be a leaf right?
Who would want to be a leaf anyways? You'll just rot and die before winter comes anyways.
I'm happy Ryou fulfilled his dream I made up for him and everything, but what about ME? The most important person in this thing? I need food! I need salsa! Both of them. I NEED lessons! I NEED to eat salsa!
He fulfilled his dream! It's only right I fulfill mine! I MUST BECOME THE BEST SALSA DANCER AND EATER EVER!!!!
LOOK OUT WORLD! HERE I COME!!!!
. . .
Shut up Lloyd.
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I must somehow achieve my gaol. Ryou or no Ryou. He is supporting me in spirit, I know it. Even though he denies his love for salsa I know deep down he want to become a salsa dancer/eater also! I will fulfill that dream for the both of us!!!
I vaguely remember that annoying little friend of the Pharaoh's slave . . . Yes! The dancer! The annoying little a-hole will teach me the true art of salsa! Then, I shall kill her.
So she's taller than me, I don't give a shit.
On the 'telephone' it has the Slave's name on it. That 'speed-dial' Ryou told me about. Lazy Ryou not wanting to press a couple of buttons . . . but this is good for me since I don't know his 'phone number'.
"Hello! Yugi speaking!"
Stupid, perky little brat . . . Wait! As naïve as the kid is he would never tell me the where the girl is . . .
"Why hello Yugi! This . . . Ryou . . . Yes . . . That's me, Ryou . . ."
"Ryou? ^__^ Oh hi! What's up? ^__^"
Mustn't kill him . . . need information first . . .
"I'm in quite a dilemma Yugi, Tea and I are partners in a . . . school project and I forgot where she lives! Can you possibly help me?"
"Oh, yeah, wait I need to get my address book."
The British accent never fails me! ^__^
"MUHAHAHAHHAHAHAA! Thank you, you naïve little fool! I'll be sure that you'll never see your little dancer friend ever again! Except in a giant blender of course! :)"
"O_O YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Oh crap!"
I quickly slam the 'receiver' down.
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Ryou is a leaf. I had another idea about Ryou being a leaf for a different story but then, at the time, I had 3 stories going on and I never really written it down . . . maybe a one-shot? Or somehow fit it in a part of 'No Sanity Allowed'? We'll see. I can't make a new fic now! I need to work on the sequel to 'Seto's in Trouble' after I find a suitable title for it! Any ideas?
The ending is KIND of a cliff hanger . . . Something is going to happen along the way to Tea's house! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'll leave you to guess what will happen! Hint: It's something to do with Lloyd! Tea would probably not be mentioned a lot since I don't like her and she shouldn't play an important or even semi important part in my fic.
Should Tea die? Get sent to the Shadow Realm? Get maimed by Ryou Bakura Obsessor by accident while she was trying to maim poor little darkshadow- 23? You guys give me some ideas! And the best idea(s) will be added into the next chapter (or maybe even future chapters) and maybe you'll even get into the fic! I have a tendency to force reviewers into my fics because I'm too lazy to make up random people. I make up too many random people.
O_O!!! I've looked back into some past chapters and noticed that the first 3 chapters where # 9 Verdana font! I usually use # 10!!! So it's actually 5 pages not 4! I'VE BEEN WRITING MORE BEFORE!!!! *Is scared* Now I'm writing about the same . . . Five pages in this chapter also! ^__^
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\/ *in a bad British accent* Oh, review please! *Ryou eyes*
Well it's not a HUGE change or anything . . . people just actually talk! ^__^ I was planning the writing style to be this way but somewhere along the lines I forgot and never bothered to change it -_-; I've mentioned many times before that I'm lazy right? Right, so then, when the story ends (don't know when or how . . .) the first 4 chapters will be re-written and posted at the end because I've learned from experience that when I replace the chapters everything gets messed up (story format, chapter placing etc.). That's how the wind blows kiddies! So when the story ends there will still be an addition of 4 chapters at the end . . . it'll be better!!!
Just smile and nod . . . ^__^
Sparklypiggy: Uuuugggghhhhhhhhh . . . too . . . lazy . . . to say where the author bashing is . . . you want to get bashed? Here ya go!
Marik: I HATE YOU! YOU EVIL MAN! DDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOODDD!
There! Now everyone is happy ^__^ Is Kiya and O.C.? Because I don't like O.C.s. that much since imagining how they look like and stuff takes loads on my poor sad tiny brain =( Pigs like cheese? Well pigs like everything, they ARE pigs!
Goddess-Of-Anime: Hey you changed your name slightly! I notice these little things . . . Hey saying that you are too lazy to write it out makes you type more than if you do write it out . . . if you know what I mean . . . which you probably don't . . . Ryou looks fat?? -_-; Well he should get some more meat in him! I've read SO many fics about him being to skinny! How can it be a shame that he's going insane because he's insane?!?! 1300 hours . . . there's 24 hours in a day so . . . I have to write it in . . . 54.166666666666666666666666666667 days. I used my calculator =P Well I updated a BIT earlier is that okay? Or should the next time update I'll do it in a bit under 2 months?
Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru: Funny, I'm not good at cheering people up but I did before sometimes by making jokes that makes no sense . . . I make no sense . . . I make no good jokes =(
Nimi: REALLY? YOU REALLY WATCH THAT?!?!?! I don't like watching any soap operas! I'd rather watch a sappy romance!! *Starts chocking* Wait, they're nearly the same!!! -_-;
Ryou Bakura Obsessor: I had to use the dictionary to find out wait 'maim' means and now I am very afraid of you.
Azulfire5: I think I said why I decided to write this fic in the first chapter . . . I'm too lazy to check or remember though
BakaNeko-Chan: Glad you like my writing style . . . but I'm changing it!!! Hope you'll like it better . . . it's easier to write with this style!
Other people that reviewed:
RainOwl
Nerva al'Thor
Life's Light/anime*angel
Uh, I don't know how I got the idea for this chapter. I had it when I was playing a game about leaves. Yes, leaves. I HAVE A 4 YEAR OLD SISITER OKAY! I use her as an excuse for all my child-like actions. She sets a bad example fore her older sister darkshadow-23. *Nods*
Also there is Tea/Anzu bashing. Because in the 'Shadow Realm' Arc (Or Noa's Ark since that's what many call it in the Japanese version . . . Noa's Ark, like the bible story 'Noah's Ark'! I've seen it on a cartoon . . . *is not catholic or religious in even her nationality*) she was so annoying I wanted to throw her into a blender and kill her good. I could 'maim' her if she annoys me any longer.
Disclaimer: Poor darkshaow-23 doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh! She doesn't own 'Passions' either and doesn't even watch it so all the events are completely made up by her feeble brain. Spare her, for she is innocent of all these crimes.
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Na, na, na, na, na, NA!
I just love the sound of salsa music!
I'm at Marik's house right now and Isis just HAD to make us watch that show again. Yes Lloyd, 'Passions'.
She practically forced us down on the couch! Here she comes now.
"Ugh! I can't believe you two are still watching that stupid show! My documentary on the Egyptian exhibit is on the 3 minutes!!!"
And with that she stormed out to buy us chocolate sundaes for being very nice people.
I'm not escaping from the terror on this show just because the people one this is learning to dance 'salsa'.
Yes, salsa! My true calling! One day I will go to wherever the hell salsa was invented and dance the dance of all dances. Salsa.
~
I'm back at Ryou's house now. Since I live there. So it's kind of like my house. Except all I do is annoy Ryou, eat, sleep, watch 'television' and other meaningful things.
It's quiet . . . too quiet . . .
I quickly run up to Ryou's room. I'm not scared of being alone in a house that seems to echo when you think. Not at all.
I sense evil. I run into Ryou's room and . . .
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
I'm too late! It's over! HE'S GONE FOR EVER! THE DARKNESS HAS TAKEN HIM!!!!
On Ryou's neatly folded bed I find - a leaf.
Yes, a leaf.
Ryou always loved leaves, *sniff* once in the middle of fall he told me when he was younger he always wanted to be a leaf . . .
Okay, maybe he didn't I'm just making this up. But he could have! I don't listen to him anymore.
Oh well. I've done my best to save him. His dream of becoming a leaf has come true . . .
Well yes, I made up the Ryou-wanting-to-become-a-leaf thing but he COULD have wanted to be a leaf right?
Who would want to be a leaf anyways? You'll just rot and die before winter comes anyways.
I'm happy Ryou fulfilled his dream I made up for him and everything, but what about ME? The most important person in this thing? I need food! I need salsa! Both of them. I NEED lessons! I NEED to eat salsa!
He fulfilled his dream! It's only right I fulfill mine! I MUST BECOME THE BEST SALSA DANCER AND EATER EVER!!!!
LOOK OUT WORLD! HERE I COME!!!!
. . .
Shut up Lloyd.
~
I must somehow achieve my gaol. Ryou or no Ryou. He is supporting me in spirit, I know it. Even though he denies his love for salsa I know deep down he want to become a salsa dancer/eater also! I will fulfill that dream for the both of us!!!
I vaguely remember that annoying little friend of the Pharaoh's slave . . . Yes! The dancer! The annoying little a-hole will teach me the true art of salsa! Then, I shall kill her.
So she's taller than me, I don't give a shit.
On the 'telephone' it has the Slave's name on it. That 'speed-dial' Ryou told me about. Lazy Ryou not wanting to press a couple of buttons . . . but this is good for me since I don't know his 'phone number'.
"Hello! Yugi speaking!"
Stupid, perky little brat . . . Wait! As naïve as the kid is he would never tell me the where the girl is . . .
"Why hello Yugi! This . . . Ryou . . . Yes . . . That's me, Ryou . . ."
"Ryou? ^__^ Oh hi! What's up? ^__^"
Mustn't kill him . . . need information first . . .
"I'm in quite a dilemma Yugi, Tea and I are partners in a . . . school project and I forgot where she lives! Can you possibly help me?"
"Oh, yeah, wait I need to get my address book."
The British accent never fails me! ^__^
"MUHAHAHAHHAHAHAA! Thank you, you naïve little fool! I'll be sure that you'll never see your little dancer friend ever again! Except in a giant blender of course! :)"
"O_O YYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Oh crap!"
I quickly slam the 'receiver' down.
~
Ryou is a leaf. I had another idea about Ryou being a leaf for a different story but then, at the time, I had 3 stories going on and I never really written it down . . . maybe a one-shot? Or somehow fit it in a part of 'No Sanity Allowed'? We'll see. I can't make a new fic now! I need to work on the sequel to 'Seto's in Trouble' after I find a suitable title for it! Any ideas?
The ending is KIND of a cliff hanger . . . Something is going to happen along the way to Tea's house! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'll leave you to guess what will happen! Hint: It's something to do with Lloyd! Tea would probably not be mentioned a lot since I don't like her and she shouldn't play an important or even semi important part in my fic.
Should Tea die? Get sent to the Shadow Realm? Get maimed by Ryou Bakura Obsessor by accident while she was trying to maim poor little darkshadow- 23? You guys give me some ideas! And the best idea(s) will be added into the next chapter (or maybe even future chapters) and maybe you'll even get into the fic! I have a tendency to force reviewers into my fics because I'm too lazy to make up random people. I make up too many random people.
O_O!!! I've looked back into some past chapters and noticed that the first 3 chapters where # 9 Verdana font! I usually use # 10!!! So it's actually 5 pages not 4! I'VE BEEN WRITING MORE BEFORE!!!! *Is scared* Now I'm writing about the same . . . Five pages in this chapter also! ^__^
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\/ *in a bad British accent* Oh, review please! *Ryou eyes*