This is a two part series of poems based on the question of Ozai and Iroh's relationship as children. One theory from the brilliant Firebend is that they hated each other from birth. They were constant rivels and never knew a time of trust and happiness. In Firebend's honor, here is Iroh describing the relationship in his own words. Read and review! This is also going out to Witty and to everyone else who reviewed my other stories. I really would love to respond to you at length each here, but I just keep saying the same thing, thank you.
So, Angelic Nitemare (the great Zuko writer and all around cool person)
Eartheart (nice person who emailed me),
Everto the speechless but wonderful,
Thekritic (mydear editor),
the good Grasshopper who gave me the chance to interpret a scene,
Zukosflame whose wonderful and appreciated compliments go straight to my head,
Cala, who gave up the hatred of rhymes for me and whose amazing review brightened a bad day.
So happy you liked them all and found them in character. I hope you read the Sokka poem. Messiah, I will keep writing poetry and your review was so kind, I lift my hat to you for taking the time to do so. Iroh's poem is one of my favorites and was so much fun to write. And last but definitely not least, Sapphire, your review is one that I look at when I had a bad day and don't feel like writing. Hope you get your Avatar back! To all of you, I hope you enjoy this poem and thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Toys
Do you remember the wooden doll?
Mother had given to me one day
The moment you saw it, you screamed
"It's mine, I'm older, let me play"
I knew you had better toys
But you'd always take a shine
To something you couldn't have
Something that was mine
You were the prince, the heir
I know they'd let you win
The nurse made me give it
And you took it with a grin
Then a flick of your wrist
As the doll was set aflame
You wanted to make sure
I'd never enjoy my toy again
I watched the painted face melt
And sadly turned my head
If I showed weakness
I'd be blamed instead
Father made us compete
For his love we would vie
You hated me because I gave up
Unlike you, I'd never try
So anything that I loved
You just have to destroy
Now the game is Fatherhood
And Zuko is your toy
Each day you break his heart
And you know it hurts my soul
To watch him yearn for your love
As pain consumes him whole
He's just another object I want
So you'll destroy him like the rest
I watched as you scare him
And flung him from the nest
But this toy won't just break
I'll keep him right on track
A bully like you should beware
This toy will soon fight back!
