I promise to put a little interaction in this chapter. Note: I will not keep posting a disclaimer, as I don't like typing it over and over and over and over again, if ya get my drift… anyway, hope you like this chapter! And I will post a review response at the bottom, so you people who like to review (a.k.a. SKSuncloud, and FoxofRoses!) will get a chance to see a reply (finally…) for your questions, if any. So, please read and review peoples!
"Hiei, you're right. I wouldn't be betraying her, because we never really went heart and soul for each other. She may have, but I didn't." He stood up and hugged me tightly. (Roses… …he… smells… like… roses… damn hormones!) The top of my head stopped at his chin, and there was quite a LARGE area where there was just his lightly tanned bare chest. He held me close to his body, as if not wanting to let me go. I tried to pull away as I heard the door open. (God do I just want to disappear right now… but I cant… he's just too hot to leave…damn ningen emotions, damn youkai hormones! Damnit!) My fox just turned his head to the portal and smiled at the person standing there.
"Umm, Kurama-sama, what are you doing?" the demon asked. (Kurama-sama? What the hell!) I couldn't see what she looked like, (and I don't think Kurama wants me too…) so I just put my arms around the fox's slim waist.
"I didn't know you were stopping by today, Ty," he stated calmly. (Good, he had his cool back… and it's Ty? No wonder he doesn't want me to look…) "I'm giving consolation to a friend… is there something wrong?"
"Um…" she said, "yeah, I mean, no… we have another mission that Hiei was supposed to tell you about, but I'm assuming he forgot… So, what's wrong Hiei? Did something happen to you?" (Onna ko no baka…) I just said, "…hn…" at her question and pulled my fox closer to me. (I feel like an idiot… but it's how I feel… he is so warm… I just want to stay like this forever… well, maybe not, but it's a start…) I buried my head further against his soft skin. My face turned red as she put her hand on my shoulder. (onna ko no baka, onna ko no baka, onna ko no baka!) I turned my head away from her, and my Jagan automatically started to read her thoughts…
What are they doing? Why did Hiei come to Kurama instead of Anasi? She's the person he usually goes to… Why can I smell Hiei on Kurama besides the fact that they are HUGGING?
(Onna ko no baka, she forgets that I can read her thoughts… and she doesn't even put up a barrier! I am so evil…)
T.K.: So, how did you like it?
Kurama: I think it is very well written. What about you Hiei?
Hiei: Onna ko no baka… I still don't like you T.K. …
T.K.: Uh, heh, you know that I didn't mean it…(sweatdrops and starts to back away) come on… I was just messing with you…
Hiei: Hn…(forgets T.K. and turns to Kurama and kisses him)
Kurama: (stunned) What was that for?
Hiei: Nothing… (Kisses him again) Because I love you…
Kurama: Oh, well, if that's the case… (Starts to make out with Hiei)
T.K.: Uh, guys, uh, remember that I'm still here… OH, SWEET INARI, MY EYES! (Runs around as if blinded) AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
Hiei: (pulls away) 'Scuse me koi, must go take care of the distraction…(pulls out katana and catches T.K.) WILL YOU SHUT THE HELL UP BEFORE I GUT YOU!
T.K.: Well, if you kill me, then I won't be able finish the story and you won't be able to love Kurama anymore…(smirks evilly)
Hiei: Good point, but I have something else…(whips out package full of items and pictures that cannot be described at the moment) I have all your secrets… I even have a document in here that has your real name on it…
T.K.: (sweatdrops) NOOOOOOOOO! I'll be a good fox I swear! (Turns into chibi fox and hides in corner and finishes story)
Hiei: (returns to Kurama) Now, where were we?
Review Response(s):
SKSuncloud:WOW! OMG! You must go on! Please! It was really good so far! . I loved your little interaction at the bottom. It made my night! . Very nice! Add! Add quickly!
Response: I'm writing as fast as I can. Sometimes I can't get a spike (I call my moments of inspiration "spikes") big enough to write enough for one chapter. I'm sorry that some of my chapters are so short, but I had originally intended for this to just be a short little thing I was doing for fun (which I still am, but I'm making it bigger than I had wanted it to be, for the sake of good reviews) I recently had a major spike for chapter 5, so I wrote that, but I'm trying to get another for chapter 6, so I will hopefully get one soon (the boredom is killing me. Whenever I have spare time I sit and think about what to write, but lately I couldn't think of anything and I'm getting really bored). And, I'm glad that you liked the interaction I put. I'm quite good at role-playing with Hiei and Kurama, seeing as I know their personalities best, so I like to rp with them the most. I am also fairly good with Yusuke, Koenma, and Kuwabara.
FoxofRoses: 3 reviews, thank you for the idea! Of course, I still have to wait for 10. I like your story! Thanks again!
Response: Just curious, but what is the idea I gave you? I'm glad that you got 3reviews already (it took me 3 chapters to get that many lol). I just upload at the request of a reviewer, seeing as I don't think I'll get enough to actually update anytime soon. Also, I don't like to wait, so if someone asks me to update, I update, because I think that the people who do read it have to wait for someone who is a little late on the uptake. Well, it is very pleasing to hear that someone appreciates my work. My friends often inform me that my writing is the best in the world, but I don't really agree with them. I do think my work is good, but I know there are many more things that I could do to improve them. Also, a writer by the name of Mr. Dahl (I can't remember how to spell his first name… heh…) said that if a writer thinks that his or her work is the best in the world, that writer is in trouble. So I like to follow that little "guideline."
SKSuncloud: Wow…so many emotions... I love it! Continue!
Response: I'm glad to hear that you like my story. I hope you enjoy it even more now that I've finally got my plot figured out so I can write it a little easier. And don't worry, I will continue until the end and beyond!
