Hi again! Thanks to all my reviewers. I've received some saying that my writing is kind of like poetry… The format is I guess but I never really thought of it as poetry. It's never been pointed out to me. Wow… It makes me feel in-depth.

The style I'm trying to capture is not really that of poetry, but the way humans think. The lines are small bits of text or broken thoughts because that's the way people think. (Or most do, I'm guessing.) It's more like a trip through the mind of the characters… or that's what I'm trying to create. But poetry is cool too.

Well…This is one I've been brainstorming and then… Bang! It hits me! So here it is…

Character-Ganondorf

Setting- Ganondorf is sitting in his throne room. He is waiting for his troops to return with the rebellious youth he ordered them to capture. He has heard much about the 'Hero' Link who seeks to end his rule and will not tolerate him anymore.

A New Lieutenant

I sit and stare at the door.

It's been two whole days now.

Where are they?

How long does it take them to capture one kid?

Imbeciles.

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This kid…

Link…

He's been around too long.

He should be dead by now.

There's something… about him.

I don't know what it is.

But I can't let him just walk around with it.

I know what he plans to do.

He wants to get rid of me.

I'll just have to get rid of him first.

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I roll my fingers on the arm of my chair.

I look up to the ceiling.

The huge vault stretches upwards and out of sight.

I sigh.

This bores me.

They better come back soon or I'll kill them.

Really.

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I pound my fist on the armrest.

My Lieutenant flinches slightly.

He regains himself and stands still by the side of me.

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The mammoth door at the far end of the hall opens.

I stand up.

I look to see who it is.

It's my Captain…

The Captain of the troops I sent out.

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"Ah Captain." I greet him, "Do you have the body? Where are the rest of the troops? "

The Captain sways and staggers forward.

He's gripping his chest.

"Dead." He wheezes

He falls down face first.

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He has five arrows protruding from his body.

What?

Did that boy do this?!?

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My Lieutenant runs forward to the Captain.

He puts a hand to his neck.

"He's dead, Sir." He tells me.

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Dead?

Right then…

That's it.

I had enough of this Link kid.

I've sent out twenty soldiers

And they're all dead now.

He has to die now.

He's too much of a threat to some of my weaker establishments.

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"Lieutenant!" I order him.

He comes to my side and bows.

"Send out the ReDeads." I tell him.

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He hesitates.

"Sir… Don't you think it's a little bit drastic? We should send out some more troops."

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I glare at him.

"No. I won't have it. He must die now. He's already defeated my phantom and the little surprise I set out for him under the lake. Now he's killed some twenty of my men. Send out my ReDeads!"

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"I really must object, Sir. It seems pointless really. Why waste their talents on this boy? I really think you should just-"

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"I do not keep you around to defy me! You shall do as I say. Send out the ReDeads!" I cry.

Honestly,

Can anyone in this hall listen?

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"But… but my Liege, you must understand… He is only one man. What can one man do?"

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"This." I say.

I've had enough.

What can one man do?!?

I'll show him.

I put my hand on my sword hilt.

I swing round and draw my blade.

It connects with his neck.

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His body slumps down to the floor.

His head rolls over by my foot.

I kick it across the hall.

It hits the door and lands with a thunk.

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I point randomly to the small crowd around my throne.

"You! Come!"

One man emerges from the group slowly.

I beckon him closer.

He comes.

He stands next to me and bows.

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"Yes my Lord?" He asks.

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I bend down to the body of my former Lieutenant.

I rip of the small medal off his chest.

It's covered in his blood.

I hand it to the man.

"You are my new Lieutenant. Now, send out the ReDeads."

He nods and runs off.

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"Someone clear up this damn mess." I say.

I point down to the bloody mass of my late Lieutenant.

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I hope my new Lieutenant lasts longer than the old one.

I'm getting sick of people not respecting my decisions.

They don't get it.

This kid, Link, is more trouble then he's letting on.

I have to get rid of him now…

Like I should have done all those years ago.

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I'll get him though…

Even if I have to kill him myself.

Well, that's it. I actually really like this story. I think it's different. Hope you like it too. Review! Bye for now.