Surprise

(Okay thanks to everyone for reviewing I have tried to respond to them all and I hope you like this instalment).

Disclaimer: Put the spoon down and we'll talk.

I'll put the spoon down when I own Doctor Who.

Well this is a supermarket so we can't sell you that.

Darn, well as you can guess I still don't own Doctor who but it has brought up a question, why are supermarkets called super if they can't sell you everything you want?

Rose blinked as he light hit her eyes. The Doctor's worried face came into view.

"Eugh, what happened?" She asked her throat was extremely sore. He raised an eyebrow as she chocked the words out.

"I showed you the house and you fainted, lassie." He told her. Rose found herself wanting to hug him for having such a cute Scottish accent. She nodded before taking the hand he offered her and getting up slowly.

"You really mean this house is mine, that I know own a house? How much did you put me in debt?" she watched him closely she was worried that he hadn't thought about everything they would need for the baby, not to mention that they needed food.

"The deed is in your name and it didn't cost you anything, although UNIT will probably be upset I hacked into their accounting system to pull in a few favours they owe in the form of 2million pounds." He answered casually, as though it was the most obvious thing in the world. Rose smiled despite herself, he still seemed the same as before and she had to admit it, his accent was just so… so… cute it was the only way to describe it.

The Doctor noticed Rose was smiling mainly in his direction and quite broadly.

"Lassie would you care to explain why you're looking at me like that?" he asked carefully. She started giggling he was so cute yet she knew he was way to old to be that cute legally, there had to be some rule against it somewhere. She grabbed his hand shaking her head. Before dragging him up the path to the house.

"SURPRISE!" the masses of voices chorused as the Doctor and Rose entered the house. Rose noticed the Doctor smiling she recognised a few of them, a few UNIT officers but mainly people who had travelled with the Doctor.

"I hope you don't mind Rose, but we didn't know who you'd want to invite, so we decided to give you the chance to hear all the Doctor's embarrassing stories." an old man, whom she recognised as the brigadier said. She smiled nodding her head.

"Well as long as the doctor becomes embarrassed." She said watching the extremely worried look that was now covering his entire face.

(Well I have been waiting for a chance to stay up till some obscure time that I thought never existed whilst drinking copious amounts of caffeine.)

Interstella: I will I'm hoping to get a whole lot of twists spread over the story glad they seem to work.

Sarah: When do you want to get under way with the take over?

Timemistress42: I won't stop writing; nice to know you love it. The Doctor's acting drunk because he is extremely happy as he loves Rose but you already knew that.

Talia Rose: I know everyone has trouble with it and I can't write differently because it makes the most sense to me in this format. Below is a quick summary about what happened in the room I may at a later date do it in full format as a one-shot pre-quell we'll see.

Rose and the Doctor have arrived on a strange planet. When introducing themselves the Tam-uri (the planets population, who are roughly 8ft11 tall grey/white skin and a trunk like an elephant but longer.) two guards of garf grabbed them from behind pushing hands, which held a small gland producing a type of knock out gas. When they had woken up they were in a large, blue room, which however had no windows, or doors and the walls were perfectly smooth. In the centre was a large pedestal, which held a small almost, gun like device. Rose rushed over despite the Doctor's warnings, whilst he moved quickly round the room trying to find fault in the walls surface. Rose picked up the device finding it extremely light, as her fingers fully grasped it a laser shot flew out before hitting the Doctor and then retreating back to the device. A faint outline of a door had appeared on the wall to the Doctor's right. A shot identical to the first flew out and hit rose this time however it didn't retreat like the first. The Door opened and the Tam-uri walked forward with the two guards before dragging them back to the tardis and telling them both not to return.