Yoooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuu guys are the beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeest! I never have felt sooooooooooo alive! Anyway, thank you all for reviewing this fanfiction. I really had lots of great fun with it, writing it and all.
Still, no flamers who flame people with senseless flames have been attacking me. This is getting really boring. I am really expecting them to come around like mobs, and shrieking and shouting protests like fangirls… but (sigh) they never came. BET they're scared. Ha! They dare flame people when they cannot attack ME!
I realized, (thanks a bunch to Yuki!) that this fic really needs a lot of tune up. And Sasuke and Sakura, is totally out of character. Please note that! Thank you. I'll try my best to improve this fic.
Again, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS are appreciated very much.
Sasuke: Are you done now?
Me: Uhm… yeah, I think so.
Sasuke: then go hide in a corner and shut up.
Me: HEY! Who are you to order around an inspired author!
Sasuke: I'm an extremely pretty boy with the strength of all you morons combined and I don't smell like stinking cabbage. And I'm smarter than you.
Me: yeah right. And don't forget, you're also live impersonation of moronic capabilities.
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I am so in a good mood today!
Trigemini- I know, it's not really realistic for Sasuke to turn beet red. But because I love torturing him, and that because I had the power over him right now, (Sasuke: LIES, LIES! ALL LIES!) I managed to get him to do that! Blushing makes Sasuke look pathetic. And cute, I guess. BUT MORE PATHETIC! Haha! Indeed, his life is in total chaos. AND I LOVE IT! Thanks for the review!
Sasusakuforeva-Ilovesasuke- UUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMM… I don't really fantasize much about Sasuke, I'm just like a normal girl, with normal life, who is slightly amused of a bishounen called Uchiha Sasuke! But, I don't really fall for him like, " OH MY GAWD, THAT'S SASUKE AT THE TV! OUT OF THE COUCH, SHRIMP!" and, to speak the truth, I like—no, LOVE torturing the human ice block rather than swoon over his dangerously pretty face! Don't be lost, here's a MAP! O-o;; Thanks for reviewing!
Iluvsasuke- OOOOOOHHHHHHH, another Sasuke-fan major! Nice! Yep, I usually do that… does that make me really weird? O-o;; And oh, what does ROFG mean? Confused person in her(points to self) (Confucius: HA! You call yourself confused? Your name doesn'r even start with 'c'!) thanks for reviewing!
MizzLala- OOOOOHHHHH MMMYYYYYYY GOD! I am so thankful! I never thought this story could be thrown to any fave list! Thank you so much! And you hate flamers! (angry spirit: angel, get a hold of yourself. You're going crazy. Me: no I'm not! I'm excited! Angry spirit: yeah right.) I had fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun writing this too! Thank you!
AnimeSenko- YAY! I love carrie! She rocks the world like an intensity 12 earthquake! Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh, there are many surprises in here! I'm sure you will be really shocked like 'OH GOD I'M REALLY SHOCKED!' I'm not really sure if Sakura will become a ninja, but as the being she is, it's either Sasuke orders her to be one, other than that, she just stays as a genie. But the rest of the Naruto cast are. They are totally jounins/chuunins in there!
BlueMarina- you watch 'I dream of Jeanie' too! I love it! I so adore it with all of my life! And Jeanie is as clueless as Sakura in here (I least I think so). As a matter of fact… well, the later chapters are treading on the same road as your suggeston. Maybe… but with a twist. I absolutely had the grandest time with writing this! thanks for your review!
Unknown- hey! Thanks for your review! I agree, genies are really nice characters in movies and books, but it seemed like people are taking more interests on something else… thanks again!
Yuki- I personally thank you for that review you gave me. Because of that, I managed to see all those mistakes I made! I appreciate your help, and it really did help me. I'll try my best to improve my writing, so I can put some more sense to the fic! Thank you so much!
Iibaru- again, another reade who had given me a lot of helpful advice! thank you so much! Ii realized how many mistakes I had in this fic, and so, I would like to thank you for pointing it out!
Aya-chan- thanks for your review! here's your update. I had lots of great fun writing this, and soI hope you also enjoyed reading!
" Sakura."
" Yes , Master?"
" Who was this 'master' you were talking about? The one who ordered you to go away?"
" Oh. Him."
Silent pause.
" He's from somewhere here too. And what's really great about him are his eyes"
" Why?"
" They are white."
Your Wish Is My Command!
By: angeLix
Chapter title: Two times the pain.
Subtitle: IN comes Hyuuga Neji! The byakugan wielder!
This chapter is dedicated to: Haruno Sakura (as in the real one, it was her birthday last March 28)
punkboy h. (the stupid moron…) and all of you reviewers!
Especially sakura kage, iibaruand Yuki
Reminder: this chapter may not be funny just like the past ones, I'm afraid. Because, we are now entering a completely different void, called… ROMANCE.
WISH STATUS: NEGATIVE. CHECKING AVAILABILITY… UNACCEPTABLE. RATIONALIZATION: AGAINST THE RULES.
" Master, what you wanted… was against the rules."
In his head: PILE OF SHIT.
VERDICT: WISH DENIED. WISH DENIED. WISH DENIED. WISH DENIED…
" MAKE IT STOP, DAMN IT!" Sasuke roared over the machine like voice echoing through the whole forest.
" THE WHOLE VILLAGE CAN HEAR THIS!" he continued, plugging his fingers in his ears.
" Right away, master!" Sakura said, giving him a salute, then clapped her hands twice.
What met them was complete and eerie silence.
" That was weird…" Ino whispered dramatically, speaking for the first time since Sasuke blew her off.
" I agree…" Kakashi approved, still in a state of awestricken shock.
The silence soon shattered into million of pieces when Naruto's loud mouth kicked in again.
" HA! IT WAS AGAINST THE RULES! TAKE THAT, YOU POWER HUNGRY MANIAC!"
" Naruto-san, Master is not like that! He's just a little weak—"
With that, Sasuke's fist soared from the distance between his arm length, and landed over at the surface of a woody tree trunk. A large fissure cracked it's way upwards, taking down the tree slowly.
" Or maybe not." she squeaked, her hand brought up to her mouth, covering it effectively.
Sasuke strode towards the trembling girl, his onyx orbs capturing a dangerous glare.
" What can you do?"
Sakura looked thoroughly confused. " I didn't understa—"
" WHAT THE HELL CAN YOU DO!" he exploded.
" Master, I-I…" she stuttered, taken aback by the sudden change of his attitude.
" You are useless."
" Sasuke." Kakashi said in a warning tone, offending the genius somewhat.
No… not again…
" SASUKE-TEME! YOU CAN'T TALK TO HER LIKE THAT!" Naruto erupted furiously, his cerulean eyes contracting with anger.
" That is what she is. A useless piece of nothing." He sneered, in turn, glaring daggers at the blond.
" Sasuke-kun, I think you're being too harsh—" Ino began.
She was actually being considerate. And don't forget, siding on someone Sasuke was going against.
" Step off, Ino." He growled angrily. " I don't need you to—"
" I'm sorry."
Sasuke's glare spared Ino and directed itself over at the trembling genie.
" I'm sorry. I know I'm not great…" she whispered, her words only reaching a notch over a murmur. " But I really try. I'm sorry, master. Please don't take it out on her."
Sasuke's glare melted down one notch. It was only a frown now. This girl was getting into him. He could not let her do that.
" I understand if you would want me to go away… I'm used to it, anyway."
Melting… melting… melted.
Gone.
Sympathy was seeping in. It was uncontrollable. Impossible to subdue.
" You are a useless piece of nothing."
And then, he realized what kind of heatless bastard he was. Naruto was right. The dobe was right. He was a power hungry maniac. He let was letting his desire over power him, and it did not imply a good thing. She never even had nothing to do with this—it was the rules, and the rules says it was not allowed. Why would he push? He could always train to improve.
Without a word, He started to walk away from the clearing, trudging towards a familiar path leading back to the village of Konoha.
" Oi, bastard, where the heck do you think you're going!" Naruto called angrily, trying to sooth the trembling Sakura.
" Home. Let's go, Sakura." He commanded, looking at her plainly.
He saw her look up from the ground, as he noticed tears welling up in her emerald orbs, dots of it hanging on her lashes. She was utterly confused. Anyone who didn't know the prodigy will be, first, he was calm, then furious, then calm again.
Guilt was eating him up.
Her face still consumed a sad expression. " H-Hai…"
Kakashi stretched up his arms and took his book out of his pocket. " Training is cancelled. Attend to her first before going home. Ja!"
He was gone with a puff of smoke.
" Here," Sakura heard a voice behind her. It was the blond girl with sparkling eyes. In her outstretched hand held a jacket, almost reaching his thighs.
She looked really pretty when she's not scowling.
" I just thought Sasuke-kun won't appreciate it if he sees his genie being ogled by people." She said, smiling lightly. She suddenly snapped back to her usual demeanor, " Pink, anyway, doesn't really fit me that much."
" Thank you…" Sakura said, a smll smile gracing her saddened expression, then enfolding her into a big hug.
She really had a knack of hugging someone.
" Uhm… you're welcome!" Ino answered, chuckling nervously.
" Oi, bastard." Naruto called at him in a whisper, nudging his sides.
" What is it, dobe?" Sasuke said, practically irritated.
When he faced the fox boy, he saw a different grin etched in his now angular face. Not the fox grin, in fact. Somewhat… sly.
Uh-oh.
He knew where this was going.
" I do not do such things." He ground out.
" Yeah, right. I don't believe you…" the fox boy said in a sing song voice.
Glare.
" Hey, at least now I know the "great" Uchiha Sasuke isn't a gay like I thought he was."
BAM!
The first sight of Konoha wasn't really surprising for Sakura. Sasuke had speculated that her last master was also living here. Sakura had been glancing around, probably trying to decipher which home she had the last time she visited.
Ino's jacket hugged her body a little tightly, but well enough to cover her exposed belly and her thighs. Like what they hear on T.V., genies wear clothes with some kind of see-through material as their pants, and a glittery kind of shirt that exposed their belly. When ino tried to imagine Chouji wearing such clothes, she couldn't help but feel sick.
" Sakura."
She turned to him, somewhat uncomfortable than before. " Yes, Master?"
Trying to shrug off the fact that she called him master in such public place, he continued.
" Who is this 'master' you were talking about? The one who ordered you to go away?"
" Oh. Him." She silenced almost immediately at the thought.
There was a silent pause for some time, before she actually answered.
" He's from somewhere here too. And what is really great about him are his eyes."
The Uchiha prodigy raised a inquisitive eyebrow. Now she caught his attention.
" Why?"
She looked up from her delicate hands.
" They are white."
Suddenly, Sasuke felt a shoulder graze at his, sending a pivoting jolt of pain into his left shoulder. Though he didn't even winced at the pain, he growled at the moron who did it. There, standing before him, was one of the greatest nusciance when it comes to physical strength.
" Hyuuga."
But Neji didn't greet back the way he did before, with situations much like this. He would likely retort with muttering his surname too, with much menace and venom seeping through his words. But with the bump, Hyuuga stopped. It was like he lost all concern about beating Sasuke in a pulp in that very moment.
He traced his gaze to where it landed.
On Sakura.
" And what's really great about him are his eyes…"
" Why?"
" They are white."
" But… he was nice. He would talk to me if I'm sad, and even though he was a little bit harsh, he usually cheers me up."
" Master! Why did you leave me here?"
Memories flowed back. How stupid this was. He should have known that it will only be Hyuuga Neji that can bear the guilt of snuffing a teenage genie into a stinking sardine can. But he blinked.
Blink.
He was Sakura's last master.
" N-Neji-san."
He could almost feel the humiliation and sadness that she bore right now. But being the prodigy that he was, he didn't anything but stare at the situation. In his case, the comforting should be done by any other peson, except for himself.
The white-eyed man raised a fine brow in a quizzical manner. " Do I know you?"
Rejection.
That was a surreal form of killing somebody exceptionally slow, especially if that person considered you as someone special.
Although he never experienced such thing, he knows.
He was not stupid.
" Uchiha, Tsunade-sama needs to see you. You're in for a mission. Unfortunately, with me." He informed the raven-haired teen. " Make sure you're not gonna be an ass that I have to drag."
" Tell that to yourself. Now get out of my face, Hyuuga."
" I'm glad to, Uchiha." Neji retorted, a smirk well placed on his lips.
He continued to walk away.
They too, continued their way.
" He's a bastard, Sakura." Sasuke said, shoving his hands back into his pockets.
Sakura looked up at him and nodded slowly. " I know, Master."
For all the things Sasuke knew, this was one of the things he was so sure of. Lying wasn't one of Sakura's greatest points. Inside, she should be revolted with the term he directed on Hyuuga. He guessed he was somewhat "special" to her.
And she too, was in turn, special to the Hyuuga prodigy.
Aaaahhh, romance like this sucks. BIG TIME.
Why was he so sure that Hyuuga would like her that much?
Because after he left, he had left him a very friendly advice
He passed Sasuke, as he began his walk home. But when their eyes met once more, there in Neji's eyes, bore a very different feeling that Sasuke never saw in those pair of orbs before.
Anger. Threat. Sadness. All mixed up together in one void.
There, in his eyes, bore a statement.
Take care of her.
Sasuke smirked.
Then Neji walked.
He walked away.
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLL YYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! This is a NEJI x SAKURA x SASUKE fic! So get ready for a bumpy ride in Naruto world, coz this will be a track that whirls you into twists and turns, baby! But I already decided on the pairings. AND IIIIIIIIIIIII WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN'TTTTTTTTTT TEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLL!
I bet AAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL of you are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO surprised!
Anyway, SAKURA x SASUKE fans, don't worry! Though it may be a bit off course for the two of them, IT WON'T BE! I, for one, is ONE HELL OF A SASU X SAKU FAN! THAT PAIRING WILL LIVE FOREVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
But, I do like NEJI x SAKURA, but not as much as SASUKE x SAKURA. Anything goes right?
If you guys ever notice, THIS FIC DOESN'T HAVE A CLIFF-HANGER! SO BE THANKFUL! I was planning to cut off the chapter when Sakura said ' They are white.' , but I felt good today and I gave you the rest of the ficcy!
I'm really sleepy right now, and it's afternoon. I have to have a little nap before I hit the beach, right?
See ya!
Sasuke: This world sucks and it should just die. (hey Sakura kage! Used your line in here!)
Me: yeah. It should die with you strapped in a coconut tree!
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angeLix.