Chapter 6

Linu

As Ryltar, Mayra, and I exited the Musical Bard a young human woman ran up to us. She cried out "Please you must help me no one else will."

"Settle down dear take a deep breath and tell us what happen I'm sure we'll be able to help you." I said.

The woman took a deep breath and I honestly hoped that what was wrong was something the three of us could handle. With my luck we would have to kill some dragon or demon or something horrible like that.

"Well, it's about the Prison District the prisoners are loose! It was fine till two days ago, but then all Nine Hells broke loose and the prisoners took over the district. The guards were having a hard enough time with keeping order before the prison break now with the shortage of guards and help, they can't fight back. Please if you can help me please do." The woman said desperately.

My heart was breaking for her, a prison break was a big undertaking, helping was one thing but stopping it was another thing entirely. I spoke up "Of course dear we'll help in any way possible." I honestly expected Ryltar to ask something along the lines of how much he could get in reward for this, but he didn't. Instead he said. "Yes stay here where it is safe. We'll do all we can to stop this prison break. Do you have any idea who started it?"

"Well rumors are abounding from a simple prisoner overthrow of the guards there, to even that the Head Jailer released them! He was rumored to be coming down with the plague before this started and its possible he went mad due to it, and released the prisoners." She said answering Ryltar's questions.

"Stay here then we'll be back in a few hours." Ryltar said to her. She nodded in acceptance.

I walked up next to him and said. "A few HOURS! How do you expect to defeat an entire prison break in a few hours? Please tell me because I would love to know. Who do you think you are a god?"

"No not a god just one drow that is determined to get the intellect devourer's brain." He said

"And just how do you know that the intellect devourer is behind all this?" I asked curiously

"Call it a hunch." He said.

"Fine then let's go." I said to him

"I've got to see this man's fighting style. If he looks as fast and as strong as he looks, well then he just might be able to pull this off. He'll need a good healer though when this is all over, luckily he hired me." I thought to myself.

End Linu

Ryltar

Entering the prison district was easier then I thought, because it seemed most of the guards now knew about me being assigned to temporary militia duty. I was filled in on what I had to do by both the gate guard and the commander in charge of the district. Who was barricaded inside a temporary headquarters. She was quite surprised to learn that I was a drow but was willing to give me a chance. She told me that if I could find a way into the prison and find out what was going on in there she would reward me well. I told her that helping was all I needed. She however insisted that I take a few gold coins should I succeed. I gave in and headed off to the prison with Mayra and Linu in tow. After fighting my way through several bands of prisoners, as well as helping a few lost citizens to the district gate, I found myself at the prison's front door. After killing the few prisoners that were guarding it I studied it carefully. "Hmm…well there's no way we can bash it down, its solid oak. Hmmm what to do?" I turned to Linu and Mayra and said "Do either of you have any ideas on how do get inside?"

Both shook there head no but Linu said. "I have heard rumors that a Lady Tanglebrook used to use a secret tunnel to get to and from her house and to the prison. Perhaps we should look there?"

"Hmm yes a sound idea though I am hesitant in simply breaking into her home. It's not right, unless we know we can get in there with out breaking the door then we should be ok." I said.

After several more fights with various prisoners in the district the streets seemed to calm down some what. I walked back to the district gates and Linu informed the guard there the streets were mostly cleared of the prisoners all that was left were a few stragglers which we couldn't find. The guard seemed pleasantly surprised at this revelation.

He looked up at all three of us saying "I can't believe that you three have done what my entire district guard couldn't thank you for your help. If I may ask, to see your face hooded stranger?" I was hesitant in revealing myself but Linu said to me quietly "Go ahead Ryltar I'm sure he'll understand after everything we've done." I nodded and pulled down my hood.

"A drow!" one of the guards said reading his long sword. Luckily the captain of the guard was more understanding. "Hold yourself solider, he has done what you and your men boasted could do. With his help he has saved countless citizens and most likely many of your men's lives. He's at least earned our respect." Turning to me he said "If I may ask what, is your name drow?"

"Ryltar Kost'dora, this is my friend Linu La'Neral, and my wolf companion Mayra. We are charged by the Lady Aribeth to find several creatures which are needed to curing the Wailing Death. Would you or your men have seen any strange creatures in the area?" I asked.

"Strange creatures you say? Well now I happened to see a strange dog sized creature near the prison sewer entrance before this all happened I figured the stress of everything was getting to me and I had seen strange things before that, so I thought nothing of it." The captain of the guard replied.

"Thank you sir, also would you know of any way into the prison?" Linu said before I could.

"Well milady the sewer or the main gate are your best options. Though how you would get through the main gate without a key is beyond me. I would go for the sewers." The captain said.

"Thank you again….and for your understanding" I added. Turning to leave he said "And best of luck on your mission son we could use a bit of hope in these dark times."

An hour later after fighting off several more thugs from the prison and finding out that the door to the Lady Tanglebrook's house was locked. Mayra, Linu, and we found ourselves at the sewer entrance to the prison. Using a key I found on one of the prisoners opened the gate for us. Upon exiting the steps we were again engaged by several groups of prisoners.

"For Sephanie's sake how many prisoners does this prison have!" Linu said exasperatedly as she smashed the head of a prisoner in.

"As many as it takes to keep us from the Head Jailer." I shot back parrying a blow with a few prisoners.

After several more minutes of fighting we emerged victorious will several dead and dying prisoners all around us. Mayra was wounded but a quick healing spell from Linu fixed that. Both Linu and I had a few scratches but nothing major. We continued clearing out the rest of the level my hood had been cut off at some point during the fighting, but I gave it now attention. If after saving the Prison District people still distrusted me I would get another. However, from what I had seen with the guards and citizen's I rescued I didn't think it would be that big of a problem. After an hour we stood at the stairs leading to the second level of the prison. The entire first floor was now cleared and we had freed a few guards who though surprised that I was a drow, didn't seem to care who there rescuers were.

I checked all of us over. I had a few more scratches and marks but nothing serious. I was tired but not exhausted. However looking at Linu and Mayra the same could not be said, both were exhausted and while not severally wounded, Mayra and Linu had a few cuts that if not treated could turn nasty if infected.

"Linu do you have any more healing spells for today?" I asked.

"No Ryltar I don't I'm afraid I have exhausted my spells for today." Linu replied

"All three of us could use a rest I think but only long enough for Linu to get her spells restored." I said. "Maybe there is a room we could hold up in down on the next level."

"Well either way lets continue on Ryltar." Linu replied again

Walking down the stairs at the base we saw a movement, it turned out to be a elven guard who had slipped out of his cell he was kept in. He was hesitant in helping me at first but after Linu convinced him of my difference from my race, and my assurance that we would be fixing the problems here at the prison he filled us in on what was going on.

"Well it seems a few days ago the Head Jailer came back from one of his meetings with the Lady Tanglebrook. He seemed a bit distant but it was still odd from how he usually acted. However, the guards and I just assumed it was from pressure of the Wailing Death. The next day I and the guards were assaulted by the prisoners in the prison. My guess is the Head Jailer let them loose. Since I have over heard most of the prisoners confirming this I believe it is true." the guard informed us.

"This is dire news Ryltar." Linu said "Perhaps we could rest here for a few hours while I recover my spells?"

"Only if this guard will allow us," I said looking at the guard "If it is ok with you sir?"

"If any other drow asked me I would probably kill you or say no, however, since you seem to be in good company I'll let you rest here." The guard said.

As I sat down in a corner near the door I studied the area. I did this in the off chance someone would break through the door though I severally doubted it. Regardless I noticed a few things that would help us should the need arise the first was using the table in the back room to reinforce the door, the second thing was using the back room as cover for bottlenecking anyone coming in.

Looking at Mayra I noticed that her wounds where not as serious as I had thought. In fact, most of the blood on her was not hers but in fact the many prisoners she had killed. Speaking to her through our mental link I said "So Mayra how are you holding up?"

"I am alright Ryltar I'm not seriously wounded as you may think most of this blood isn't mine, and what few wounds I do have will heal over nicely in an hour or so." Mayra said back to me. "A little healing spell and I will be as good as a newborn pup. I've noticed however how you look at Linu. Is it possible you see something you like?"

"You must be joking, right? Think about it I am a drow one of the most hated races in all of Toril. She is a High Elf a common but still intolerant form of elves. Look at all I have gone through to at least to get her to accept me. Hell I doubt she even considers me a friend." I said back to Mayra.

"Ah while that is true I have also notice how she looks at you, while her looks may not be the same as hers…" I interrupted Mayra "Look I have no interest in Linu! At most I consider her a friend nothing more." I said desperately trying to close this train of conversation. "You know Ryltar your funny when you're angry. Ok fine regardless of how you feel about her, Linu has been looking at you as though studying you, trying to figure you out if you could say." Mayra said changing the subject some what.

"So what am I suppose to do about it? She has every right to keep an eye on me and study me as you put it. I'm sure her looks of caution and distrust, not as you say of possibly having an interest in me." I said closing the lid on this line of thought.

"Ok fine whatever you say, after all what could I know about elven looks and feelings? I am a wolf, an animal. Maybe if she starts sniffing around you backside I'll be better able to get a feel for what she feels?" Mayra said laughing.

"Oh shut up Mayra" I said accidentally out loud. Linu just started at me as if I was crazy. I just waved her off.

After several hours of rest, Linu, Mayra and I opened the door once more and after assuring the elven guard that the level above us was clear. We headed down a hallway. After several more intense fights with prisoners and a few jailed mages we entered The Pits as they were called. This area was a free roaming prisoners who were either to strong or dangerous to keep in the upper levels. The place was practically a maze, but after two hours of constant fighting, retracing our steps, and a bit of puzzle solving and avoiding traps. We found a half-orc prisoner talking to who we assumed was the Head Jailer.

"Deal with these intruders or your body will be the next I posses." The jailer said.

"Yep it's got to be the intellect devourer." I thought. Charging the half-orc in order to surprise him I found he was better prepared for us then I thought. My first blow was parried away as was my second, I told Mayra and Linu to keep there distance as I fought the half-org. He must have been as strong as I was, if not more, he wielded a double bladed axe and was able to keep parrying my blows with only slight difficulty.

FLASHBACK

I recalled one fight lesson the Drizzt taught me once. He said "Remember Ryltar, if you ever face an opponent who is as strong as or stronger then you, use your speed and brain to out think and pace him. Your speed is incredible, I tremble to think what you might have become had you stayed in the Underdark…."

END FLASHBACK

Shaking myself from my memories I moved myself back to give myself distance between the half-orc and myself. I through myself to the ground diving through his legs I took a quick jab at his groin area causing him to double over in pain, coming up behind him I was surprised to find his axe just swinging over my head. "He recovers quickly." I thought. I parried aside his clumsy swing and sliced into his midsection, with my left hand scimitar. Using the leverage it provided me I dropped my other scimitar and swung my right foot around in a spin-kick move using my right scimitar as balance coming back on two feet I picked backup my other scimitar. "Ugh…please me surrender you to good fighter." The half-orc said. I allowed him to surrender as long as he informed us what was going on in the prison. My hunch was correct it was the intellect devourer. It also seems that due to our earlier freeing of the guards on the upper level we had prevented the Devourer from being able to use those bodies should the Head Jailer become injured. After he left, on the word that he would turn himself in, all three of us headed down the stairs to face the Devourer.

Aribeth

It was about nine hours past midday at night. I paced anxiously awaiting Ryltar, and Linu's return to the temple. I hoped with all my might that they would be both unharmed and safe, but even more important have one of the cure components. I was just covering up another dead body when a flash of light from the Recall Portal caught my attention. There stood Ryltar, Linu, and Mayra all bloodied and hurt, however, Ryltar carried a dirty bag that look liked it came from a prison cell. Suddenly with a slight smile from Ryltar, all three collapsed in a heap. I quickly ran to them calling for help, I saw that each was wounded seriously and after several healing spells and a restoration spell on Mayra to cure the disease she had, I looked in the dirty bag. "By Tyr they've done it!" I shouted. Fenthick and Desther came up to me.

"Ah so I see the drow couldn't help but fail in his task in recovering the creatures a pity now my Helmites must resume there search." Desther said.

"cough…not so…uhh fast Desther…I may be wounded as are my companions….oh that's going to hurt in the morning….however we have found the first step in curing the Wailing Death. As you can ….uhhhh think I broke a rib there…. We have found the intellect devourer's brain, and stopped the prison riots in the Prison District." Ryltar said climbing to one knee. He still was seriously injured and would still need at least two days of rest and healing spells to be back to his fully healed self. I stayed quiet as he sheathed his scimitars again and stood up.

"Now Lady Aribeth please takes care of Linu and Mayra for me, there is a Dryad or Yuan-ti which must be freed from a mage in the Black Lake District." He said.

"Ryltar please rest for the night you are exhausted and are in no shape to fight." I said concerned holding a hand on his chest. He pushed it away.

"Bah I am fine…Ugh just a few stiff muscles." Ryltar said. "Ok then Ryltar if you are ok try to walk to the front door of the temple." I challenged I was sure that no person could go through what he had and be able to make it the few feet required. Amazingly he made it to the doors however I could see the concentration and pain it took to reach it. Giving in partially he said "Ok fine milady but only till Linu and Mayra are well enough to travel." I nodded in acceptance of the agreement; I however was determined to make sure that the rest period was at least two days. I watched as Ryltar helped the nurses carry both first Linu then Mayra into a side care room. He then sat himself down outside near both doors. I walked over to him and said "Copper for your thoughts?"

"It's nothing really kind of stupid actually. I screwed up, I almost got us killed due to my stupid plan." He said deep in thought. He actually seemed to be replaying actions he did in his head as he said this.

"Come tell me what almost got you killed?" I asked carefully and with concern.

"Well at first everything was going fine we entered the lowest level of the prison where the Head Jailer at went. Well it seemed he had laid a trap for us. We thought he was alone and he seemed to be at first but then he let out a scream and we were soon up to our necks in mindless guards attacking us. They were almost as bad as zombies." He said. "Well I told Linu to hold them off while I dealt with the Head Jailer. As we dueled I landed a lucky blow and lobbed off the Jailers head, only to watch as the Devourer ran to another guards head. This went on for several minutes maybe a half an hour tops before we were in real trouble."

"So where does your stupid plan come in?" I asked half jokingly

"Well actually that was it, I was never good at making plans to be honest. It has always been Mayra and I in fights against other enemies; I have never had to worry about more then that. Now with Linu helping me, and I do need her help, I'm….clumsy, and without focus. I'm sorry forget I said anything." Ryltar said sadly. "Hmm he seems deeply concerned about everyone he meets." I let him go to the room he was assigned and went to my own which I shared with Fenthick.

End Aribeth

Ryltar

I awoke shortly after midnight from my meditation, restless, I checked on first Mayra and Linu. Looking at them still wounded and out after what I put them through, and worst yet almost getting both of them killed I sadly walked out into the center of the temple wearing my amour and scimitars at my waist. I talked to a few of the nurses that were helping a few patients. I learned that the Wailing Death wasn't transmitted through normal means, like air, and food and water. This was a surprise to me and I asked about what time it started. Learning that it begun in the Beggar's Nest and spread from there was no surprise a poor, and filthy district was a breeding ground for plagues and disease. What made me suspicious was the fact that the Helmites had shown up two day before the plague started claiming they were just passing through. This struck me as odd but I saw no reason to doubt the Helmites for who they really were, I couldn't very well go accusing Desther and his Helmites for starting the cure could I? After everything they had done to help it wasn't right. Ok sure Desther got on my nerves and called me names and what not but that was no reason to accuse him of being the cause of the Wailing Death. I shook myself from my thoughts. I helped out some more nurses who were more concerned it seemed with me resting then helping everyone else. I waved them off saying "Worry about the sick, I heal quickly." I then walked out of the gates and headed for the Black Lake District gates. A thought occurred to me how surprised how everyone would be were I to turn up with the Dryad in the morning. Now with a plan in mind I headed off through the streets.

END Ryltar

Linu

I awoke on a soft bed and with just a simple robe on. My amour was clean and was lying on a chair in the corner of the room. My mace was there as well. I got up slowly as the fight came back to me I remember Ryltar killing the last of the mindless guards then killing the intellect devourer and harvesting its brain. We had teleported back to the Temple of Tyr using the Stone of Recall and then I passed out, awaking here. Getting out of the bed was hard, as I still had many stiff and sore muscles from where I had been wounded. My first thought strangely enough was how Ryltar was. This surprised me. "Why should I care how a drow is feeling, even if he isn't like the rest of his race?" a small voice in the back of my head said in reply "Because he is the first person who never made fun of you for your clumsiness, and he does have a certain charm does he not?" I argued with this voice for a few minutes before saying "True he may have certain qualities a woman would like but what would he ever see in me? I'm as clumsy and unlucky as a fresh Halfling thief, and just as bad at fighting. His skills with those blades of his are incredible. How could he ever care for me that way? Care for me as…" I closed that line of thought before I could dredge up painful memories. I still had my quest for the temple and Sephanine Moonbow to fulfill before I could return to Evermeet. Walking out of the room carefully I saw some nurses helping a few sickly patients. Aribeth came over to me saying "Oh so you're up Linu that's good. We were most concerned for your wounds the most. You had several broken ribs and a collapsed lung, as well as serious internal bleeding. How are you feeling?"

"Well dear Aribeth, how is Ryltar and Mayra faring?" I asked.

"Well Mayra is still recovering though she is awake. As for Ryltar, he disappeared into the night now one knows where he is not even Mayra. Though she assures us he is still in the city. She may know where he is but she says she doesn't' only that he isn't far way." Aribeth said concerned.

"Well I guess I'll wait till she is ready to go look for him then set off to find him." I said resting on a bench outside my room.

End Linu

Ryltar

After making my way through the servant's area now burned down to prevent spreading of the plague to the Black Lake area. I bypassed the gate and again jumped over the wall. After discussing with a nearly blind old lady who cleaned many of the houses in the area I found myself in the mage's tower. After an hour of constant fighting I found a cell area with the dryad inside. As I approached however she cried out. "Be wary stranger Slangate is near." As soon as she finished her sentence I turned around hearing a spell being chanted nearby. As I completed my turn I was blasted by several magic missiles from the Slangate. He came at me then crying out that I wouldn't take his chance of being rich from him. I parried aside his poorly aimed attack with his quarterstaff and not wishing to kill him unless I needed to. I knocked him out with the flat of my scimitars. He fell like a sack of stone to the ground. Going through his pockets I found a key to his chest and the cell. I approached the cell carefully with the dryad saying.

"I have prayed to the great oak for a savior shall you be it? Shall my time here in this cell be now over?"

"Yes dryad I will free you my name is Ryltar Kost'dora in the service of Never Winter and the Lady Aribeth. I have come asking for your help." I said to her. Now with the door open she walked out.

"Never in my wildest dreams would I have expected a drow elf to save me. Many times I have had to hide myself from your kind. However I have heard of a rare few who turn their backs on the evil ways of there race. Am I to assume you are one of them?" she asked with a slight fear in her eyes.

"Please calm yourself I mean you no harm. You are correct I am not like the rest of my race. I ask you come with me to help cure the plague. Following that I will find someone to return you to your forest." I said

"Have no fear drow known as Ryltar, you merely need a lock of my hair here take it freely from me" She said holding out her long hair in a taught band for me to cut I used a dagger I had to cut a decent sized lock out.

"Thank you fair dryad, now if you'll come with me I can get you back to your forest tonight if need be." I said pocketing the hair.

"You needn't worry Ryltar my oak is in the Never Winter forest nearby a great mage of the human's said I need only to wish to be back there and be touching a tree to teleport there. This small house tree plant should do nicely. Good-bye fair Ryltar may we meet again." She said touching the tree plant and vanishing from sight. I used the Stone of Recall and teleported myself back to the Temple of Tyr before Slangate awoke.

End Ryltar

Mayra

It was early morning and I had just eaten a dried stick of meat the nurses had given me. While it was not as good as a fresh killed deer, it would have to do for now. Walking out of the room they gave me I saw a flash of light near where we had teleported in the night before and there stood Ryltar with a huge grin on his face. Since I was the only one in the room at the time I said to him through our link "So what's with the smile? Did you find the Dryad? Or was that smile just for me?" I said jokingly Ryltar and I had always had a very close relationship but sometimes I joked about it as though it was more serious then that. He just glared at my joke and said back "Yes I did find the dryad she's back in the Never Winter woods now and I got a lock of her hair." He said now approaching me. "Where is Linu and Aribeth, I must give them the good news." He said now out loud.

"We're right here, and where have you been all night Ryltar? Everyone was worried about you." Linu said rather sternly.

"Well mother if you must know I was collecting the dryad's hair, she's now safe and sound in the NeverWinter woods. But before she left she gave me a piece of her hair." He said jokingly.

Linu walked up to him while I shook my head in laughter. "Listen drow, you better be careful cause look at it this way, if something happens where I can't heal you who do you think will considering what you are? Most people would probably finish you off rather then help you. So forgive me if I seem a bit motherly, since you seem to be the only one in this city that has had any chance at finding the cure components."

Ryltar took a slight bow saying "Yes mistress, your wish is my command."

Aribeth evidently couldn't take this anymore, because she fell to the floor laughing, and rolling on the floor. Linu just flashed all three of us a deathly glare that could have scared a Medusa where she in the room. Linu turned and walked away mumbling something under her breath as Aribeth slowly got back to her feet. I finally overcame my laughing and Ryltar had a huge grin on his face.

"Oh Linu one other thing." Ryltar said pulling another sack from his pack. "Would this be the chalice you were looking for?" Linu stopped dead in her tracks and turned to look at him, evidently not believing what he had just said.

"Excuse me what did you say dear?" Linu asked slowly.

Pulling the chalice from its back Ryltar said. "I found this chalice in a cabinet in Slangate's tower, I knocked him out when I found the Dryad, he attacked me. I found a key on his person, and found this chalice inside the cabinet."

Linu rushed over much to fast and tripped on her feet Ryltar caught her in his arms cradling her fall. He smiled down at her as he helped her back up saying "Well Linu seems I once again swept you off your feet." Linu just lightly punched him in the chest as she examined the chalice.

"Oh, Ryltar you've done it! This is indeed the Chalice of Sephanine Moonbow. At last my quest for the temple is complete and I can return to Evermeet." Linu said excitedly.

"Well I'm just glad I could help you Linu." Ryltar said sincerely. I picked up sadness from this last line of speech from him through our mental link but I couldn't figure out what it was. It seems that Ryltar's strength had reached his limit with all of the many hours on his feet fighting, running, and his injuries, because as he turned to leave for his room to rest he finally collapsed again. Linu, Aribeth, and I rushed over to him to see if he was alright. Aribeth and Linu examined him and determined that he was just exhausted.

"This man pushes himself to hard, even heroes need rest, even in the darkest of times." Aribeth said.

"Oh I do hope he will be alright Aribeth, he truly is not like the rest of his race. Perhaps we surface elves shouldn't be so quick to judge drow in these types of settings. He does after all have a reputation for helping people in the NeverWinter woods does he not?" Linu said.

"Yes that is true Linu and your right he is different from his race. And after all he has done. I'm sure with some rest and healing he will find the other two Waterdavian Creatures. What he must learn is to not push himself beyond his abilities. He has friends that care for him. The sooner he realizes that the better." Aribeth looked at me as though to say. "You should try to get him not to push himself so hard. One day it will kill him."

I just whined in response because they couldn't understand me. After both Linu and Aribeth with some help from Fenthick carried Ryltar to his room, and made sure he would rest comfortably, I was lead outside to Nytar's Druid Grove.

End Mayra

Linu

I was confused, after dropping Mayra off in the care of Nytar, I decided to walk around the City Core. Making sure the Chalice of Sephanine Moonbow was safely protected with Aribeth, I left the Temple of Tyr. Although outside the temple the air was filled with the stench of the sick and dead, the morning sun was just edging over the City walls casting a beautiful scene on the sky. "How beautiful and serene." I thought. "Why would Ryltar go to all the trouble he did last night just to find the dryad? Why didn't he wait for Mayra and I to go with him? What does he have to prove besides getting people to trust him? He is hiding something I can tell... but what? Should I ask him? No that's his business. Why am I so concerned about what he does? His stance, grace, and skills outshine my own so many times over. Worse yet I see how he is careful to keep both Mayra and I out of danger. It's as if he's afraid something will happen to Mayra... or me." this last thought forced me to consider something deeper. "What if he was in love at some point... and due to his actions... or inaction his love died?" This was the only reasonable answer I could come up with. "Could I look like, or remind him of someone? Someone he cared about? Or could it be deeper then even that?" I turned towards the Musical Bard to sit down with my thoughts and eat something. When Rytlar awoke I would ask him my questions.

End Linu

(A/N: wow long chapter i know. I thinking that since no one has done a Linu romance yet on I'm going to try to be original and do that. What does everyone think of that? I still getting used to writing so bare with me. I'm eventually going to do a rewrite once i get the first chapter of the game done this way people can read the first chapter of the game while i rewrite everything. Suggestion are welcome and i plan on putting those suggest already to use. Thanks everyone who has reviewed.)