First things first.
I'M SORRY I DIDN'T ANSWER REVIEWS.
I'm answering them now.
Xlife: Thanks… I didn't think it was that great, but you are just too kind.
Heh… I guess you saw this happened.
I'd love for Starfire not to return but sadly… The Titans ne… ne… oh man I can't even say it. ARGH.
HAHA! So someone does think like me! Blackfire IS going to be helpful.
Haha I love throwig stuff in like that.
I'll try and throw something in.
Hehehe your question mark amuses me for some reason.
HORAAH! I'm shocked now one hates me though…
Heh… It should be better.
You've helped me a lot, and thank you.
Angel Vanilla: I am curious, what would happen if I didn't sayp lease? And I DOUBT anything you say sucks.
I think that's how you spell it… I have no idea. Aaaaahhh I should have tied that in… - angry –
ALJELJA. WHY DIDN'T I DO A FUNERAL? Heh heh heh heh actually…
Haha there is no WAY the Titans could beat Trigon on their own. I mean maybe Raven but the others would just get in her way.
Hah I just threw that one in, no worries.
Well… okay.
That's a good idea…. Actually that's a very good idea but it might seem unrealistic if I did that… Grumbles…
Okay… I'm glad you odn't hate me.
Really? I have good grammar? Thank you!
I will try my hardest to update soon… but as I've said some things have come up… That really call out for attention ( not writing, family things ) but I'll try because this is such a good realease. Thank you for the long review!
Sillymail: Oh that I will try to do.
Zoicytes-Shadow: Haha thank you. Hahaha you are too kind. WAIT BEFORE YOU E-MAIL ME I HAVE AN ALTERNATE E-MAIL FOR WHEN MY MOTHER STEALS THE COMPY: F4SHIONstatement hotmail . com (without the spaces. It is… well nevermind what it's from.
AngeloftheSecondHell: But you should hate me. And this has lately been sucking. A lot. But thank you for not hating me. You make a really good point about grammer, I'm glad that my Fic doesn't do that. If I met someone that did that to a book, stripped it bare and critized it's grammer, I would have to slap the person. But luckily no one does that in front of me at least Okay, thank you for the advice. I MEAN THAT TOO . AEEEE I know, I can't have Raven do fluff, because, right now, she could end up killing herself too, her mind is so unstable and she cannot meditate correctly. So no, there will be no fluff. Maybe I will imply something, but I don't know. I just don't know if it will fit in, I doubt it does. Haha okay I can get some ideas pretty sure. Haha I'm glad you hold your tongue because I would be unoriginal because you have such good ideas. I fyou catch my drift. Thank you, I'm glad it worked out! OH Blackfire is MUCH fun, I love writing with her in the story.
Trenin: New Penname. Nice. OF COURSE I WONT' DROP THE CAPS LIKE.
Heheheh I should just alaugh. Of coursre Blackfire helps, she SMART.
Yeah.
Probably?
Well yeah, if he wasn't the ratings would go down a little.
I figured.
You answers are very… hehehe ABSTRACT.
Hmmm…
My mood? Oh that'll be great. Of course everyting will work out depending on my mood. Oh man. I have to fix that. Hmmph. No apparantly not. Heh, no it's fine, and Over the Hills and Far Away is one of my favorite Nightwish songs, so I wouldn't get it confused with anything. Yeah… but no… not this time, when she is desperate to save her planet.
They Call Me Sweetsnow: I'm glad you don't hate me! And I'm thrilled you don't hate my grammar. Haha I'm glad you aren't confused. Thank you! I'll try and get my next one out soon!
I'm answering the OTHER reviews at the bottom of the … chapter?
Now something very important. I AM GOING TO REPOST THAT LAST CHAPTER. … the one before this one… chapter 16. yes, I'm very unhappy with it, so thereforth it must change.
Okay, I guess that's all I have to say. Now hopefully this is a better chapter.
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Indeed the Titans were surprised when Blackfire, Starfire, and 500 warriors from Tamaran were found pressing the doorbell on the Titans tower.
Inside…
"WE'RE UNDER ATTACK! ALIENS! ALIENS!" Beast Boy ran around screaming.
Raven appeared in the room, a vein in her forehead popping out. "Beast. Boy. Come. Here." Raven hissed. "AZARATH, METRION, ZINTHOS!"
A black claw was on Beast Boy's throat.
"Raven, heh, buddy, pal, heh.. why don't we forgive your ol' Friend Beast Boy. Heh heh…"
"Since when am I your "buddy" or "pal" and you are my "ol' friend"?" Raven glared. Her peaceful moment of almost being able to meditate had been shattered. Her glowing white eyes slowly turned back to purple as she set Beast Boy down.
"thanksbye." Beast Boy managed to squeak out before he darted over to where Cyborg and Robin stood staring.
"Okay…" Robin started, breaking the silence. "What is this about aliens?"
"Outside! I swear!" Beast Boy said.
Raven looked out one of the large windows. Her eyes met the 'aliens' sitting in the front lawn of the Titans tower. "Those are the Tamaranians. Not aliens you idiot."
"Oh. I KNEW THAT!" Beast Boy said.
"Shouldn't we let them in?" Raven pointed out.
"OH right!" Cyborg said.
With a roll of her eyes, Raven teleported into the front lawn of the Tower, where Starfire stood staring at the building with scared eyes, as if she was afraid her team wouldn't accept her.
"Hello Star." Raven said.
"FRIEND RAVEN!" Starfire threw her arms around Raven. Raven however was concentrating on getting air into her lungs instead of her alien friend.
The other Titans arrived moments later, thanks to Cyborgs new and improved elevator.
"Starfire!" Beast Boy exclaimed. The Tamaranian immediately let go of Raven and rushed towards the changeling.
"Love Beast Boy!"
The other three Titans backed away, bumping into none other than Blackfire.
"TITANS, ATTACK!" Was Robin's first reaction after turning around and staring Starfire's sister in her glistening eyes.
"HOLD IT!" Blackfire said. "I'm here to… Ugh… Help."
Starfire had let go of Beast Boy and had turned all attention to Starfire. "Friend Robin… My… Sister is telling the truth, she is here to help us fight the horrid Trigon! Trigon has attacked our planet and won this awful battle."
"Yes, she.. Ugh," Blackfire had a disguisted look on her face, "Is telling the truth." She finished.
"It's only a battle. We can do this team!"
"No." Raven said.
"What do you mean no?" Cyborg asked.
"I mean no. You can't. YOU CAN'T RISK YOURSELVES FOR ME." The bay that surrounded the Titans crashed against the shores, trying it's hardest to kill the sand. Windows on the bottom floor of the Tower shattered, shards of glass flying everywhere.
"Raven calm down!" Robin shouted.
"I'M TRYING!" Raven said, getting frustrated.
With a few deep breaths the dark girl was under control again, just barley holding herself together. She felt as if she could fall apart at any moment, as if she would break right here in front of everyone.
Tamarans warriors stood in shock. Blackfire had backed away. Raven's team did her best to comfort her.
"Let's go get some tea." Robin said.
Raven started to head into the tower.
"No. I mean us. Now. We need to talk."
"Oh, Robin. No."
"NOT LIKE THAT." Robin said. Frustrated the boy wonder grabbed Raven by the wrist and led a struggling girl to his motercycle. Halfway to the garage Raven gave up. She let Robin lead her. She relaxed.
Robin handed her a helmet, and wordlessly let her sit on the motercycle. The Boy Blunder began to steer them out of the island the Titans lived on, and into Jump City.
He stopped in front of a hole in the wall café and led Raven inside, got them a table, and ordered Raven tea, and himself black coffee.
"I want an explanation for this."
"For what?" Raven asked.
"For your outburst. For the word "no". For everything. For that Erratic."
"My outburst, my emotions going out of control. The word no, this can't be stopped Robin! It must happen."
"It's your future! Your letting some piece of paper decide your future? Raven you are above that!"
"It's not just any piece of paper, it's got my destiny on it!"
"We are changing your destiny. You will be you." Robin said.
"Fine. You wanted to know about Sameal? I don't know. I know he is working for Slade. I know he will show up soon, Slade has obviously seen warriors from Tamaran appear on our front lawn, it's hard to hide. The creature he is isn't a bad creature, actually an Erratic could be extremley helpful to us."
"You think?"
"An army of them? Think of what that could do to Trigon. Demon against demon. Picture it."
"How would we get Erratics?"
"Perfect timing in a cartoon that has to have a happy ending."
"Oh I see." Robin said.
"Yes, if only we were on Cartoon Network, then there would always be a happy ending."
"But wouldn't it get old after awhile?"
"Yes. Most likely."
"I mean think about it, no sex, no real violence…"
"And where did the sex part come from Boy Blunder? Like you would get anything." Raven said.
"Oh you would give in to me, you know it."
"You are hopeless, you know that Robin."
"Yes, but you just smiled."
"Point?"
"Maybe you aren't so dark."
"Don't push it. Besides if we were on Cartoon Netwerk, we would have characters to stick to. And that really wouldn't work out for you."
A loud crash was heard outside the café. Instinctivly Raven and Robin stood up and ran outside.
Sameal stood outside.
"ALRIGHT SAMEAL, GO BACK TO THE SCUM YOU CAME FROM!" Robin said.
"Scum? Ohhohhohoh Robin I think you have it all wrong. I don't think I'm scum at all!"
"Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos!" Raven threw a car at Sameal.
"Calm down princess," the Erratic said dodging Raven's throw. "I only have a message for you."
"Then tell her the message and get away from here!" Robin shouted.
"I DON'T THINK THIS IS YOUR BUSINESS ROBIN!" Sameal said, turning into a Fire God and throwing a ball of fire at Robin.
(A/N, I'm sorry to interupt but I'm apologizing about my lack of creativity in that last sentence, Fire God was the best thing I could think of. I don't know much about mythology but I'm sure there was a fire god, so if you do know about mythology fill me in with helpful … characters? Thanks! I'll get back to the story now.)
"Now Raven. You shall fullfil the prophecy! You shall tell the Tamaranians to LEAVE JUMP CITY AT THIS INSTANT or you WILL suffer. Undestood?"
"GET AWAY!" Raven said, throwing another car at Sameal, hitting him in the chest this time. The coward dissapeared just a moment later.
"Robin, I need to go back to the tower. I need to do research. There may be a way for me to contact an Erratic and ask for help. If they can turn into gods, we may get lucky."
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Okay I'm sorry to end this here, but I need to. Now, as you can see there will be maybe two or three more chapters. The next one is pretty obvious so I won't be insulted if you call it a filler. This one is HARD WORK. I'm nervous as hell right now, we get our schedules for school tomorrow and I'm really worried about what team I'm on. It's crazy. So I'm sorry if it sucks.
NOW! I WILL NOT LET MYSELF FORGET REVIEWS THIS TIME! Though there are… Eh… Yeah here we go.
THIS IS THE CHAPTER I AM REPOSTING, CHAPTER SIXTEEN.
Ternin: Fairly? It sucked! Yeah, it's Robin and Cyborg. No worries. You'll see, this will be very interesting. Heh heh heh. Yeah, you better like Blackfire. Sadly I had to bend her a little, but I'm glad it turned out to still be Blackfire. Well, if the villians were smart we really wouldn't have as much fun with them, and then they would win. And that just couldn't happen on a Y-7 show. Sameal is a bit of an idiot sometimes, but only because of his ego. Yeah, it's fine about the floppy disk.
They Call Me Sweetsnow: You are too kind, really you are! I'm glad you liked it though.
Angelof theSecondHell: - is burned alive – okay. I' m VERY sorry about that, but I'm going to post those reviews (the ones at the top) on the last chapter AND I'm editing that last chapter. I'm SORRY LOYAL READERS I OWE YOU WITH MY LIFE! THOU ART SAVETH ME FROMETH BORDOM. I likey your shakspear. Yes yes, that last chapter SUCKED. A lot. A whole lot. It deserves to be shot and burned. I would NEVER not countinue a story I had people reading. Ever. Unless I died or something like that. Then yeah… that would be pretty self-explanitory. Sigh… I know I'm not a published writer. I know I never will be… it's just a dream that is slowly shattered day by day. Crushed by me, others, friends, ect. Having a dream come true just won't happen. It's not like I'm good enough either.
Oh but you should hate this as much as it seems. And I understand. I won't kill you for honesty. If honesty died… life wouldn't be worth it. Because truth lives, tangled in lies and deception. Being a writer is just a dream. I'm aware I will end up with a sucky job and a sucky life and a whiny brat for a kid with a guy I regret ever talking to. I know I will shatter life with a divorce. It's coming. I can feel it. It doesn't matter. I gave up awhile ago. And dreams, like I said earlier, they shatter. Easily. I've devolped a pretty fuck-dreams attitude. But whatever. I'll repost that last chapter. After I edit it.
Sillymail: I'm sorry to hear that. It hurts. Actually it hurts a lot, because you have always been there. I'm sorry you've broken away.
That's it. That's all my reviews. I'm going to post this and repost 16. Merry days.