I'm so nervous! This is my first fanfic posting, so… Well, please leave a comment so I can try to make my writing better… It'll probably be not that bad, but please leave me some constructive criticism. So… Here it is.
Also, a stupid side note: The song, "The Real Folk Blues", basically powers this fanfic. I listen to it as I work; go onto Ichigo's Sheet music and listen to it; it's inspiring.
The Struggle of Two Souls
Introduction
Boom. Everything people saw and heard for several miles out was a blinding white light and an explosion that seemed to last an eon. In the eye of the storm, two girls stood up from the destruction dancing around them. The children's creator sat back on their heels and laughed out loud,
"Well Elric, looks like I've finally outdone you this time."
Part One
"Hughes… Give me Fullmetal… Now…" Roy growled.
"But can't I tell him about Elysia first?" Hughes whined after putting his hand over the phone receiver. Roy held out his hand.
"No. Give him… Now…" he looked threateningly into Hughes face. Hughes sighed.
"Fine, fine," he said and reluctantly gave Roy the phone. Roy sighed and said,
"Fullmetal… You there?" On the other end, Ed leaned back on the glass phone booth doors and replied,
"Yeah, I'm here," slowly and heavily, as if it pained him to say it. Roy leaned back in his black, leather chair.
"Good. Now we have some matters we want you to delve a bit deeper into. We've been receiving reports of people seeing a bright light and hearing a large explosion in the towns around the mountains," he said. Ed whined,
"But why do I have to do it?" Roy placed his chin in his hands and calmly said,
"We're assuming that these explosions are alchemic, so who better to explore these than a state alchemist?" Ed groaned. Roy sneered,
"Would you rather me put Hughes back on the phone? I just know he's itching to tell you something about Elysia." At this, Hughes' ears immediately pricked up.
"Is someone talking about meeee?" he sang. Ed heard this in the background and screeched,
"No, no! Okay, I'm on it, just don't put Hughes on the phone, please!" Roy calmly said,
"Okay, just get to work," and he hang up without another word. Ed hung up as well and grumbled to himself,
"Inconsiderate bastard."