Okay, I've re-read the entire story, and I apologize to the one person I insulted. Although not completely, because you didn't have to be such a fcking asshole about it. This chapter is an author's note, but I will be replacing it as soon as I finish the next chapter.
Now that that has been said, I have an important announcement. I am re-vamping the entire story. I'm adding new story bits to all the chapters, because now that I'm older, and have gone through more English classes, and yadda yadda yadda, I've realized, "Why yes, it is full of plot holes. It could use some more detail. Damn, I was a really crappy writer…."
Hopefully, once I've redone them, things will make more sense. Again, I apologize. This brings up another point. I know I said I'd be updating more, but not until I'm done re-vamping all the other chapters, including the one I just posted. Consider that chapter a rough-draft preview of what's to come. And how about this: if you have any ideas, such as gags, scenes, and whatnot that you think would be good for the story, or that you'd like to see, drop me a line sure to put the subject of the e-mail as something like, 'Your Trigun story', or 'The $$60,000,000,000 Rose' or something that I will be sure to connect with the story. I have over two hundred e-mails I still haven't checked, and I get, on average, about 15-20 e-mails a week. Mostly chain-letters, e-mails from my ex-boyfriend(may he rot in hell), and spam. DO NOT SEND ME CHAIN LETTERS! DO NOT SEND ME SPAM MAIL!
Got it? If you feel that's not enough, send me a PM at GaiaOnline. My username, again, is Asreith. Again, as with the e-mail, do not send me spam or chain letters. And if you are not a member of GaiaOnline, WHY NOT? WHY AREN'T YOU? Join! It's really fun!
When it asks who referred you, type in my username, 'kay? I'm giving in to my selfish side and being greedy. I get gold(though not very much) for each referral. I think.
Well, that's all I can think of. Till later,
Ja Ne!
Lady Kitsuna