Hey Minna

This story was deleted cause of the rating...so this time I'm being more careful of how I should rate my stories.

So please review this story again plz.


Rave Master
By: Katrena Rother and Suki Choe

Chapter One:

It's a sunny day, as usual days are, and Haru and his father just defeated King, and headed to Garage Island.

Before they left, they got Elie, and Musica.

"So, Haru..." Gale began to say.

Haru looked at his father.

"Yeah, dad?" he asked, "what's up?"

"Has anything changed at home?"

"Umm...I guess not," Haru smiled, "it's as peaceful as I remember it!"

"Good...I can't wait to get back and see everyone!"

"You must miss Garage Island, don't you, Haru's dad?" Elie asked.

"Yeah...I do!"


When they got to Garage Island, they all saw Cattelya drying the laundry outside.

Haru yelled "HEY CAT, LOOK WHOSE BACK HOME!" she turned around and saw both Haru and their father.

She than stopped hanging the laundry up, ran towards the two men, and hugged them tightly.

Both the two men hugged Cattelya, Gale said "it's good to be home again, so let's celebrate now!"

They all cheered with excitement, they went inside the house to celebrate on Gale and Haru coming back, also having Elie with them.

It was a new beginning for them, for there will be some surprises for them all.


I hope that you've liked this chapter so far.

Please review nicely please.

L8er Days