Yeah...I'm sorry this is taking forever, it's just I had a bunch of stuff to work out with some original characters that I'm putting in...
Things are going to get interesting.
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Evermore Forevermore: You don't understand girls? We're not so hard to figure out...I can't remember if I ever reviewed your story. but if I haven't, I shall soon!
Regrem Erutaerc: Thanks for the information! And wow, the story has potential...I FEEL SO SPECIAL! Don't worry about description, I'll try to do better on that...
dorcus: uh...thanks? I only took so long because I had to work out a few things and figure out what I was going to do...
Coolcatjas: Oh, I will! I will!
AnimeKittyCafe: I know, it makes me happy, too!
Qzie: Heh heh, sorry chica, but thanks for letting me use the characters from your story...you have a kind soul! BTW, you and your friend's story took me FOREVER to get through...how much free time do you have, girl!
teenRAVENtitan: Thanks so much! You have a kind soul, too!
Disclaimer: I don't own Teen Titans, and I don't even own the new characters that are mentioned! Those belong to my friend and her best friend. They are brilliant authors, so you should ask about them in your review…
Chapter Two Part One: Making Raven Feel
Raven walked into the living area the next morning with a huge smile on her face. Beast Boy was up watching TV and noticed this, pointed at her wildly, saying, "You're…you're smiling…YOU'RE ACTUALLY SMILING! HOLY COW, THE WORLD AS WE KNOW IT IS ENDING!"
Raven laughed, and said, "I can feel, Beast Boy. I can finally feel."
Beast Boy stared at her, a huge smile on his face, grabbed her wrist, and started running around shouting, "RAVEN IS SMILING! SHE CAN FEEL! RAVEN CAN FEEL! SHE'S SMILING AND NOTHING'S BLOWING UP!"
"Okay, you little green Smurf, they get it!"
"RAVEN CALLED ME A LITTLE GREEN SMURF AND NOTHING'S BLOWING UP!"
"Okay, Beast Boy, I'm going to hurt you if you don't stop!"'
"RAVEN'S THREATENING TO HURT ME AND NOTHING'S BLOWING- OWWWWWWW! NEVERMIND! SHE BLEW UP THE KETTLE!" Beast Boy rubbed his hind end where the kettle had landed. Raven was standing in the corner, back to her solemn ways.
"Raven…you're not smiling anymore…you've gone back to the way you were…I thought you said you could feel…" said Beast Boy, confused.
"I can. I'm just deciding not to, especially if you're going to act this way," said Raven in monotone.
Beast Boy's ear drooped, and a sad look came upon his face. "Pleeeease Rae…please feel again…you're so pretty when you smile…"
Raven turned away. "I'm going to go read."
Beast Boy sighed as his love walked out of the kitchen. "Bye Rae…"
Later on…
"Uh-huh…that's right…yeah…" Beast Boy was talking on the phone, making sure he couldn't be seen in the phone booth. He even had on an overly large trench coat, huge sunglasses, and a large-brimmed hat. "Yeah…the best the outer world has to offer? How much do they charge…what! …No, no, it's just…how many people work for Chex Mix and matches? …No matches, you say? All right then…yes…today…around, let's say, two o'clock…yup…thanks, dude." Beast Boy hung up the phone and grinned triumphantly. "Raven is so gonna feel now."
I'm sorry it was so short, I swear Part 2 will be a lot longer! A LOT longer...