thanks for the advice and I'm sorry if you guys had a hard time reading the first chapter. I don't really like writing paragraphs but I hope this would me much better.

SANDY'S BEDROOM

Sandy is lying on his bed and is completely bored when he heard someone call his name outside. He peeked out the window and saw Kirsten on the other side also staring out from her window.

S: "hey"

K: "hey, I see you're bored?"

S: "you look bored too."

K: "wanna hang out?"

S: " I don't think jimmy would like it if he sees you hanging out with me"

K: " well that's his problem, besides I wanna hang out with you, get to know you more.

Unless you don't want to?" Kirsten pleads silently ' please, please say yes'

S: "sure" while smiling at Kirsten and silently thanks God 'thank you God'

( MOMENTS LATER)

Sandy and Kirsten were at Fashion Island where Sandy is waiting for Kirsten outside her dressing room

S: "I thought when you said you wanna hang out it means like go to the beach or some thing"

K: "i hate the beach, those fishes…ugh"

S: "so you'd rather go to mall"

K: "yup"

S: " Kirsten you already bought like 7 outfits already, which you insist that I carry, but don't you think you had enough?"

K: "just this last one and I promise will do something you like"

S: "like go to the beach?"

K: "well except that"

S: "hey you said anything that I like!"

K: "well choose another one… okay tell me if this is okay or not."

S: "Kirsten I don't know anything about cloth… wow!" sandy's mouth opened when he saw what Kirsten was wearing. She was wearing a blue spaghetti strap dress which really brings out the color of her eyes and clings to her body in all the right places.

K: " I take it that you like it?'

S: "yeah wow you look…wow"

K: "c'mon let's go"

S: "aren't you gonna change first?"

K: " well since you like it I'll just wear it. now, cmon."

SALES LADY: "Ms. Nichol you look beautiful as always"

K: "thanks May…um I think I'm just gonna wear this"

SALES LADY: "okay Ms., that would be, $300"

K: "okay you guys have my mom's account here right?"

SALES LADY: "yes Ms. I'll just put it in her account."

K: "thanks, see ya later May"

(OUTSIDE)

S: "$300 don't you think that's a lot of money for just a dress."

K: "well if it means impressing you then that's okay"

Sandy was speechless and doesn't know what to say to that. Kirsten doesn't know why she said that. She was only thinking about it and didn't mean to say it out loud, but she is disappointed that Sandy didn't said anything.

K: "I'm just kidding Sandy."

S: "right of course"

K: "so what do you wanna do?"

S: "how bout a movie?"

K: "sure"

(KIRSTEN'S CAR)

K: " that was so funny"

S: " I know but you cried in the end of a movie that was supposed to be funny" while staring at Kirsten, who was looking straight on the road, wondering what did he do to spend a beautiful day with a very beautiful girl. ' he has a boyfriend Sandy, remember Jimmy' his mind shouted. 'but he seems to like you too' his heart shouted.

K: " it was funny but it was also kinda sad."

S: " you know you are the only person I know thus far who had cried in the end of a comedy."

K: "well that's means I'm special." Laughs Kirsten.

S: "yes you are. Hey do you wanna hang at my place my dad and his wife are in Paris right now and I have all the place to myself."

K: " will you cook me dinner?"

S: "sure whatever you like"

K: "great cause you're a really good cook"

They reached Kirsten house and saw that Jimmy was there leaning against his car. Kirsten was looking forward to spending dinner with Sandy but with Jimmy here now, she doubts it.

K: "Jimmy?"

J: " hey babe. Look I'm sorry for what happened the other…" he saw Sandy got out of too. "what… were have you two been?"

K: "He just went with me to go and pick up some stuff."

J: "and you didn't ask me?"

S: " jimmy we didn't do anything wrong."

J: "who ask you anyway?"

K: "jimmy stop it. If you're just going to be an ass then I suggest that you just go home."

J: "I'm sorry…look I'm sorry for what happened last night and I was hoping to take you to dinner tonight to make up for it."

K: "oh I love to but I already…" she turns around and saw Sandy already walking inside his house.

J: " what?"

K: " um… nothing sure let's have dinner" while still looking at Sandy's house

J: "great"

Sandy decided to just went inside to avoid Kirsten and Jimmy have a fight again because of him. He was looking forward to spending dinner with her but of course Jimmy has to show up. 'that's because his her boyfriend' his mind told him, so he just looked out the window and watch Kirsten get into Jimmy's car. ' I'll never get to have her. All I can do is watch her from afar and be her friend. He should be with jimmy his better' he thinks to himself.