Author's Note: I was simply itching to do another sonnet, this time on ESB. I don't think it's as good as ANH, but I managed the rhymes and syllables. Tell me what you think. xD Never thought I'd be writing out responses to the reviews, either, but here they are:
Saber Girls: Thanks. :) Haha, I die inside if my rhymes don't match up (I'm a perfectionist like that). Even with this one I had to rearrange whole stanzas to fit, and the sentences may seem a bit awkaward because a lot of the time I choose the rhyme beforehand then do the rest of the sentence.
vegemite: xDDD Weird combo, eh?
Relyan: Thank you! Heard from the teacher person that the end couplet has to delve into more feeling and be different from the rest of the poem, so I'm satisfied with how it turned out.
Girl Who Likes To Write Stuff: Thanks:DD
THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK
The Golden Trio was seperated
Leia was flown into an asteroid
Luke learned from Yoda he was the fated
And even droid was split away from droid
On Dagobah Luke was just briefly trained
Solo and Leia shared a secret kiss
A vision of friendship Calrissian feigned
And Vader froze Solo cold with a hiss
Vader and Luke fought in an epic duel
But in his youth, Luke was slowly wearing
Vader tried to use his son as a tool
But Luke's small greed was submerged by caring
Luke Skywalker of that outer rim kind
With veiled others had his fate intertwined
Whaddya think? Should I write for RotJ?