Thanks to all that reviewed. Sorry but I'm horrible at commas lol I'll try and do better this time. well here's the story.
Bakura let out a cough, he was standing at the doorway, and Marik stopped and looked at him.
"What are you doing?" Bakura asked in an upset voice. Minai felt happy that someone had come in to stop Marik.
"I…" Marik started and then Bakura stopped him.
"There is no excuse. You have hurt her dearly." He went over to her and unchained Minai. Then to turned toward Marik and started shouting at him. Then he stopped and looked at her. "What are you doing here anyway Minai." Minai swallowed and looked down. Marik smiled.
"She was with Malik." Marik said with a smirk. Bakura looked angrily at Malik and then over at Minai.
"Minai… is this true?" Bakura asked her. She nodded. Bakura clenched his fists and glared at Malik again. Then he sighed and held Minai close whispering into her ear.
"He isn't good enough for you. My little one." He then kissed her. She didn't kiss back which angered him more. He picked her up and told Marik that he'd deal with him later.
"What about Malik?" Marik asked.
"That's my problem not yours." Bakura answered taking Minai to her room. Minai was scared that Bakura would do something horrible to her but was more afraid for Malik. Once there he took some healing salve and put it on the rip. She started to cry again. She was thankful that Bakura had come to stop Marik but she didn't like the fact that Malik would get punished. She looked over at Bakura after he put the salve on.
"Please don't hurt Malik." She whispered. Bakura looked up at her and sighed.
"He is just using you. Just like David was." He said calmly. She looked down and shook her head.
"No he's not like David." She whispered. Bakura only sighed.
"Poor, poor, poor Minai… he really has you thinking that he loves you doesn't he?" Bakura said as he lay down beside her. Bakura was very angry at Malik but not at Minai. He had too stay on Minai's good side unless he wanted to end up dead. He was confused as to why her powers didn't activate on Marik. He figured that she had been too scared. Minai looked at him confused.
"He does love me." She said. Bakura chuckled.
"No he doesn't. He's tiring to use you to get out." He leaned closer to her and kissed her lips again. Once again she did not kiss back. Bakura was getting tiered of this but decided that he had to endure if he wanted the power she possessed. She looked around and sighed. She was glad Bakura had come to save her, but…she wished that he didn't leave Marik alone with Malik. She looked at Bakura.
"You say that he doesn't love me… but he does. He tried to protect me from Marik." She said trying to figure out what Bakura was up too. Bakura chuckled.
"What better way to make a good impression on you?" Bakura asked with a smile. Minai looked at him. He was right. Tears started falling from her face. The thought of Malik just having used her hurt deeply. Bakura just held her close to comfort her. She looked up at Bakura still crying.
"Bakura I would like to talk to him."
"He's done enough damage for one night my sweet. Rest, for tomorrow will be a new day." He smirked as he said this for he knew he had her convinced that Malik was using her. SO she went under the covers and fell asleep fairly quick.
The next morning Bakura was at her bedside watching her as she slept. He felt her power radiating from her. He smirked as she started to wake. Today he would use Malik's love for her against him…
