Once again, I've got reviews -Tears of joy- For our great lord and buddha, the sun and moon light has shone an opening for me. Where my heart has burned the inspriration to upon the life within and out---If you have no idea of what I just typed out,leave it out -.-;;; It's nothing important-----
BTW: Kai still has his shark fins painted on his cheeks.
...Anywho, here's the list of the HEROS who had reviewed below!
maiyuka: The more reviews, the more I write! And you, update your fanfics! XD
Astera Snape: Thanks for the comment! And I STILL can't believe that my horrible writing has been added to your favorite list! It's a miracle! I feel so special... -sobs-
one-T: Yah -.-;;; It's bad enough that I'm a bad author'ess'... But what's also worst is that my chapters are short! -tears-
Bra-Two: Ooohhh mmmmy god! I've been reviewed by a one of the most famous authors on Fanfiction! You even added my fanfic to favorites! This is also truly an honored! I feel the same excitment as before when aries1391 had reviewed me >. This is a miracle!Thank you buddha, for helping me! I've been reviewedby the prodigy herself! Bra-Two, I just have a say, I'M YOUR BIGGEST FAN! Please please please please please please please update your story 'Gh5st'...I just might update faster----- -ahem- Sorry for my imature acts...It's just, once again, truly an honor for a bright author like you to review my simply pathetic and scrappy fanfic. I am humbled XD
The Hands of Fate and Destiny:...I think it was called 'Highschool Life' or something...Can't remember. -shrugs- Oh well...It's okay, I don't blame you on wrappin' me up. I understand for a professional writer like you would read one of my 'small minded' fanfics and not having an urged to correct and give me a lesson XD Oh, and of course you had hurt my feelings! But that was then, this is now. -nods- Sorry if I had made YOU feel bad -.-;;;; I love your fanfic! I felt it all---
Stouffergirl:...Er...That came out fast XD Well, here it is!
aries1391: Of course you are that great! Please please please please please please please please update your story ' When the KittyKat comes a calling'! I might just update faster as well XD Oh, hope you hadn't thought I stole your idea in 'Along To Die'...I haven't read that fanfic yet so yah...Hope you like this chapter!
Rejiita: Thanks! I hope you like this chapter too----
Devil's Child :You really think this is one of those 'super good Kai x Tala fanfictions' ? Gee, I really do feel proud of myself! -Strikes a heroic pose- Hope you don't mind this is gonna be Brooklyn's -ahem- turn.
Cathy: Hope you like this chapter! It'sBrooklyn's turn to get his -ahem- happy day...
alex mangan: O.o Oh wow...This is the first time anyone who had wanted to write like ME!Coolies nigro- Hope you like this chapter!
and-then-he-said-no: Hope you think this chapter is cool too yo!
catseyes77: And here it is--------------------------
Brooklyn's Lucky Day
It was around 7:00am when Kai woke up to find himself alone...He felt, strange. It was like there was something wrong in the room. A funny feeling as if something was out of place. Kai decided to leave that feeling alone and get dressed before going to the 2nd floor to get some breakfast.
When he was done with brushing his teeth and stuff, he head towards the closet. Unknown to him, there was a little surprise waiting for him! As Kai opened the wooden slide...What the teen saw was even more unbelievable then yesterday when he found out he was sleeping in a one-bed with Tala, (which wasone of the best nighst he had ever had...). What Kai saw was...was...a maiden's outfit..Instead of the dull kind, this one was more...Playboy style >.
It was like a combination---It was a playboy bunny suit. But out said of it was kinda like a maid's style. But waaayyy tighter. On the outside there was a maiden's shirt (obviously! I'm so stupid!). It was a tight black shirt inside that showed his shoulders, and a white vest outside that also showed his shoulders. Ared bow would be in the middle and the back. With a small gold playboy bunny in the middle of it.. Underwear...A short black mini skirt that showed off Kai's legs. A pair of black high heels..And-
Kai: Wait a minute...Are you makin' me a b-tch!
Me: Tsk, tsk. Who knew Kai Hiwatari had a potty mouth! Bad boy! You won't get any cookies then...
Kai: -.- Does it look like I care?
Me: -shrugs- Last time I saw you eat all of the cookies out of my cookie jar!
Kai: O.o Proof it then!
Me: Okay! -pulls out a video camera that records Kai stealing cookies- And there you have it!
Kai:...And back to me being a sexy maid--->>>>-under line SEXY-
two pairs of fishnet stockings (for whatever reasons, men are CRAZY about these!)...Which completes a playboy/maiden's outfit...
1...2...3... and- "AAAAHHHHHHHHAAAHHHHAHAHAAAAAAHH!" Kai shouted. Where was all his 'normal' clothes? There could of been only one person who can pull this off and it was, Tala Ivanov (Is that his last name?)!
Kai had no choice. He had to wear the maiden's outfit; or go out there with only boxers...(or naked)...He gave up. Kai changed into the outfit and was about to open the door when suddenly, there was a knock.
"Um...Kai, are you okay? We heard you shout... And are you ready yet? Everone's waiting for you at the restaurant...Especially me." said the person.
"Er...Not that I really want to be ready Brooklyn >. " Kai said. 'How can Icome out there looking like this?'he thought.
"What do you mean you don't want to be ready?"
"Kai?"
"..." Still no answer...
"Okay Kai, I'm comin' in.
When the red head opened the door, he saw a very very very very very very very very very VERY and EXTREMELY sexy Kai. Wearing a high and tight maiden's outfit.
-Background turns to a lovey pink,while heartsandbubbles are floating everywhere-
"Brooklyn...Snap out of it!" Kai yelled. Brooklyn instanly came back to reality and closed his mouth.This was the best day ever! What can be better then an almost looking playboy Kai!Actually, there is...A naked Kai!
He looked at the other teen up and down before giving a satifyed smirk. On the other hand, Kai was looking a little flushed. The red head closed the door and began to walk towards the younger teen with elegance.Brooklyn slyly moved his arms around Kai's waist and pulled him gently closer. His hands cuped together as if not wanting Kai to escape.
Insert song Candy Shop By 50 Cent Featuring Oliviahere-
"You know Kai, I wish you were my bed mate..." He said with a hint of lust. Kai was just standing there blushing because he didn't know what to do. 'Is this really happening? Are both of my crushes hitting on me-' His thoughts were interupted when Brooklyn kissed Kaion the lips and his tougue having an urge to enter Kai's mouth. Wanting to taste the other boy, and mixing both of their salivas together.
Kai had kissed back, but still not quite sure if he should. He was kind of shy for some unknown reason...But he began to wrap his arms around the older teen's neck.
Brooklyn place his hands down to Kai's bare legs and felt the boy'ssmooth skin. He then started to nip down to Kai's neck, causing a small yelp.Brooklyn began to suck harshly and gave Kai a big red mark. The older one then pushed the other playfully on the bed climbed on top.
His finger trailing down Kai's neck and began giving kisses again. He was about to remove the teen's clothes when there was a knock on the door.
Stopping Song here-
Brooklyn gave a small growl because of the interuption between he and Kai's 'playtime'. Kai sat up and waited for the red head to open the door.
When he did, there was a short philipine middle age lady holding a basket of Kai's clothes! She said that she was ordered by another red head to clean all of the other's clothes and come back tommorrow morning.But she had decided to give them back right now because she knew the other wouldn't have anything else to wear.
Brooklyn said thanks after the lady gave him the basket and walked over to Kai.
"It seems that someone was trying to pull a prank on you." He said. Kai gave a nod took out some clothes to change as he went to the bathroom. Minutes later, Kai came out wearing skater like outfit. The dual-hair teen was wearing a skin tight long-sleeved shirt inside and a Black T-shirt outside. On the shirt it said: 'Loserville, Population: YOU' in white letters. He also wore black cargo pants with a printed blue phoenix on his right leg. For shoes, was a pair of red and white Nike Shox. And accesories, a 'G Unit' necklace, and his diamond earrings with a HUGE diamond Guess watch.
"As usual Kai, you're looking fine. It's just too bad you're not looking fine in the maid outfit." Said Brooklyn with a wink. Kai blushed again buttook his skateboard and skateboarded down the halls. While Brooklyn was calling him to wait up -.-;;;;
Once again, another short anduseless chapter...I Really really really really REALLY suck when it comes to kissy write ups -.-;;; Sorry for disappointing you guys...And yes, Kai does know how to skateboard! He can do ANYTHING! Including flying! Just joking >.
Kai: ...
Want a cookie Kai?
Kai:...Find...
-gives cookie-Here you go Kai! Oh, and please review! No flames though...C yah!
-Hellspawn
