Love Hina "Beware of what you wish for"
Disclaimer: I do not Love Hina or any of the characters; they are property of Ken Akamatsu.
AN: Dialog between this symbol (-) mean thoughts of a character
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Chapter Two: Keitaro's worst week.
The next morning, Keitaro woke up in his bedroom without knowing how he got there
"This is strange, I do not remember how I got here. I was at the entrance and..."
Keitaro paused thinking of the weird events of the previous night.
"After that nothing should surprise me anymore"
At this moment he did not know how wrong he was, but the later events showed him. He was interrupted by the sound of something falling.
"Good morning Keitaro, how do you sleep?"
It was Naru, who had entered the room through the hole on the ceiling, to say good morning to Keitaro. She sat next to Keitaro.
"Fine, even though I do not how I got here"
He put his glasses on, stretched his arms and sat in front of Naru.
"Of course you do not remember, you fainted"
-That explains why I do not remember anything after she hugged me-
"Well, but that was to be expected after Motoko attacked you with her sword. I think she overdid it this time"
-What, she really thinks it was Motoko's fault. She usually punches me for less than that-
"I think you should ask her to not carry her sword in here, after all you are the manager, aren't you?"
Just the thought of what special technique Motoko will use on him for even mentioning it gave Keitaro chills.
"I am sure Motoko did not mean any harm, you know how she always misunderstand things"
-Besides it was not only Motoko's fault that I fainted. Your weird behavior helped a little-
Meanwhile Su was on his way to wake up Keitaro with her daily kick on the head. She walked to Keitaro's room, open the door and was ready to jump, when she saw Keitaro and Naru, still in pajamas, sitting on the floor talking.
"Good Morning, Su"
Naru and Keitaro greeted Su
"You slept together"
"No Su, you misunderstand. What really happened was..."
But Keitaro could not continue, because Su began to yell while she was jumping around the room.
"Keitaro and Naru slept together"
They were suddenly interrupted by the sound of the door sliding. Motoko entered the room running followed by Shinobu. They wanted to know why Su was yelling.
"Su, what is going on? Why are you yelling?"
"Keitaro and Naru slept together"
When Shinobu hear this, she ran away crying. Motoko become angry and draw his sword.
"I know you were faking your illness, so you can keep with your perverted acts without punishment"
"No, Motoko wait, Su misunderstood"
"Urashima, you could at least admit your guilt. Zanmaken!"
Keitaro covered his face expecting the worst and prepared for the blow. But after a while nothing happened. He uncovered his face to know what was going on. What he watched shocked him. Naru was holding Motoko's sword.
"Naru sempai, what are you doing?
"Sorry Motoko, but I can not let you hurt Keitaro"
"What? You have not protected him before, why you do it now?"
"Because I love him"
"What?"
Yelled the girls surprised.
"Y You do?"
Asked Keitaro nervously.
"Of course I do, silly"
Answered Naru smiling. Keitaro could not believe it; he was expecting her to deny it or at least to doubt a bit. But no, she had said it very sure and smiling.
"Urashima, what kind of trick is this?"
"There is no trick Motoko, I love Keitaro. And I must warn you, that if you try to attack Keitaro again, you will have to face me first"
- She has to face Naru first, what is going on here. She has been acting like this since yesterday, maybe she is sick. What am I thinking? This is the best thing that could ever happen to me -
As Keitaro began to think of all the wonderful things he and Naru could do, a flood of blood began to pour from his nose. Motoko seeing this was preparing to hit him.
"You are having perverted thoughts again"
"Motoko, do not even try it"
Motoko was very angry, but she did not want to fight Naru
"I let it pass this time, Urashima"
Frustrated she walked out of the manager room followed by Su.
"She will not be bothering you anymore"
"I think we shall explain Shinobu what really happened"
"Do not worry Keitaro, I will explain her while I help her make breakfast"
"Thank you, Naru"
"Well, I let you alone, so you can change your clothes"
Naru left the room.
-That sure was weird, I mean I cannot complain but Naru does not usually behave like that-
Keitaro changed his clothes and headed to the dinning room. There Shinobu and Naru, after Naru explained all to Shinobu, were serving the breakfast.
"Keitaro you are here, I missed you"
"What do you mean Naru? It just took me five minutes to get here"
"Yes, but every minute I pass without you is like an eternity"
"Sure, but I am here now"
-This is getting weirder, maybe she is really sick. Maybe I hit her in the head or something-
"Here Keitaro, this is your breakfast. I made it especially for you"
"Thank you Naru"
"Why does Keitaro get a special breakfast?"
Asked Su when she watched Keitaro's breakfast.
"Because he works very hard as our manager"
"That is not fair, I always work hard making new inventions"
"By the way Su, I think you should stop testing your inventions on Keitaro"
"What? You can make me do that"
"You are right Su, I can not make you stop doing it, but it will be a shame if someone forgets to buy bananas for our pantry"
Su jumped from his seat.
"You, you would not..."
"Do you want to find it out?"
Su ran to her room whining. This was the first time Keitaro watched Su do something like that.
"Naru, I think this time you overdid it"
"I may have been a little bit rude but if that is what it takes to stop her so be it"
-A little bit rude, the only thing she likes more than bananas is her big brother-
The rest of the group ate the breakfast in silence. When they finished Keitaro washed the dishes with the help of Naru. The rest of the day passed without more troubles, until they gathered again for dinner.
"Have you seen Su?"
Shinobu asked, because Su was always the first to arrive, but she was not there yet. But before anybody could answer a mecha tama with a strange flat shell entered the room.
"What is this thing?"
Asked Keitaro a little puzzled. Meanwhile Shinobu and Naru where inspecting the strange object, Motoko was paralyzed by the fear.
"It seems Su has a new invention, it has a note on it"
Answered Shinobu, and then she read the note.
"Su says she is sorry but she is busy working and can not come down for dinner, she request that we put her meal on the tray of this mecha tama"
Shinobu puts Su's food on the mecha tama, when she finished she pressed a button as instructed on the note and the mecha tama return the way it came. Then everyone continue with their dinner.
"Girls, I have been thinking that Keitaro has earned the right to use the hot springs"
"What? I will not allow such behavior. Naru sempai I respect you very much, but I think that is out of the question"
"Calm down, Motoko. I did not mean that we bathe with him, even though that will not bother me ..."
The mention of this caused Keitaro's nose to pour blood again. But Motoko was too angry with Naru to even notice this.
"What I mean is that we can make a schedule and assign an hour each day to Keitaro, so he could use the hot springs. And the rest of the day will remain for us as usually. What do you think?"
"Well I do not have any inconveniences"
Answered Shinobu smiling.
"As long as he does not use that as an excuse to spy on us"
Answered Motoko still angry.
"I promise you will not regret it"
Keitaro was very happy; he finally could use the hot springs. They continued eating; when they finished they left for their respective rooms.
-What a strange day, I guessed I cannot complain. Nonetheless I should talk to Naru about her behavior-
Keitaro changed his clothes, and was ready to sleep when a noise caught his attention. He put on his glasses and looked around.
"Keitaro it is me"
It was Naru, who was holding a sleeping bag.
"Naru what are you doing here"
"I am going to sleep here"
"What?"
"I said that I am going to sleep here"
"Yes I heard that, what I mean is that is not right that you do it"
"Do not worry I bring my sleeping bag, I am going to sleep near the door"
"Are you sure? Do not you think it would be more comfortable if you sleep on your room"
"Well if you rather sleep in my room, it is okay for me"
"No, what I try to said was that you would feel better sleeping in your room"
"No I would be fine, I am more concerned about you"
-About me, I am not the one acting weird-
"Why are you concerned about me?"
"Because Su has been working on a new invention I am sure she is going to try it in you"
- She always do that, why are you so worried about it? -
"I do not think you should be so worried, Su always do that"
"Even though I feel better if I can stay here to check on you"
- Well I think there is no harm in letting her to stay -
"Okay Naru if that make you feel better, you can stay"
"Thank you Keitaro"
Naru settled his bed near the door of the room. Keitaro decided to try to sleep even though the presence of Naru made him feel uncomfortable. Naru fell asleep watching Keitaro.
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A week later
Keitaro was at his room door looking to both sides of the corridor.
- I think she is gone, I fell guilty but I needed some time for myself. It was a good idea to tell her I really would like some bread from my parent's bakery, I think that is going to take her an hour or maybe more -
He entered his room. Sat near his desk, took a notepad from a drawer and began to write on it.
"This have been the worst week of my life, at first I think that this was the best think that could ever happen to me. Naru protected me from Motoko's attack and told her not to harm me or she would have to face her. Then she gave a special breakfast, it looked strange but it tasted very good. Next she persuaded Su not to test her inventions on me, I have to admit that sometimes it was fun to test them, but most of the time I got hurt. One of the best things was that she convinced the girls of letting me use the hot springs, even though she was the first that denied me their use."
He remembered all the nice things Naru do during the week, but then the memories of all the weird thing she has done came to his mind.
"But then she began to act even weirder, if that is possible. She insisted on sleeping on my room to protect me of the girls attack. Then she began to follow me around, she was like my shadow. I have not had any girlfriend before, but I do not think that is the way they act. I am beginning to think she is obsessed with me or something like that. I mean I like her a lot but this is getting out of hand."
He was sad. He could not believe that this, what he always had dreamed of, someone he could care for and that cared him in return, could go so wrong. With this it mind he continued to write.
"That was not the worst, the worst is the way the girls have treat me since then. Shinobu runs away crying every time she sees me. Su just leaves his room to go to school; she even sends a mecha tama to pick her food. Motoko just ignores me; she even stops trying to punish me for my mistakes. If Naru continues acting like this, I will have to leave Hinata sou for the good of the girls"
Keitaro was too concentrated writing, to notice when Naru arrived carrying the box of bread.
"I am sorry Keitaro, I did not I was causing you so much troubles"
- I should stop talking out loud when I am writing on my diary -
"Naru, wait let me explain it"
"There is no need for you to explain anything"
She ran, Keitaro noticed tears running down her cheeks and ran too.
"Naru, wait"
But Naru did not stop until they got to the roof of Hinata sou.
"Sorry for all the troubles I caused you Keitaro, I rather jump from here than to cause you any pain"
"Naru wait, there is no need to do that"
"But you want to leave because of me, I rather not to live than to live without you"
- She has really gone crazy; I better do something -
Without thinking Keitaro ran to grab Naru, but as usual he tripped and felt taking Naru with him. Fortunately they landed on some bushes, Naru on top of Keitaro.
"Keitaro, why do you do that?"
"It was an accident I did not mean to throw you"
"No, I mean why do you try to stop me?"
"Do you have to ask? Is for the same reason as you"
"What do you mean?"
"I rather not to live than to live without you"
"You mean it"
"Of course I do, with all my heart"
"But all the things you were writing on your diary"
"That was not my diary, I was writing... a play yes I was writing a play, but I do not have a great imagination so I just use the names of the residents on it"
- What a dumb excuse, I hope she believes me -
Keitaro was lucky because Naru arrived when he was writing about her weird behavior and leaving hinata sou and did not hear anything else.
"So you are not leaving?"
"Of course not, I would not leave you, I will never do that"
"Keitaro I am so happy"
She hugged Keitaro. They stayed there watching the stars. When Naru fell asleep Keitaro carried her to their temporary room. He carefully placed her on the bed and covered her with a blanket.
"Good night, Naru"
Keitaro was too tired to change his clothes, so he only took out his shoes and went to his bed.
- What a day, I think I should forget about leaving. Anyway is time to stop running and solve my problems. First thing in the morning I will go see aunt Haruka for advice. There is nothing I can do now, so I better sleep now -
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What do you think? Feel free to review it. I write the dialog and the narration apart this time, so you can tell which way do you think is better. I hope you find less spelling mistakes.
Disclaimer: I do not Love Hina or any of the characters; they are property of Ken Akamatsu.
AN: Dialog between this symbol (-) mean thoughts of a character
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Chapter Two: Keitaro's worst week.
The next morning, Keitaro woke up in his bedroom without knowing how he got there
"This is strange, I do not remember how I got here. I was at the entrance and..."
Keitaro paused thinking of the weird events of the previous night.
"After that nothing should surprise me anymore"
At this moment he did not know how wrong he was, but the later events showed him. He was interrupted by the sound of something falling.
"Good morning Keitaro, how do you sleep?"
It was Naru, who had entered the room through the hole on the ceiling, to say good morning to Keitaro. She sat next to Keitaro.
"Fine, even though I do not how I got here"
He put his glasses on, stretched his arms and sat in front of Naru.
"Of course you do not remember, you fainted"
-That explains why I do not remember anything after she hugged me-
"Well, but that was to be expected after Motoko attacked you with her sword. I think she overdid it this time"
-What, she really thinks it was Motoko's fault. She usually punches me for less than that-
"I think you should ask her to not carry her sword in here, after all you are the manager, aren't you?"
Just the thought of what special technique Motoko will use on him for even mentioning it gave Keitaro chills.
"I am sure Motoko did not mean any harm, you know how she always misunderstand things"
-Besides it was not only Motoko's fault that I fainted. Your weird behavior helped a little-
Meanwhile Su was on his way to wake up Keitaro with her daily kick on the head. She walked to Keitaro's room, open the door and was ready to jump, when she saw Keitaro and Naru, still in pajamas, sitting on the floor talking.
"Good Morning, Su"
Naru and Keitaro greeted Su
"You slept together"
"No Su, you misunderstand. What really happened was..."
But Keitaro could not continue, because Su began to yell while she was jumping around the room.
"Keitaro and Naru slept together"
They were suddenly interrupted by the sound of the door sliding. Motoko entered the room running followed by Shinobu. They wanted to know why Su was yelling.
"Su, what is going on? Why are you yelling?"
"Keitaro and Naru slept together"
When Shinobu hear this, she ran away crying. Motoko become angry and draw his sword.
"I know you were faking your illness, so you can keep with your perverted acts without punishment"
"No, Motoko wait, Su misunderstood"
"Urashima, you could at least admit your guilt. Zanmaken!"
Keitaro covered his face expecting the worst and prepared for the blow. But after a while nothing happened. He uncovered his face to know what was going on. What he watched shocked him. Naru was holding Motoko's sword.
"Naru sempai, what are you doing?
"Sorry Motoko, but I can not let you hurt Keitaro"
"What? You have not protected him before, why you do it now?"
"Because I love him"
"What?"
Yelled the girls surprised.
"Y You do?"
Asked Keitaro nervously.
"Of course I do, silly"
Answered Naru smiling. Keitaro could not believe it; he was expecting her to deny it or at least to doubt a bit. But no, she had said it very sure and smiling.
"Urashima, what kind of trick is this?"
"There is no trick Motoko, I love Keitaro. And I must warn you, that if you try to attack Keitaro again, you will have to face me first"
- She has to face Naru first, what is going on here. She has been acting like this since yesterday, maybe she is sick. What am I thinking? This is the best thing that could ever happen to me -
As Keitaro began to think of all the wonderful things he and Naru could do, a flood of blood began to pour from his nose. Motoko seeing this was preparing to hit him.
"You are having perverted thoughts again"
"Motoko, do not even try it"
Motoko was very angry, but she did not want to fight Naru
"I let it pass this time, Urashima"
Frustrated she walked out of the manager room followed by Su.
"She will not be bothering you anymore"
"I think we shall explain Shinobu what really happened"
"Do not worry Keitaro, I will explain her while I help her make breakfast"
"Thank you, Naru"
"Well, I let you alone, so you can change your clothes"
Naru left the room.
-That sure was weird, I mean I cannot complain but Naru does not usually behave like that-
Keitaro changed his clothes and headed to the dinning room. There Shinobu and Naru, after Naru explained all to Shinobu, were serving the breakfast.
"Keitaro you are here, I missed you"
"What do you mean Naru? It just took me five minutes to get here"
"Yes, but every minute I pass without you is like an eternity"
"Sure, but I am here now"
-This is getting weirder, maybe she is really sick. Maybe I hit her in the head or something-
"Here Keitaro, this is your breakfast. I made it especially for you"
"Thank you Naru"
"Why does Keitaro get a special breakfast?"
Asked Su when she watched Keitaro's breakfast.
"Because he works very hard as our manager"
"That is not fair, I always work hard making new inventions"
"By the way Su, I think you should stop testing your inventions on Keitaro"
"What? You can make me do that"
"You are right Su, I can not make you stop doing it, but it will be a shame if someone forgets to buy bananas for our pantry"
Su jumped from his seat.
"You, you would not..."
"Do you want to find it out?"
Su ran to her room whining. This was the first time Keitaro watched Su do something like that.
"Naru, I think this time you overdid it"
"I may have been a little bit rude but if that is what it takes to stop her so be it"
-A little bit rude, the only thing she likes more than bananas is her big brother-
The rest of the group ate the breakfast in silence. When they finished Keitaro washed the dishes with the help of Naru. The rest of the day passed without more troubles, until they gathered again for dinner.
"Have you seen Su?"
Shinobu asked, because Su was always the first to arrive, but she was not there yet. But before anybody could answer a mecha tama with a strange flat shell entered the room.
"What is this thing?"
Asked Keitaro a little puzzled. Meanwhile Shinobu and Naru where inspecting the strange object, Motoko was paralyzed by the fear.
"It seems Su has a new invention, it has a note on it"
Answered Shinobu, and then she read the note.
"Su says she is sorry but she is busy working and can not come down for dinner, she request that we put her meal on the tray of this mecha tama"
Shinobu puts Su's food on the mecha tama, when she finished she pressed a button as instructed on the note and the mecha tama return the way it came. Then everyone continue with their dinner.
"Girls, I have been thinking that Keitaro has earned the right to use the hot springs"
"What? I will not allow such behavior. Naru sempai I respect you very much, but I think that is out of the question"
"Calm down, Motoko. I did not mean that we bathe with him, even though that will not bother me ..."
The mention of this caused Keitaro's nose to pour blood again. But Motoko was too angry with Naru to even notice this.
"What I mean is that we can make a schedule and assign an hour each day to Keitaro, so he could use the hot springs. And the rest of the day will remain for us as usually. What do you think?"
"Well I do not have any inconveniences"
Answered Shinobu smiling.
"As long as he does not use that as an excuse to spy on us"
Answered Motoko still angry.
"I promise you will not regret it"
Keitaro was very happy; he finally could use the hot springs. They continued eating; when they finished they left for their respective rooms.
-What a strange day, I guessed I cannot complain. Nonetheless I should talk to Naru about her behavior-
Keitaro changed his clothes, and was ready to sleep when a noise caught his attention. He put on his glasses and looked around.
"Keitaro it is me"
It was Naru, who was holding a sleeping bag.
"Naru what are you doing here"
"I am going to sleep here"
"What?"
"I said that I am going to sleep here"
"Yes I heard that, what I mean is that is not right that you do it"
"Do not worry I bring my sleeping bag, I am going to sleep near the door"
"Are you sure? Do not you think it would be more comfortable if you sleep on your room"
"Well if you rather sleep in my room, it is okay for me"
"No, what I try to said was that you would feel better sleeping in your room"
"No I would be fine, I am more concerned about you"
-About me, I am not the one acting weird-
"Why are you concerned about me?"
"Because Su has been working on a new invention I am sure she is going to try it in you"
- She always do that, why are you so worried about it? -
"I do not think you should be so worried, Su always do that"
"Even though I feel better if I can stay here to check on you"
- Well I think there is no harm in letting her to stay -
"Okay Naru if that make you feel better, you can stay"
"Thank you Keitaro"
Naru settled his bed near the door of the room. Keitaro decided to try to sleep even though the presence of Naru made him feel uncomfortable. Naru fell asleep watching Keitaro.
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A week later
Keitaro was at his room door looking to both sides of the corridor.
- I think she is gone, I fell guilty but I needed some time for myself. It was a good idea to tell her I really would like some bread from my parent's bakery, I think that is going to take her an hour or maybe more -
He entered his room. Sat near his desk, took a notepad from a drawer and began to write on it.
"This have been the worst week of my life, at first I think that this was the best think that could ever happen to me. Naru protected me from Motoko's attack and told her not to harm me or she would have to face her. Then she gave a special breakfast, it looked strange but it tasted very good. Next she persuaded Su not to test her inventions on me, I have to admit that sometimes it was fun to test them, but most of the time I got hurt. One of the best things was that she convinced the girls of letting me use the hot springs, even though she was the first that denied me their use."
He remembered all the nice things Naru do during the week, but then the memories of all the weird thing she has done came to his mind.
"But then she began to act even weirder, if that is possible. She insisted on sleeping on my room to protect me of the girls attack. Then she began to follow me around, she was like my shadow. I have not had any girlfriend before, but I do not think that is the way they act. I am beginning to think she is obsessed with me or something like that. I mean I like her a lot but this is getting out of hand."
He was sad. He could not believe that this, what he always had dreamed of, someone he could care for and that cared him in return, could go so wrong. With this it mind he continued to write.
"That was not the worst, the worst is the way the girls have treat me since then. Shinobu runs away crying every time she sees me. Su just leaves his room to go to school; she even sends a mecha tama to pick her food. Motoko just ignores me; she even stops trying to punish me for my mistakes. If Naru continues acting like this, I will have to leave Hinata sou for the good of the girls"
Keitaro was too concentrated writing, to notice when Naru arrived carrying the box of bread.
"I am sorry Keitaro, I did not I was causing you so much troubles"
- I should stop talking out loud when I am writing on my diary -
"Naru, wait let me explain it"
"There is no need for you to explain anything"
She ran, Keitaro noticed tears running down her cheeks and ran too.
"Naru, wait"
But Naru did not stop until they got to the roof of Hinata sou.
"Sorry for all the troubles I caused you Keitaro, I rather jump from here than to cause you any pain"
"Naru wait, there is no need to do that"
"But you want to leave because of me, I rather not to live than to live without you"
- She has really gone crazy; I better do something -
Without thinking Keitaro ran to grab Naru, but as usual he tripped and felt taking Naru with him. Fortunately they landed on some bushes, Naru on top of Keitaro.
"Keitaro, why do you do that?"
"It was an accident I did not mean to throw you"
"No, I mean why do you try to stop me?"
"Do you have to ask? Is for the same reason as you"
"What do you mean?"
"I rather not to live than to live without you"
"You mean it"
"Of course I do, with all my heart"
"But all the things you were writing on your diary"
"That was not my diary, I was writing... a play yes I was writing a play, but I do not have a great imagination so I just use the names of the residents on it"
- What a dumb excuse, I hope she believes me -
Keitaro was lucky because Naru arrived when he was writing about her weird behavior and leaving hinata sou and did not hear anything else.
"So you are not leaving?"
"Of course not, I would not leave you, I will never do that"
"Keitaro I am so happy"
She hugged Keitaro. They stayed there watching the stars. When Naru fell asleep Keitaro carried her to their temporary room. He carefully placed her on the bed and covered her with a blanket.
"Good night, Naru"
Keitaro was too tired to change his clothes, so he only took out his shoes and went to his bed.
- What a day, I think I should forget about leaving. Anyway is time to stop running and solve my problems. First thing in the morning I will go see aunt Haruka for advice. There is nothing I can do now, so I better sleep now -
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What do you think? Feel free to review it. I write the dialog and the narration apart this time, so you can tell which way do you think is better. I hope you find less spelling mistakes.