Love Hina "Beware of what you wish for"
Disclaimer: I do not Love Hina or any of the characters; they are property of Ken Akamatsu.
AN: - - Thoughts
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Chapter eleven: Keitaro and Naru.
Keitaro walked slowly to the tea shop to met Naru. He was very focused in his thoughts about his next step.
-I should talk to Kame and asked for his help; he might not be able to give me the Black vase but at least he could make me go to pararakelse. Yes, that's what I should do, but first I have to meet Naru. Now that I can undo the wish, this may be my last chance to be with her-
When he entered the tea shop, Naru was waiting for him.
-Oh no, I'm in troubles. I better apologize and beg for mercy or I'm going to end walking back to the inn alone-
Keitaro smiled and sat next to Naru.
"I'm sorry for being late"
-What a lame apology, I won't blame her if she just hit me. I should think of something better-
Naru looked at him with a bit of suspicion and then she asked.
"Where's the book you needed?"
-Well she isn't angry, maybe she didn't have to wait much…the book…Oh great, I forgot about that. I should make an excuse, a good one-
"The book, Oh that"
-Think, think-
"I couldn't find it"
Keitaro said faking disappointment.
-What an excellent excuse, I'll be lucky if she doesn't send me to Okinawa with a Naru-punch-
"That's a shame"
-Well, she believed me. Now I should change the subject or she will keep asking about the book-
"Yeah, I really wanted to read it. But what about you, did you find everything you wanted"
"Yes, I found this…"
Naru kept talking about all the things she saw and bought, while Keitaro was just staring at her. This continued until Naru got angry.
"Keitaro are you listening to me?"
"Sorry Naru. I just got lost in your beauty"
Naru blushed and forgot about being angry.
"You…you mean it"
"Of course I mean it. You're the most gorgeous woman I've ever laid eyes on"
Naru blushed even redder. She kissed Keitaro and then looked at him sternly and said.
"And I better be the only woman you laid eyes on"
Keitaro smiled too and hugged Naru.
"I won't dare watch any other women"
"I know you won't"
-I will make you fall in love with me once the wish is undone. I will, no matter what. I promise I will-
They laughed about it and then they kissed.
"Keitaro, would you like to walk in the park?"
"With you to wherever you want"
Keitaro paid the bill, grabbed Naru's hand and all the stuff she had bought then walked to the park.
"Isn't it nice just the two of us walking?"
"Yes, Naru this is very nice"
-Of course it will be nicer if I didn't have to carry all this packages, but…-
"You should be tired of carrying those packages. Do you want to sit and rest?"
"Yes, that would be nice"
Naru and Keitaro sat on a bench. Naru rest his head on keitaro's shoulder.
-This is so nice, sitting here together like a real couple. Now that I think of this Naru is behaving more normal, she even got mad at me. It's like aunt Haruka said, if I gave her time she would adjust to the change. What I'm talking about, she is like this for my wish not because she really loves me…. That doesn't matter now, I better enjoy this moment-
Keitaro noticed that it was getting colder.
"Naru are you cold?"
"A little, but I'm fine"
Keitaro looked at her and asked.
"Are you sure?"
"Yeah, I'm fine"
Keitaro wasn't sure she was telling the truth, so he decided to hug her.
"Thank you"
Naru kissed him.
"You are welcome"
Keitaro kissed her back.
-I'm enjoying this very much, but it's getting late and cold-
"I think is getting late, we should go back to the inn"
"Yes, you're right"
Naru answered disappointed. They stood up of the bench, gathered the packages and walked to the train station holding hands. Once there they took a train to the inn.
"It was a nice day, wasn't it?"
"With you any day is perfect"
Naru answered with a kissed.
"You've changed a lot Keitaro"
"What do you mean?"
"Well, you are a lot more confident, you are more focus and you have fewer "accidents". You are getting very good at compliments too"
"All is thanks to you"
"I might have helped a bit but …"
Naru was interrupted by a kiss. They remained silent the rest of the trip.
-Maybe she is right; I've change even if it is a bit. I hope these changes help me to get you back-
Once they got to the inn they grabbed their packages and walked to the entrance. When they entered they found Kitsune in the living room watching the TV.
"So, how was your day? Any luck Keitaro?"
Kitsune asked with her usual evil grin.
"Indeed I had…but how much well that's something you'll have to find out"
Keitaro winked at Kitsune. Kitsune looked at Naru whom just smiled.
"You…you"
The answer shocked Kitsune, she had expected Keitaro to blush and babble but instead he had turned the joke on her.
"Good night Kitsune"
Naru and Keitaro walked to Naru's room. Once there Keitaro left all the packages on the floor.
"You really gave her something to think about"
"Don't worry tomorrow I'll tell her I was just kidding"
"No, that's okay. Leave it like that for a couple of days. At least she won't be bothering us with her questions"
"Yes it would be interesting to watch her trying to find what happened"
"Besides she would think twice before making fun of you again"
"Yeah, I'm beginning to think you're right about me changing"
"I told you"
"From now on I'm going to believe everything you tell me"
"You'll be better if you do it"
"Really?"
Keitaro replied seductively.
"Of course, like if I told you that it would be a very good idea to kiss me now"
"Well, since I promise I'd believe you I'll have to do it"
Keitaro kissed her, Naru smiled and kissed him back. They kept like that for a while until Keitaro finally decided to interrupt.
"It's getting late; I should leave now so you can sleep. Good night Naru"
"Good night Keitaro"
Keitaro climbed down the ladder that leaded to his room. Once there he sat on his futon to think.
-What a wonderful day I just had. It's a shame it has to end…Oh that's right, I almost forgot about talking to Kame. I think it's a little late to try to talk to him. I better wait until tomorrow, yeah that would be the best thing to do-
Then he decided the best was to sleep.
-I won't solve anything just worrying. Tomorrow I'll do something-
Then he put on his pajamas and went to sleep.
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