Ok, so I took a look at the original and I decided that it would be too much of a burden to actually rip it upart. So I decided to rewrite it so that it will make more sense.It won't have four big parts with about 10,000+ words per ch. This will also give people who looked at it and saw the huge word count (with only 4 ch's) a chance to actually read the story.
Summary
In 1954 two French scientists and two Japanese programmers created X.A.N.A. He was created to scan the world for threats against France. But of course they made a mistake in the primary protocol, so X.A.N.A. decided that he would take over the world instead. But before he got out of hand the French shut him down. Then in 2004 a car company bought the factory and an idiot worker restarted him. The company in return left the factory. But when he was restarted some a fail-safe program was activated and Aelita was created. Then four ordinary students found the computer. They are currently working on a materialization program for Aelita and saving the world from harm.
In 2004 the same year the same company that made X.A.N.A made a computer in the U.S. called ZED. The computer was going to keep the U.S. safe from any threat just like X.A.N.A. was supposed to. Instead of three scanners there was only one, which left room for other programs. These new programs made ZED more powerful than X.A.N.A. The programmers said they fixed the bugs. Of course they didn't and the terror started all over again.
Also keep in mind that most of this is SciFi. So if before you flame at me and say "that's not possible", think, is it SciFi or is it supposed to be real.
That's the summary, I posted the first ch so you can see how it all was supposed to start. The gang will appear in ch two.
Man I talk to much, sorry about that.