Thanks for the reviews.
Lord Maximus: I'm glad you like the story so far. I will be preserving some of the upcomingfight scenes from the original.
Tomarrow I will start to post two ch's at once because this is a revision and I already have most of it written. So I hope you don't mind if I do this.
Total Destruction
"Odd be careful those blocks don't look entirely like X.A.N.A.' any more," said Jeremy.
"He's right they must have been modified by that ZED character," said Aelita.
"LASER ARROW!" yelled Odd.
His laser arrow flew towards the block, but the block somehow dodged it. Kitty fired and arrow at it and she hit her target dead on. The block blew up in a shower of neon green and black parts. Then the remaining block popped lasers out of its sides.
"Jeremy the block is growing arms," said Odd.
Then lasers flew through the air; Kitty Jeremy and Aelita ran into the classroom Odd was hit multiple times by the lasers.
"ODD!" yelled Yumi.
Kitty ran out of the classroom and shielded Odd against the lasers. He got a clear shot and this time hit the block dead on. It blew up and Kitty fell to the ground.
"KITTY! NO!" yelled Odd.
Even though he was in pain from his laser burns he still sat Kitty up to make sure she was ok. She felt her neck and found that she still had a pulse. Then her eyes opened and she spoke.
"Odd," she said weakly.
"Yes, Kitty," said Odd.
"Am I still alive?" asked Kitty.
"Yes," said Odd.
She laid her head back and closed her eyes. Odd sat down next to her.
"It seems like ZED'S weapons are not fully functional, usually the lasers would go through you, instead they just leave burns," said Jeremy.
"Those were probably just experimental blocks," said Yumi.
"What are you guys talking about?" asked Emily.
"Well…" said Jeremy as the building began to shake.
"What's happening?" asked Yumi.
"The building seems to be collapsing," said Jeremy.
"JEREMY LOOK!" yelled Aelita as she pointed out a window.
They both saw a Krab coming their way. It fired a laser at the building and in return the floor began to give and bow inward.
"Ok, we are in big trouble," said Jeremy.
Just then G-6 smashed through the ceiling.
"Quick everyone inside," said G-6.
"Your crazy we can't all fit," said Jeremy.
"I beg to differ," said G-6.
His body extended to be the length of a limmo. Jeremy, Odd, Aelita, Yumi, and Emily helped get KC, Ulrich and Kitty into the car. Once everyone was in G-6 left the building just as it collapsed. The Krab walked on and didn't even pay any attention to G-6 flying towards the factory. The Krab was busy destroying all the other buildings in its path. Once at the factory, Jeremy started to protest.
"Why are we hear?" asked Jeremy.
"Listen, X.A.N.A. and ZED have left, you can even check the hole I the roof. It's over where X.A.N.A.'S computer used to be," said G-6.
"I just don't understand what are ZED and X.A.N.A. up to?" asked Jeremy.
"Take a look," said G-6 as he showed Jeremy a picture of most of France.
Everything was leveled. Most of the buildings were on fire, G-6 also showed close ups of dead bodies, on pair in particular Jeremy noticed, it was his parents. He put his hand to the screen as tears began to fall from his eyes. Aelita was watching the whole thing and she comforted him.
"There all dead," said Jeremy.
"Jeremy its ok," said Aelita.
"NO! Don't you get it, everyone is dead except us," said Jeremy in an angry tone.
"Well not exactly, most of the armies have survived and they found people that survived the initial attack," said G-6.
"I don't want to see any more of it," said Jeremy as he left the car. Aelita followed.
"Listen I need everyone to get out. I'm sorry I don't have any blankets or sleeping bags but I need to be out side patrolling for any enemy forces. It will be very hard with me at this length and with people in me," said G-6.
Ulrich could walk a little now so he got out him self and staggered to a wall and leaned against it. Yumi went over to him. Odd brought Kitty out of the car, she was conscious now. Emily helped KC get out of the car. G-6 went back to his normal length and then flew outside.
"Ulrich, are you feeling better?" asked Yumi.
"Now I am," said Ulrich as he sat down.
Yumi sat next to him and the stared at each other for a few seconds, and then they both closed the gap between them and kissed for the first time.
"Hey Kitty," said Odd.
"Yes," said Kitty.
"Thanks for saving me back there," said Odd.
"Don't mention it," said Kitty. "Oh and Odd…"
Kitty started to say something else but Odd's lips touching hers stopped her. As soon as she began to return the kiss Odd broke it.
"Odd, why did you stop?" asked Kitty.
Odd smiled at her and she smiled back. He closed the gap between them again and they began to kiss. Now we leave the two lovebirds alone and go over to Emily and KC.
"How are you feeling?" asked Emily.
"Better," said KC.
"I want to know what you did back there when you changed your appearance," said Emily.
"It's just a thing I found out about myself not to long ago, I don't really remember how I got this power but somehow I got it," said KC.
She just started into his eyes. 'He has the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever scene. Actually I've never seen blue eyes like this before, they're so light but then they have some depth to them,' she thought to herself. KC was staring into her eyes too. 'She has such wonderful brown eyes. I just can't take my eyes off of hers. When she stares at me like this it makes me feel all warm inside,' KC thought. Then the two broke their gaze upon each other.
"Well, um… so where are you from?" asked Emily.
"America," said KC.
"So what's it like?" asked Emily.
KC tells her about America until eventually they both fall asleep together.
Some romance was needed after that big fight. Next ch we see someone who was supposed to be dead.