Must hurry and get to the part I left off at! Anyways, YEAH REVIEWS! Or REVIEW!
Winged Sence- She is! I was LONG gone before you came to fanfiction! (Now I feel like an old person some how!) No one's ever asked me before! But I'll tell you the answer! No. But that's a good story idea! WAIT! I ALREADY DID THAT IN "Teacher's pet"! Now I'm confused. And why would I want to take off a review? And what's a span review? I'm more confused now! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Midnight: Was that Felix in that review! HE'S SO MY IDOL! I want to be just like him when I grow up!
I bet you do! Oh for those who didn't read "New Partner" when it first got out, Midnight is my black kitten who creates havoc and destrution!
Midnight: I also had a mace! But Meowzi took it away!
You were SO annoying with it!
Midnight: Yeah so, that still do…
Disclaimer: WE DO NOT OWN SLY COOPER! GET THE STORY ON WITH IT ALREADY!
Midnight: Alright.
Jeez you don't have to be so mean!
The Twist
Carmelita had made her way to the second floor. She slowly made her way to the room where the silent alarm was tripped. The only thing Carmelita could think about was about Emily. "She's probably scared being left alone out there." Carmelita thought. She shook her head, "Get a hold of yourself girl! She'll be all right! You have to do your job and babysitting isn't one of them!" Carmelita shouted mentally.
Carmelita had made her way to the room noticing it was empty. "Maybe they went to the next room?" Carmelita thought. She slowly made her way to the next room and then she saw him, "Freeze Cooper!" Carmelita yelled pulling her gun out and aiming it at the raccoon.
"Carmelita, as beautiful as ever I dare say!" Sly said with his trademark smile. "Cut the small chat, ringtail! I'm in no mood today!" Carmelita snapped back. "Something got your fur in a fluff today?" Sly said. "Quiet Cooper!" Carmelita yelled and pulled the trigger.
Sly dodged the shot with ease. "I'd love to stay and chat but I have to get this headdress to Sly said and went into the vent. "Shoot!" Carmelita said and ran off to the fire escape.
(Minutes (or seconds) later!)
Sly had reached the top of the vent "Good old Bently." Sly said seeing the vent's bars gone. Sly crawled out of the vent and dusted himself off.
" I got you now Cooper!" Carmelita yelled behind him. "Couldn't get enough of me, uh, Inspector?" Sly said and ran to the next rooftop. "Come back here!" Carmelita yelled, shooting at him. She chased him for about 5 rooftops, till they got to the last one.
"It's the end of the line, Raccoon!" Carmelita yelled. "Or is it?" Sly said and he jumped off the roof. Carmelita ran to the spot where he jumped and looked down.
"Shoot!" she yelled as Sly had landed onto his getaway van and they were already speeding off. "Until next time my fair seniorita!" Sly yelled from the top of the van. Carmelita cursed in Spanish and left.
(Minutes later (this time I know it's minutes!))
Carmelita walked up to her patrol car noticing it was very quiet. She looked in the back seat. "Emily?" Carmelita said, her heart pounding, but Emily was gone.
Emily's point of view"Okey-dokey!" I said. I watched the nice fox lady walk away. I was sure having fun being a poneace (police) wom-en. I had a real gun, a real badge and real handcuffs. My sister (who is 15) told me when she was in my grade she got waiterness ( waitress). She didn't look very happy about it though. (A/N Sorry to the people who are waiters and waitresses!)
I soon got bored and started humming the Barney song when I saw it. In a dark alley (to dark for a certain fox to see) there was a van. It was black and it had a red face on it (remember? New van!).
"Kwool!" I said and hopped out of the car. I walked over to the van and starred at it (to short to be seen from the inside the van). Then I heard the back door open and I hid under the van. "Ok Murray! I'm going to go do my job stay here and keep the van running." a turtle said getting out of the van.
"Gotcha." someone said who I couldn't see. The turtle walked off forgetting to close the door and I sneaked in. "Uh Bently? You forgot to close the door." the unknown voice said who, when I looked at the driver's seat, was a pink hippo. I hid so the turtle guy didn't see me when he closed the door.
"Sorry Murray, just a little excited." The turtle said. "Good luck!" the hippo said. I giggled a bit. "Did you say something?" the turtle asked. "No." the hippo said. "Must have been the wind." The turtle said.
Soon it got quiet and I supposed the turtle had left. It was a few minutes when I heard a voice coming from somewhere. "Murray1 It's Bently! Bring the van up to the museum and pick me up! Hurray! I just saw Carmelita walk into the museum! Hurry!" The voice was fuzzy because it was coming from the radio. "Hold on guys!" the hippo said and stepped on the gas.
I holded on tight to the leg of a desk. It was like a ride! Then the van stopped and the back door opened. I saw the turtle hop into the van but he couldn't see me because I was hidden.
"Murray! We got to get Sly! I saw him being chased by Carmelita! Hurry!" The turtle shut the door and the hippo stepped on the gas again. A few minutes later I heard a soft thud on top of the van and then a voice.
"Until next time my fair seniorita!" I peaked through my hiding place to see a raccoon jump through the window onto the passenger's seat. "Mission accomplished" the raccoon said. Then I realized, it was the same guy from the picture. Smiling, I brought my gun out and hopped out of my hiding place yelling,
"Fweaze!"
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And again, 2 CHAPTERS IN ONE PEOPLE! Because there so short! Oh the shortness! And the people who complain about the shorty shortness-ness. Shorty.
Midnight: THEY GET IT ALL READY!
Alright! But just to make sure…..THE CHAPTERS WERE SO SHORT THEY MADE MIDNIGHT LOOK 4 FEET!
Midnight: WILL YOU SHUT UP!
FINE! Please read and review!…….. .Short.
Midnight: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
