before i start i just want to respond to some reviews Bright-Anarchy you point
out minor spelling mistakes which most people will easyerly understand what it
means. secondly i do have someone proof read and she doesnt seem to pick up
these mistakes.
thank you for sticking up for me pple who did and i dont mind reviews that say
that you dont like the story as long as you mention why! therefore it would be
helpful critasism.
Chapter 11
Amy takes Rini home to the Tsukino's and mina gets out of the car to walk her
to the door and to reasure her about serenas condition "Don't worry about her
ok? She'll be fine" rini gave mina a brave smile before she entered the house
where she replyed behind a closed door
"How do you know?" mina bounced back to the car where she asked amy a question
"Do you think she's gonna be alright?"
"Who serena?"
"No, Rini, she does seem very down"
"She'll get over it, you know she misses Serena a lot!"
"Really?"
"Yeah can't you tell? They don't really hate each other you know they're just
too similar. They fight just like Serena and Raye fight! You saw how upset Raye
was when Serena first went into hospital she cried her eyes out until she knew
Serena was going to be ok!" Amy explained
"I see what you mean" mina responded as they headed off towards her house.
Rini's pod
I started up the stairs then here someone shout upstairs "Rini is that you?"
"Yeah!" I stopped in my tracks then decided to walk back down a couple of steps
some how I just new what was coming next
"Hows Serena?" it's like she doesn't even care about me!
"She's fine!"
"Dinner will be ready in a minute?"
"I'll be down in a bit then" I said giving her a charming smile, she turned and
went back into the kitchen so I ran upstairs to my room.
I turned and closed the door behind me, looking around I noticed that her side
of the room I noticed that it's just such a mess, I just can't understand how
it's gotten like this, even when she's not here. I bent down to pick up one of
HER FAVOURITE stuffed animals. How could she treat them like this? She doesn't
even care for her things! I held it out in front of me staring at it, shouldn't
she have grown out of these by now. Then I saw the tag still hanging off the
rabbits ear, I turned it round to read what was written on it
To my darling usako,
I leave this rabbit with you today
To let you know that I'll love you forever and always
yours always and eternally
Darien
Arrr how sweet, but to give this to Serena is so wrong, she never appesiates
anything. It feels so soft and looks so sweet no wonder Darien picked it out.
butWhy doesn't he give me things like
this? At least I would respect it.
"Rini! Your foods getting cold!" I placed it back on to the shelf
"Coming!" and went back down the stairs and into the dining room. Where
(Serena's bro) had already started eating "how nice of you to wait for me,
sammy!"
"Well we waited Rini, come sit down" I went and sat down next to Iren then when
and wasn't watching I stuck my tongue out at sammy. When he did it back he had
food in his mouth
"Gross!"
"sammy! don't eat with your mouth open I thought we taught you better then
that!"ilene scolded
"Sorry mum" she glared at him as he spoke
"I thought I just told you not to do that!" sammy took a big gulp swallowing
the rest of his food before replying
"It's just that you've cooked so much food and I want to eat it all before it
gets cold"
"You know sweetheart, you have cooked a lot of food" Ken put in
"I know," she sighed, "I keep forgetting that Serena's not here" great back to
her again it's as if the world revolves around her. I finished my food in
silence as no one else wanted to talk and went back up to my room. It's so quiet
with out her its like Serena brightened up their lives, I think she even
enhanced my life, what am I thinking I can't miss her that much can I?
out minor spelling mistakes which most people will easyerly understand what it
means. secondly i do have someone proof read and she doesnt seem to pick up
these mistakes.
thank you for sticking up for me pple who did and i dont mind reviews that say
that you dont like the story as long as you mention why! therefore it would be
helpful critasism.
Chapter 11
Amy takes Rini home to the Tsukino's and mina gets out of the car to walk her
to the door and to reasure her about serenas condition "Don't worry about her
ok? She'll be fine" rini gave mina a brave smile before she entered the house
where she replyed behind a closed door
"How do you know?" mina bounced back to the car where she asked amy a question
"Do you think she's gonna be alright?"
"Who serena?"
"No, Rini, she does seem very down"
"She'll get over it, you know she misses Serena a lot!"
"Really?"
"Yeah can't you tell? They don't really hate each other you know they're just
too similar. They fight just like Serena and Raye fight! You saw how upset Raye
was when Serena first went into hospital she cried her eyes out until she knew
Serena was going to be ok!" Amy explained
"I see what you mean" mina responded as they headed off towards her house.
Rini's pod
I started up the stairs then here someone shout upstairs "Rini is that you?"
"Yeah!" I stopped in my tracks then decided to walk back down a couple of steps
some how I just new what was coming next
"Hows Serena?" it's like she doesn't even care about me!
"She's fine!"
"Dinner will be ready in a minute?"
"I'll be down in a bit then" I said giving her a charming smile, she turned and
went back into the kitchen so I ran upstairs to my room.
I turned and closed the door behind me, looking around I noticed that her side
of the room I noticed that it's just such a mess, I just can't understand how
it's gotten like this, even when she's not here. I bent down to pick up one of
HER FAVOURITE stuffed animals. How could she treat them like this? She doesn't
even care for her things! I held it out in front of me staring at it, shouldn't
she have grown out of these by now. Then I saw the tag still hanging off the
rabbits ear, I turned it round to read what was written on it
To my darling usako,
I leave this rabbit with you today
To let you know that I'll love you forever and always
yours always and eternally
Darien
Arrr how sweet, but to give this to Serena is so wrong, she never appesiates
anything. It feels so soft and looks so sweet no wonder Darien picked it out.
butWhy doesn't he give me things like
this? At least I would respect it.
"Rini! Your foods getting cold!" I placed it back on to the shelf
"Coming!" and went back down the stairs and into the dining room. Where
(Serena's bro) had already started eating "how nice of you to wait for me,
sammy!"
"Well we waited Rini, come sit down" I went and sat down next to Iren then when
and wasn't watching I stuck my tongue out at sammy. When he did it back he had
food in his mouth
"Gross!"
"sammy! don't eat with your mouth open I thought we taught you better then
that!"ilene scolded
"Sorry mum" she glared at him as he spoke
"I thought I just told you not to do that!" sammy took a big gulp swallowing
the rest of his food before replying
"It's just that you've cooked so much food and I want to eat it all before it
gets cold"
"You know sweetheart, you have cooked a lot of food" Ken put in
"I know," she sighed, "I keep forgetting that Serena's not here" great back to
her again it's as if the world revolves around her. I finished my food in
silence as no one else wanted to talk and went back up to my room. It's so quiet
with out her its like Serena brightened up their lives, I think she even
enhanced my life, what am I thinking I can't miss her that much can I?