Yeah I know… I made her a little too perfect.. But she's based o by -ever-best-friend- ^_^ Very well she has he faults... Everyone has... right? (Even me? Naaah… ^_^*) And yes... She keeps secrets about her life… And it'll take some time before you get to know what the hell is going on… I have another character to present as well… But not until chapter five I think.
And it it's not like Jin is respecting her... Well not too much. He doesn't know her yet… right? He's just helping her not getting a *hard time* in school.
Love this kind of criticism… I make you think about what the hell you are writing.. so please… keep on giving it to me!
And.. flames are good ^____^ *looks back at the pile of marshmallows that needs some fire* Erhm… Very well.. on with tha fic…
Eeeep! Almost forgot; I do -not- own Tekken (not even in Tekken ~_~) It'd be nice though…
*phew*
Chapter 4 First meeting with Hwoarang, Run boy run! ^_~
Relived Sore sighed when she finally opened the right door.
"Thank you Hitomi, without you I could have wandered around here forever."
"That's okay Sora, I have to get back to the tracks now. Maybe I'll se you later. Bye!" She shouted while she was disappearing down the hallway.
"Bye!" She shouted back and got into the locker room.
Typical, not a soul left. She could her he shouting from inside the gym. She started to change clothes. From her bag she drew out a pair of short jeans, like the ones she was wearing. Only these were darker. And as a shirt she wore a dark vest with a light blue pattern on. Just when she put the west on she felt someone sitting down next to her and she moved her head o her right and met a pair of big brown eyes.
"Hi" The girl said quickly.
"Hi" Sora answered back and wondered who she was.
"So you know Jin?" She asked with glowing eyes.
"Yeah kind of I guess."
"Well… tell me about him!"
Sora recoiled a little when the girl moved closer to her. People that got too close to her really bothered her.
"There's really nothing to tell." She said knitting her brows.
"Yeah right, there is nothing to tell about the hottest and most gorgeous man on this school. Come on… Are you his girlfriend?"
"Eh? What? No… no way." She shook her head and rose to look at the girl. Look… I have a class right now and I really have to go."
Another girl pops in her head from the door and calls on the other stranger girl.
" Xiao Yu! We really need to go! You can't skip another math class!"
"Coming!"
So the girl disappears out the door and Sora shrugs and moves inside the gym. She watches everybody play basket until Jin noticed her and blows the whistle. She snaps out of her own thoughts and meets his eyes.
"Sorry I'm late… Your fanclub caught up with me"
Every girl in the class giggled at her comment and the boys also smiled. Well… everybody except Jin himself.
"Alright, twenty laps… Start running"
Everybody knew that the punishment was more severe than it should be. Not expecting anything, Sora started running. From the girls he seemed to receive jealous and curious looks. While the boys seemed more interested in her moves and body. After about eleven laps everybody stopped playing, without Jin blowing the whistle. He turned around and met the sight of a red haired boy. Sora kept running, but watched the two guys. Something wasn't right.
"Your late Hwoarang." Jin said in a dark voice trying to sound like a teacher.
"Shit… You're the substitute?" He smirked leaning against the wall.
"Start running." He said plainly.
"And what if I don't?"
His soothe voice was a mocking sound to Jin. He frowned at the redhead.
"I guess I have to send you to the principal"
The Korean smirked a little.
"And how are you going to get me there?"
Just when Jin was about to answer him Sora shouted loud and clear.
"Hey you!" Everyone aimed their eyes at Sora.
"What… Me?" Hwoarang asked and met her eyes. No reflections.
"Yeah, don't mind him." She said nodding against Jin. "Mind me." She said with a voice that could send shivers down your spines.
"Hey… you're the new kid aren't you?" He asked when she had reached him. He wasn't afraid, should he be? He the Blood Talon? He snorted at the thought.
"I have a name you know. And it's Sora. I recommend you to call me that in the future. Are you a lazy ass or what?"
Hwoarang laughed in surprise.
"What?"
"You can't even run. Tsk tsk… poor little thing."
"Hey, listen here little Lady, I'm-"
And at that point Sora got just -a little- pissed and cut him of. Controlling her anger wasn't her best skill…
"What did you call me? I'm not little, small, puny or whatever. I'm Sora. Now start running. If you don't" Her eyes swept around the class. "Will they ever respect you again?" and she met his eyes. "Well I most certainly won't." And she turned her back to him and started running. ( I know… Now you're rolling you r eyes saying, "Hwoarang would never do that" Well I had to make -something- up… and apparently my fantasy was out on a break…)
"H-hey…! …Aw man…" And he caught up with her.
The whole class seemed stunned. Not at least Jin. He followed the two of them for a while before he got the class going again. They kept running… And they ran until the class was over. And when the gym hall was emptied, even Jin was gone. He stopped and grabbed her by her wrist.
"Okay, this is it. What the hell did you do that for?" His look wasn't the nicest in the world. But Sora just smiled at him.
"What you chicken out now?" She turned her hand and pulled it out of his grip. He was strong though, but it didn't seem as he was trying his hardest to keep her in his grip either.
He was a little surprised that she so easily escaped his grip. There weren't to many women that knew martial arts and simple tricks like that. And the door to the hall opened. In the opening Jin looked in.
"Hey Sora, If you don't want to walk all the way back you might consider coming now."
"Damn… a well… See you another day Hwoarang." She said and quickly started to run towards the door.
"Wait, you're with him?" But before he had finished his sentence she was gone and the door closed.
A/N: Very well… this chapter too was fucked up.. and the next to… Kinda…
Geeez Can I only write fucked up? *Peeks up at god* What have you done to me??? *sigh* Very well…
Next chapter will be updated within a week (and if it's not… blame god)
And if you post a review... I'll ask Satan to lay of a bit on your life ^_~
And it it's not like Jin is respecting her... Well not too much. He doesn't know her yet… right? He's just helping her not getting a *hard time* in school.
Love this kind of criticism… I make you think about what the hell you are writing.. so please… keep on giving it to me!
And.. flames are good ^____^ *looks back at the pile of marshmallows that needs some fire* Erhm… Very well.. on with tha fic…
Eeeep! Almost forgot; I do -not- own Tekken (not even in Tekken ~_~) It'd be nice though…
*phew*
Chapter 4 First meeting with Hwoarang, Run boy run! ^_~
Relived Sore sighed when she finally opened the right door.
"Thank you Hitomi, without you I could have wandered around here forever."
"That's okay Sora, I have to get back to the tracks now. Maybe I'll se you later. Bye!" She shouted while she was disappearing down the hallway.
"Bye!" She shouted back and got into the locker room.
Typical, not a soul left. She could her he shouting from inside the gym. She started to change clothes. From her bag she drew out a pair of short jeans, like the ones she was wearing. Only these were darker. And as a shirt she wore a dark vest with a light blue pattern on. Just when she put the west on she felt someone sitting down next to her and she moved her head o her right and met a pair of big brown eyes.
"Hi" The girl said quickly.
"Hi" Sora answered back and wondered who she was.
"So you know Jin?" She asked with glowing eyes.
"Yeah kind of I guess."
"Well… tell me about him!"
Sora recoiled a little when the girl moved closer to her. People that got too close to her really bothered her.
"There's really nothing to tell." She said knitting her brows.
"Yeah right, there is nothing to tell about the hottest and most gorgeous man on this school. Come on… Are you his girlfriend?"
"Eh? What? No… no way." She shook her head and rose to look at the girl. Look… I have a class right now and I really have to go."
Another girl pops in her head from the door and calls on the other stranger girl.
" Xiao Yu! We really need to go! You can't skip another math class!"
"Coming!"
So the girl disappears out the door and Sora shrugs and moves inside the gym. She watches everybody play basket until Jin noticed her and blows the whistle. She snaps out of her own thoughts and meets his eyes.
"Sorry I'm late… Your fanclub caught up with me"
Every girl in the class giggled at her comment and the boys also smiled. Well… everybody except Jin himself.
"Alright, twenty laps… Start running"
Everybody knew that the punishment was more severe than it should be. Not expecting anything, Sora started running. From the girls he seemed to receive jealous and curious looks. While the boys seemed more interested in her moves and body. After about eleven laps everybody stopped playing, without Jin blowing the whistle. He turned around and met the sight of a red haired boy. Sora kept running, but watched the two guys. Something wasn't right.
"Your late Hwoarang." Jin said in a dark voice trying to sound like a teacher.
"Shit… You're the substitute?" He smirked leaning against the wall.
"Start running." He said plainly.
"And what if I don't?"
His soothe voice was a mocking sound to Jin. He frowned at the redhead.
"I guess I have to send you to the principal"
The Korean smirked a little.
"And how are you going to get me there?"
Just when Jin was about to answer him Sora shouted loud and clear.
"Hey you!" Everyone aimed their eyes at Sora.
"What… Me?" Hwoarang asked and met her eyes. No reflections.
"Yeah, don't mind him." She said nodding against Jin. "Mind me." She said with a voice that could send shivers down your spines.
"Hey… you're the new kid aren't you?" He asked when she had reached him. He wasn't afraid, should he be? He the Blood Talon? He snorted at the thought.
"I have a name you know. And it's Sora. I recommend you to call me that in the future. Are you a lazy ass or what?"
Hwoarang laughed in surprise.
"What?"
"You can't even run. Tsk tsk… poor little thing."
"Hey, listen here little Lady, I'm-"
And at that point Sora got just -a little- pissed and cut him of. Controlling her anger wasn't her best skill…
"What did you call me? I'm not little, small, puny or whatever. I'm Sora. Now start running. If you don't" Her eyes swept around the class. "Will they ever respect you again?" and she met his eyes. "Well I most certainly won't." And she turned her back to him and started running. ( I know… Now you're rolling you r eyes saying, "Hwoarang would never do that" Well I had to make -something- up… and apparently my fantasy was out on a break…)
"H-hey…! …Aw man…" And he caught up with her.
The whole class seemed stunned. Not at least Jin. He followed the two of them for a while before he got the class going again. They kept running… And they ran until the class was over. And when the gym hall was emptied, even Jin was gone. He stopped and grabbed her by her wrist.
"Okay, this is it. What the hell did you do that for?" His look wasn't the nicest in the world. But Sora just smiled at him.
"What you chicken out now?" She turned her hand and pulled it out of his grip. He was strong though, but it didn't seem as he was trying his hardest to keep her in his grip either.
He was a little surprised that she so easily escaped his grip. There weren't to many women that knew martial arts and simple tricks like that. And the door to the hall opened. In the opening Jin looked in.
"Hey Sora, If you don't want to walk all the way back you might consider coming now."
"Damn… a well… See you another day Hwoarang." She said and quickly started to run towards the door.
"Wait, you're with him?" But before he had finished his sentence she was gone and the door closed.
A/N: Very well… this chapter too was fucked up.. and the next to… Kinda…
Geeez Can I only write fucked up? *Peeks up at god* What have you done to me??? *sigh* Very well…
Next chapter will be updated within a week (and if it's not… blame god)
And if you post a review... I'll ask Satan to lay of a bit on your life ^_~