Harry Potter and The Mystical View
Ch. 1
My story starts back at the Weaslys house where Harry was staying there for his summer brake from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. For them tomorrow will be their first day back to Hogwarts. Harry and Ron are anxious to go back to school to meet up with their old friend Herminie Ganger. They had been best friends ever since their first year at Hogwarts. All summer Harry and Ron have been unsepretable because Harry was so close to Ron's family. And to Harry, Ron was getting a bit annoying because he was always talking about Herminie. The way she walks, the way she talks, the way she looks, the way she does her hair (although it's always frizzy she straighten it sometimes on special occasions) and other things to. He almost sounded obsessed. So as the last few hours of summer vacation went by Harry and Ron played Quitach in his backyard.
Herminie's POV Herminie has had a wonderful summer vacation. She went to the beach, chilled, and made a new friend. Her name is Veronica Spencer. Veronica had blond hair with a beach tan but was naturally light skinned. She to was also a witch and was transferring to Hogwarts. Herminie was thrilled to have Veronica going to school with her she will finally have a girlfriend to talk to other then Harry and Ron. As almost everyone knows Herminie has been crushing on Ron for years but now it's actually starting to show because she's acting girlier then ever before. And Ron is defiantly noticing. She even straightens her hair to be noticed by him but it's working a little bit. Victoria is anxious to meet Herminie's friends Ron and Harry she heard that they are quite brave. So as the night stars go by and the excitement of a new year at Hogwarts is about to begin they fall asleep, awaiting their arrival to reunite once again.
So that's the end of Ch.1 Telepathic Princess give me some feedback on what you think. Review Please.