The Wish
Chapter 3
Please remember my native speech is German.
This is my first try to write an entire chapter in English down without have written it out before in German, yay!
It took me full five hours to get the entire thing readable! I really hope it is so, if not, please telling me that! More so, please tell me if it is better, I return to the other way I have worked before, I need your responses to get better with this.
But to be true I have the feeling it sounds more right, when I write it down in English from the start.
Tina chan, I will sent this one to you in the next days, if you want me to do so, I think it is better to separate the works from you and Altar chan so it gives no problems.
Please tell me, ok?
Suryallee
Right after Keiko arrived at her home, she clamped her hands on her mouth.
How has every one of my wishes come true? She thought, This can not really happen to me!
Ok, think girl, think!
What have you done since yesterday what you do not normally? Better, what has happened into the last weeks what have to be out of the normal routine?
The young woman thought silently about everything that happened the last two days.
Every time stopping her from speaking it loudly out, so not another wish could escape her and harm her friends.
Then suddenly, she remembered the conversation of her two friends.
Keiko had fully forgotten about the theme the two discussed before she greeted them! That got her hands from her mouth,
"Yoko had tried WHAT?"
. Keiko was fuming and blushing. The dammed Kitzune was on his way to seduce her!
For the first time after she found out about her unusual little gift, Keiko used it on purpose;
"I wish, Yoko would fall in love with the most unusual person who cross his path for only one single day and would not be able to perform anything naughty the whole time!
And I wish also that he knew the whole time that it is a lection for him and that he can remember everything after it!"
She sighted and sits back down on her bed,
" I only wished that Hiei san is not to angry with me when he finds out that it was I who have done that to him, I didn't wanted it on purpose, I only wanted him and Yukina to be happy.
Oh no! I did it again!"
"I am sure he got the message!"
Suddenly Hiei's smuck voice was to hear; it came from Keiko's window behind her, and startled the shit out of the scarred woman.
"So, you were that, surely you want to know now what happened after all your… little wishes. And don't worry about my revenge on you, I think I found a minute ago something much better as that!"
Hiei gave her one of his favourite smirks before he hopped into her room and closed her window right after that.
It was oblivious to Keiko that the fire apparition must plan something and wondered silently if she really wanted to know just that!
After the jagon master has told her everything from the events into the last hours she had accidentally caused with her wishes: Keiko found her back, much to her surprise, silently laughing with the most unusual person from she ever has thought she would do that with!
Hiei was silently glad.
He not only had now his sister knowing without him breaking his promise to Shigure, no he found also out by the way, that the detectives woman had a interesting and amusing imagination about her revenges!
Slowly he began to understand what had drowned Yusuke to her all the time.
He would not have been on her bad side now, as Yoko managed it to be with ease.
He only hoped he could watch the proud Kitzune when it happened to him!
More so, Hiei had seen her ring glow shortly right after she spoke out her wish.
After a few questions, Hiei and Keiko knew that the ring must have to do with this all somehow.
Suddenly a naughty smile creep on Hiei´s normally stony features: and he scarred Keiko immensely with it.
"I will not wish anything bad with it Hiei san!" she told him sternly, but to her surprise, the demon just nodded.
"I know that.
However, you do realise the Reikei will take this ring from you, into the very same second they will find it out? Wouldn't it be not better you would do something against it before they will surely do that?"
Keiko looked at the, in her opinion strange acting yokai uncertainly: what had Hiei in his mind?
"I only mean you should bind it on you and you only.
Therefore, no one other as you can use it! I know you well enough to know, that you will not live with the consequences if someone other use the ring to cause harm with it to us all!"
Hiei looked at her. She shows on her face a look of confusion and a little mistrust. He could perfectly understand her behave. Keiko was the last person who had a point to trust him. Not after, he had once kidnapped her.
He stood up and faced her.
"I assure you Keiko, I understand your mistrust in my person completely, but you must do something about this ring."
With that, Hiei removed his bandana and infiltrated her mind before she could react.
He did no harm to her; Hiei only showed her something about himself and her.
After a short wile, Hiei closed his third eye again.
Right as he had suspected it, the ring had protected the girl the entire time from have, her mind absorbed into his jagon.
"Amazing…" he silently whispered and looked to the now silent girl to his right.
Keiko was now completely stunned and confused at the same time.
She never would have thought that the silent and short-tempered yokai considered her as something near to his sister!
On top of that, that she would have been death right now if this was not so.
If she was the girlfriend of Yusuke: or not! Hiei had killed her.
Now she could understand his so unusual behave against her all the times better. She has ever wondered why…
"Why?"
Hiei only shake his head,
"I don't know. Maybe it is because you never tried to do any harm to my person…
Maybe it is because you were ever nice to everyone including myself.
I really don't know."
He confessed after awhile thinking about it.
It was hardly to hear for Keiko because Hiei spoke so low.
It seems to give Hiei an uneasy feeling to do this. He constantly looked nervously over his shoulders, that nobody other would hear him telling her this.
Keiko nodded and decided to let it fall for this time, Hiei would tell her why when he wanted it. Until then, she would simply relish his rare gift and do what he told her.
She knew, it was for her best.
She thought very serious about Hiei's request, then, after awhile the young woman nodded and began to tell Hiei what she had in mind.
The demon smirked at her choose of words, he knew that Koenma and the Reikei would have a major problem to get the ring from her after this wish!
More so, he would make sure that Keiko had enough protection to live out the consequents after the spirit realm found out about this treasure.
His only problem would be the detective.
Yusuke would not like his little plans for her, and besides that, Hiei's choose of Keiko's new protector!
Now that this was out, Hiei would do what he found it was the best for Keiko. Right as Hiei did it for Yukina too all the time and in the short demons opinion, Yusuke was not the best suitor for the young woman, not that Hiei disliked Yusuke or something like this. No, he reacted only as his kind did it to people they considered as family or someone under their charge.
Hiei found that the detective was too young to give Keiko what she needed and so he thought about a better suitor for her.
He only would have to talk a little with the person he had in mind, tell him a few things his jagon found accidentally in Keikos mind when he showed her a few things.
Hiei was sure that the person would take advantage of these new facts very quickly!
The yokai smiled secretly in his mind, Yusukes very own fault. Why must the detective leave such a female alone for so long with no protection? It was a wonder to the silent one that nothing has happen to Keiko in all the time!
"I wish that nobody other as me, or who I choose freely without any treats or harm, can use this ring! My next wish is, that no one could take this ring from death or alive!
Finally, I wish that never again, someone with a bad intention can use this ring for his or her benefits, or that someone can use it to cause trouble to the three realms! If it will be a human, a yokai, or a spirit doesn't matter."
Keiko spoke finally out aloud.
She smiled after she had done so; it gave Keiko a good feeling to do this. Hiei was right, she really wanted not to have to see and outlive the consequences, if the wrong person got this ring into his or her fingers!
Hiei nodded, this would do it for now.
However, right now, he had a silver kit to watch!
With that thought in mind, the yokai departed after a short nod to the girl, right through the same window he came originally into Keiko's room.
After Hiei's depart, Keiko thought about any single wish she has made into the last hours.
She searched for a way to remove the maddest affects on the people she loved, without to cause more trouble.
Nevertheless, Keiko found it would be better to leave it be for the moment. She would deal later with the consequents, it was better not to wake sleeping dragons!
"I only wished Hiei san would find his happiness." It came finally out of her in a low whispered tune after a while; "and that I would be loved. It is so lonely here sometimes, and Yusuke is never here for me.
I am so sorry Kurama Kun; I have caused you and Yoko san so much trouble!"
She was about to turn around to do her homework when she heard for the second time of this particular day, a voice suddenly answer to her from the window again.
"I am glad to hear that, Keiko chan! Honestly, Keiko, must it have been so much of it? Please, do not worry: I am not angry with you.
It must have been some kind of an accident surely. So could you please tell me what has happen here?"
Keiko blushed furiously, why must every yokai she knew, use her window to appear out of the nowhere!
That was not fair!
It was more important for the startled girl now how she could explain the human counterpart of Yoko Kurama why the hell she wished all the wishes she had wished!
Outside her window sat Hiei on the rooftop of her neighbourhood house and smirked.
Keiko was in deep trouble this time! He was sure the nice girl would learn his little lecture quit well, and it all would turn out nicely for the human female.
The human/ Kitzune, what ever the red head was now, would treat her right and maybe, (who knows?) his little other plan would work out faster as he thought!
Yusuke was too careless sometimes, and if it were right what Hiei heard shortly in the Makai before he came back, someone other would love it to have the young for itself. And was angry about the fact that Yusuke has someone here in the ningenkei.
Hiei would not let harm draw closer to Keiko in any way!
Hiei found it was better for all of them.
With that, the little yokai returned to his momentary favourite's soap opera and watched silently the squirming star into it with unmasked amusement, trying to find a way out of his self-made misery.
Actors?
Yoko Kurama!
And, Koenma junior!
Keiko really has interesting ideas to teach Yoko a little lesson!
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Suryallee