Oh my god! –dies- When I checked my email, I saw I had a bunch of reviews! I love you all! –huggles them all to death- Anyway, reviews will be below, and by request, I am making a side story telling why Dark and Dai aren't sad anymore.
Disclaimer: I do not own DNAngel, but this fic is mine, MINE I TELL YOU!000000000000000
Moonlight
Chapter Four
Krad sighed, watching the panicked Dark try to shake off the rabid fan girl with the help of Risa's sister, Riku.
"KRAAAAAAAAAAAD!" Dark screamed, struggling with the ever tightening grasp. Krad looked back at the little girl, wondering who to help. He was quite confused right now.
Satoshi tugged on Daisuke's sleeve. Daisuke nodded, apparently understanding what the blue-haired teen meant. And so, the younger teens went off to finish the original intention that at the moment… seemed impossible.
Krad sighed in anger and confusion as Dark continues to wrench the fangirl off him. Just then… An innocent looking miniature angelic for of himself materialized on his right shoulder as time seemed to stop for him as he decided what to do.
"Do what is right. Help the little girl..." It said.
"Evil figure of my mind…" Krad muttered sourly. Then, Krad narrowed his eyes to his left shoulder, and his suspicions were correct. A devil figure of himself sat with a devious smirk playing it's lips.
"Help Dark. After all, you two are growing… Quite fond of each other." The Devil said, chuckling.
"Stupid… If you are to think that he is in love with that moron, you truly are an idiot." The Angel said flatly.
"It's true. We both know he has no interest in women." The Devil smirked again, and Krad continues to watch, now even more angry and confused.
"Go back and burn in hell where you belong, you ass." The Angel said, angry since he was incorrect for once. Krad and the Devil stared in wonder at the now flaming angel. Just then, they both disappeared, apparently since Krad knew who he wanted to help.
"Okay, lay off of my Dark." He growled at Risa. Risa stared in shock, while Riku finally pulled her annoying sister off of him.
"Your Dark? How is he your Dark?" Risa snapped back, ready to smack the blonde.
"This…" Krad said, bringing Dark into a chaste kiss, then immediately pulling back.
Risa's mouth dropped agape. Riku just smirked, knowing it was all for show. Risa stormed off, and Riku had to run to catch up.
"Thanks… I guess…" Dark said. He was in a bit of a shock, but he liked it.
"Let's go find Daisuke and Satoshi. They left during the chaos." Krad said, looking back not only to hide a faint blush, but also to find that the little girl was gone.
So Dark took Krad by the hand, running after the faintest sight of blue and red he saw. So when they caught up…
"We already finished the shopping." Satoshi said flatly.
"What did you say, creepy bastard?" Dark replied.
"We already finished."
"Damn… Oh well. Less work for us!" Dark chirped happily.
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In the end… Dark ended up unloading groceries with Krad.
"Krad, that kiss… It didn't mean anything… right?" He whispered. Krad nodded, a blush returning to his face.
"Nothing…" Krad said. So the two continued to put the groceries away in silence, while Satoshi and Daisuke were watching the news… Again.
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And that's it!Now time for the new reviews and some answers.
Negolataknofelet: Nice story hope you update soon )
Animegoil: Cute. I thought suspense-wise it could have been done better, and there are some grammatical errors- verb tense, and noun-somethign agreement (can't remember what it's called exaclty) Basically, you used a couple verbs in present tense, when the fic is in past, and I think while you were describing Krad you said he had hair down to their knees, when it should be his.
Aside from that, interesting plot, funny dialogue and such . Interesting way for them to meet!
Hakudoshi-chan: interesting story…it seemed a bit confusing at first but it's okay.
…How did the news know it was their house?
My Answer: Easily put, the news knows everything… x.x; They could have asked some neighbors, or used the phone book.
now the evil twins are here...well Riku usally isn't so bad..unless she's become Risa-fied
UnIqUeNotWeird: OH NO! DARK, RUN! RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN! lol... Risa's scary... Oo... I'm guessing Darks going to need a crowbar to pry Risa off... xD
XmooDRingX: HAHAHAHAHA! this chapter was SO funny, the little girl called Krad a MISS! hahaha, and then RISA, that freaky stalker came. hahahaaha! and then in the beginning Dark thought Krad and him...HAHHA! i love it, its so funny n good, keep it up!
Neko-nya: Nya
That's just like me! only my hair's black so it scares people even more... . ;; but that's okay! poor Dark, bad things happen to people who've done bad things (like laughing at Krad) therefore the supreme being of the universe sends down a punishment! (risa) and...yea...XD update!
Angelic-silver-wings100: hahahaha! that is funny! and dark being an idiot is even funnier.
Krith: It's a good fanfic, and I would like to read next chapters. But, one thing that's rather strange is that Dark and Daisuke aren't sad anymore of their parents death. O.o
You should write something about their misery or else the fanfic will be really strange.
This is just a suggestion and advice, so you choose what to write.
My Answer: I have taken your request into thought. Good question. There will be a sidestory soon.
