Disclaimer- geez these things are a hassle..cursed high and mighty people who think i could actually steal their imagination and come up with anime like sailor moon and gundam wing which i don't own and would never take credit of and if i did make up an anime it would probably have some sort of vegtable or beverage in the name...i don't think pop pop papaya would be popular though..darn isn't papaya a fruit?..never mind it hurts my brain to much to try to figure it out...cursed papaya...
( look in o' ye chapter 1 for info homie reader dogs ) i swear i'll never write that again...white people sound funny when they do that...im not racist or anything but...gosh on with the story!
wait just a sec i need to do a couple dear reviewers...
Dear Tenshi no Yupiteru...
i can't believe all the cookies are gone! ( cries..)...Im sure glad you aren't a flamer it's hard to concentrate and write at the same time if im sweating bullets cause of the heat...what a lame joke im such a loser...im glad i lured you in and all cause i like to fish to...must stop lame jokes...id probably keep the fish as pets though..stop it stop it...Unfortunetly for me now i could never not finish the story not the i would not finish the story because you gave me the darn puppy dog eyes..i just can't resist those darn puppy dog eyes..and you had to put those stars around it rrrr you've created a monster now i have to be less lazy and bend my will to the almighty puppy dog eyes..cursed puppies and their almighty cuteness. Im glad you think i didn't make em to out of character it's harder than i thought so if that's one of your faults send me a cookie and we can get together for a movie night and eat cookie dough..mmm cookie dough so many flavors so little stomach room...
sincerely, the writer of this particular story
PeppyLaPerson
P.S get a bigger cookie jar...and please help me figure out what P.S stands for.
One more for now...
Dear MiLeggie...
I like that you like and are interested in the story. Technically your the first reviewer i had and i should've put you first but i couldn't ignore the darn puppy eyes so i hope you don't mind. To make up for it i'll make sure ole' Jupiter gets her word in when it's due, that's what i like about her not afraid to put her word in,crude in a good way. Some chick called me crude once rrrrr...not the point focus. It's funny you mentioned couples because im kinda stuck there it's complicated. See i wasn't thinking of couples that much when i came up with the idea but im a sap for romance and i know i'll be blushin like a banshee if I write any..if banshees blush at all, at least it rhymes kinda.I know i am eventually going to write some but the couples possibilities are endless especially since im putting pretty much all of the major gw people in it, except trieze crud now i might.anyways..I noticed how the big people in charge here are kinda rrr about the whole vote thing and i don't really want to go on that scale but i'll glady take suggestions from you and any other reviewers...because i can.anyways...thank you for your review and i hope you do it again and again and again until i finish this story and by the way if you find some kind of fault or whatnot constructive critisism is much appreciated. Don't leave me hangin!
sincerely , someone who cares
PeppyLaPerson
I think that's enough for now..picking up where we left off
The Messiah of Thefts
Chapter 1 A sign of change Part 2
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If you were to say the red clad thief known as Mars in this situation was impatient, bored, and losing her temper at a faster than molasses rate you should be on a game show because your very right.
While Jupiter was off to get nab the information Mars had to wait for a long time in a very uncomfortable position, both in the building and room she was waiting in. She didn't like being cooped up for so long especially when she had to get at the action second. It sucked being the passover person in her opinion because you had to wait so damn long to get any action. She wasn't such a vain person that she would try to rob the group of fairness by not taking turns and listening to their leader Venus, but waiting in one place for so long while trying not to get noticed by the baka guards and start a riot of alarms and "authorities" had to be annoying to anyone.
" baka watch, why would the guards wear such annoying accessories, get a purse or something" whispered an annoyed Mars to a knocked a guard she currently sitting on. His watch was a beeper and after two hours of being stationed inside a lounge room with it there was no doubt it was going to die.
True she was aggravated but she didn't dare contact any member of the group. Her position was dangerous. Some stray guard could decide to come in for an unplanned cup of jo, maybe a krueller? Then she would have to change her position, again, which she had done about 21 times in the last 4 hours because there was so much guard activity and she had to be extra careful to stay out of sight until Jupiter met her with the goods. Where the hell was Jupiter anyways?
" Man o' Man is Mars gonna be aggravated by the time i get to her, it's been forever" thought the still sleuthing Jupiter currently making her way slowly and silently down the hallways trying to avoid guards. Cameras weren't really an issue with Mercury around and she'd jump at a chance to show some guard who thought they could best her in a fight who was boss. Not that she liked to start a fight, but if someone did she'd make sure they didn't have a doubt who was going to end it, no joke about that.
Jupiter had last heard that Mars was waiting in a lounge room on the 2nd floor. The building was only 6 floors and Jupiter was on the 4th at the moment. You'd think the people that put the information in the building would put it at the very top, but evidently they weren't as stupid as the guys in the movies and put the secret space on the 4th floor.
She stopped moving along the deserted hallways shadow a moment to consider the best way to get down 2 floors without getting caught. The elevator was out of the question, but she did find the idea of taking it down to floors and waltzing out of it very amusing. The stairs seemed like a logic idea. She knew they didn't post guards on the stairways, but they did on the doors outside of them. Darn. She knew she could handle a couple of guards but the door of the staircase would most likely be near an intersection both on the 4th and 2nd floor which would mean a mundo amount of guards both stationed there and crossing at their shifts. That left the vents. Sure it was cliched, dark, dirty, small, and an all around pain in the butt to get through, but it was affective and she had a good idea that she wouldn't run into any guards while crawling through them.
Now all that was needed was a vent to crawl through. Jupiter made her way down the hall but couldn't find an opening. She then turned around and checked the other end of the hallways, no luck. Frustrated she decided it would be safer to ask Mercury than to waste time checking every hallway.
" Jupiter to Mercury i have a problem" Jupiter whispered in her communicator not having a doubt her partner was paying attention.
" This is Mercury what is it?" came the reply that sounded slightly more high pitched than normal like she was sounding nervous.
Jupiter than realized that Mercury probably thought she was close to getting caught or something oops. " not a big problem or anything i just need you to find a vent in my area that will take me to the 2nd floor "
" oh hold on it will only take a second for me to access the ventilation system map"
Jupiter almost couldn't help herself from humming some random tune while she was waiting, almost. True to her word Mercury was ready with a solution in a matter of minutes.
" I found an opening in a deserted room just a few hallways down, but there's one guard inside the room, I'll find another "
" no no don't bother i can take one guard, no sweat just tell me the way"
" are you sure it-"
" I'm positive lead the way queen of computers"
" hm ok then"
" go left down the hallway your in until you reach an intersection, go right then once you reach another intersection go straight and its the 6 door to the right "
" left, right, straight, 6 to the right, i can remember that thanks Merc "
" your welcome Jupiter, Mercury out "
Jupiter started making her way left and reached the intersection without a hitch. Evidently guards didn't think to guard here because it was the opposite side to where the information was stored, if they even knew anything about it at all. She turned right and had the same result. She looked both left and right before crossing the intersection to go straight, then started counting doors. 1...2...3...4...5...6, bingo.
She wouldn't need to contact Mercury anymore for the night once she got in the vent because she knew all she had to do was slide down two times and she would be able to tell where the 2nd floor was and she already was told where the lounge room was. All that was blocking here from her goal was a unlocked door and a measly guard.
She smirked even though her share of work was almost done. The poor guard wouldn't know what hit him, literally since she was masked, and with that thought she flung opened the door, took a step in, shut the door quietly and then locked. It was a very fluid sequence and when she turned around the guard was just looking at her somewhat stunned, didn't even react yet. The smirk hadn't left her face as she went about removing the last obstacle for the night." " I love my job" thought Jupiter
Mars was still sitting on the guard, who she knocked out whenever he seemed to become conscious, when a noise that sounded like metal rattling caused her to become alert.
She glanced around the room and saw nothing out of the ordinary and she could tell it wasn't coming from outside. She moved to the back of the room and checked behind the couch, under the table, and even behind the small tv in the room. Finding nothing she backed into the wall at the farthest side from the door and crossed her arms clearly annoyed. Unknowingly she had fallen into a trap once again not noticing the vent right above her.
" BOO!" came from a low rough sounding voice.
" Ahhhh " was the small shrieking reply that came from Mars as she clearly jumped up a few inches before backing away and turning around to glare at the obvious offender.
" JUPITER, I told you to stop doing that it doesn't scare me! " Mars said quietly but in a very annoyed tone to the barley visible face behind the vent that was chuckling like mad.
" hehe..yes you were i saw you hehehe..jump..you...hehe..fall for it everytime..just admit it hehehehe..."
" hmmpph whatever, if you end up getting us caught because you keep joking around I'm not going to let you forget!"
" ok ok, just open the vent so i can give you the goods "
" If you didn't have it I'd have no remorse leaving you trapped in there..." grumbled Mars as she used tools attached to her belt to unscrew the vent.
" Alright here you are, it was hell moving this thing through this tiny passage, man i can hardly squeeze through this thing let alone dragging this darn box ahead of me, what a hassle!. Said Jupiter as she pushed the box forward so Mars could grab it.
" You can go ahead and go keep Moon and Mercury company at the getaway point, I'll contact Venus " Mars replied absentmindedly as she inspected the small black box.
" ok red, see ya soon" Jupiter said quietly giving her friend the best small wave she could in the small space and then started to scoot back she already contacted Mercury for directions out.
" Mars to Venus I've got the box"
" Good I've got a cramp that could stop a Gundam "
" yeah, if they even existed anymore "
" well it was only a few years ago, it's not like it's been forever. Who knows maybe the government lied and they still exist."
" I may not trust the government, but i think their smart enough to make the right decision to destroy them..then again after what happened years and years ago with bush who knows how good their judgment is." ( sorry couldn't help myself, the presidents ok.)
" yeah that's a good point there should be less fighting and more loving " Venus could practically see Mars rolling her eyes at the other end of the communicator.
" I'm tired can i proceed to the getaway point " said Mars holding back a yawn.
" Yeah we're all ready to head home for the night, I'll stay withing the building perimeters in case you need help "
" highly unlikely but do what you want your the leader, I'm heading out, Mars out " Mars said quickly as she turned off the communicator without waiting for a reply.
Most of the time a thief or thieves would leave quietly once they stole what was wanted and not want to leave a trace. Not exactly the scouts idea typical theft, they did things differently. Instead of leaving quietly they wanted to be known so they always made sure they did something or left something that made sure their fans the civilians as well as the "authorities" knew it was them and not some weirdo that lived in his parents basements doing who knows what. A little attention wouldn't kill them anyways.
"Venus has a pretty weird view on how to get noticed " thought Mars as she ran down the emergency exit stairs as fast as she could.
After her conversation with Venus ended she had silently left the lounge room not having any worry about the guard. Venus had made it clear before they even started the theft that they didn't have time to leave really do anything big, since they only had a small time before Mercury's disable of the security system wore off. Hours weren't very long in steal time, so she came up with an unusual idea. Instead of going out quietly Mars was supposed to use the emergency staircase, which conveniently let right outside, and also happened to activate ear popping, extremely loud alarm that was designed to warn of fire.
That was how the she ended up running as fast as she could without falling down the stairs with the annoyingly loud noise blasting in her ears and causing chaos among the surprised guards. Of course she was being chased by a crazy amount of guards and had nearly been blinded and rolled down the stairs when the emergency lights had flicked on.
Well at least there wasn't a doubt that they didn't notice her and they had instantly recognized her and would be able to figure out just who had stolen from them.
" this better make Venus very happy" Mars thought as she huffed down the stairs nearly to the exit.
She completely ignored the guards as she stormed out the door, down a small staircase, and shot at full speed trying to push the sound of gunshots out of her mind. Getting shot was always painful, something she learned the hard way.
Withing minutes she was at least 3 blocks away from the building, rarely running past civilians, heading for the get away copter, yes copter. The Earth sphere may have banned weapons, but that didn't mean it wasn't possible to buy such hardware on the ever vigilant black market. It was parked on the top of a old deserted truck station, don't ask how they were able to park it up there without preventers noticing that's a whole other story.
Mars shot up a fire escape in order to reach the roof of the building and was greeted with the predictable.
" About time Mars your getting sloooow " said a innocent taunting voice form inside the helicopter.
" I can move faster than you any day meatball head " Mars bit back fiercely as she glared playfully at her partner as she watched her puff up her cheeks.
" don't start this now we still have to wait for Venus" interrupted Mercury trying to stop the storm that was coming.
" Well maybe if she didn't antagonize me I wouldn't have to defend myself " said Mars unwilling to let the insult go so easily.
" I didn't antagonize you i was just stating a fact!" Moon burst out unwilling to let her defense go unheard.
" see you did it again! You called me slow and I'm not slow take it back!" Mars said almost at a yell.
" alright you two cut it out! If you start a fight we'll be discovered before takeoff and then we'll be in big trouble so save it for later. If we get caught I'm not going to let the both of you forget." Jupiter smirked knowing that that ended the argument even if she had purposely mocked Mars from earlier.
Mercury sighed from the cockpit as she looked back to see her two conflicted friends glaring at each other. She caught something out of the corner of her other eye and became relieved when she saw Venus coming up from the fire escape.
" here comes Venus girls buckle up we'll be taking off soon" said Mercury in a very authoritative tone leaving no room for argument.
" Alright girls scooch together it's going to be a tight fit." said the cheery voice of the team leader as she nearly hopped into the helicopter.
The Helicopter wasn't very big so they had to arrange themselves in it carefully to make sure they all fit. Mercury was driving of course, Jupiter was riding shotgun next to her because she was the biggest. That left Venus, Moon, and Mars squashed together in the back, take pity on whoever is in the middle. After a quick minute of rock paper scissors to decide who has to sit in the middle, Venus unfortunately lost as was fated to sit between Moon and Mars the whole time.
" alright girls we did a successful robbery again lets go and deliver the loot!" said Venus happily despite the long night.
" roger Venus preparing for takeoff " replied an amused Mercury.
" about time " Mars said impatiently
" can we stop for a snack?" put in Moon
" only if you want to get thrown in the slammer!" Jupiter decidedly said
" Ready for liftoff" announced Mercury so the girls would brace themselves
" good lets go!" signaled Venus excitedly
By the time they were in the air they could see the chaos which was the facility they had robbed. The alarm was still going off and could be heard from the air. The sound was mixed with sirens of police and of Preventors along with the conversations of civilians who already guessed who was to blame pointing to the now obvious helicopter. The helicopter could not be assaulted with gunfire, the Preventors weren't about to have a helicopter spin out of control and squish innocent civilians and the preventors didn't have the technology on them to get in the air and chase it. The copter was soon replaced by news helicopters and dawn was approaching fast. The one thing Venus knew was that they no doubt would be surprised to barge into the perimeter and find a trail of knocked out guards with the names of planets written on their faces in orange permanent marker.
There was no doubt who was there.
A/N geez i gotta lay off the paragraphs, i was planning on doing more of an explanation of the theft and all but it turned out to be so incredibly long i need a break. The sheer amount of boringness is killing me i know it's going slow but i had to get that over with in order to show how they usually work and i promise I'll get to them actually planning the theft and it won't be anything like this i promise lets just say they will be going undercover...anywaaaaaaays. Questions, constructive criticism, comments ? Go crazy tell me i can take it punks!..just
NO FLAMES ITS UNCALLED FOR!...meanies..