Life With Zatch, Ch. 3. The Surprise Attack, Pt.2
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Written on: April 27th, 2005
Okay, here is my 3rd chapter for Life With Zatch.
Suzie and Kiyo walked(forcibly in Kiyo's case) to the dining room, sitting down at the beautiful mahogany table.
"So," Kiyo said, deciding to be polite, because after all he is getting a free lunch, "How are you, Suzie?"
Suzie's eyes welled up with unshed tears.
"Aw, you really do care! Well, my day was good today. But then I got up. First I realized I had no clean socks, then I missed breakfast so I could rush to my violin lesson. Then...blah...this happened...blah...then that happened...blah," Suzie blahed.
'Wow, she loves to talk, doesn't she?' Kiyo thought blankly, smiling and nodding at Suzie, who was talking unaware that Kiyo was not paying one lick of attention.
"But then I heard that you were coming over for lunch, and I'm so very glad that you accepted my invitation!" Suzie said excitedly.
A maid brought in some appetizers on beautiful china.
Zatch and Kiyo dove in, since that is what they came for, after all.
"Yum, you must try this, Kiyo!" Zatch said with his mouth full. "It's delicious! What is this, Suzie?"
"Um, I believe that is the plate that you are eating," Suzie replied with a sigh and a sweat drop.
Kiyo joined her action.
"Oh, um, well, it's still good!" Zatch said, trying to gather up some dignity. He wasn't successful.
"Zatch, you have horrible taste, really, " Kiyo said, setting down the plate he had been about to eat. He picked up some real food that had been on top of the plate, and ate it.
They made small talk(very small, as there are two guys who love to eat, with a nearly unlimited supply of food).
When they got to dessert, the boys had something to say.
"Buuurrp!" They belched in unison.
"Boys, boys, what do you say now?" Suzie asked, like a patient mother would.
"Excuse me!" Zatch and Kiyo said.
"Good children!"
Another maid brought in the dessert, chocolate mousse, pudding, cookies, ice cream, cake, you name it, you'd better believe it was there.
Plates were loaded up, napkins were tucked in, eating utensils were picked up, when...BANG! Sizzle!
A blast of fire came through the apartment door, frying up all the food.
Zatch and Kiyo's jaws dropped open.
They sat for a moment, dumbfounded.
"What the? Whoever did that will have hell to pay!" Kiyo exclaimed, jumping up on the blackened table, Zatch right behind him.
They were obviously very pissed at someone for ruining their meal.
Suzie, on the other hand, when the fire came blasting through, had passed out. She was laying in her chair which was fallen back on the floor, and had little X's as eyes, which, as we all know, is a sure sign a person is passed out.
(1) A very short and old man walked in admist the smoke. Beside him was a short, pudgy little boy. Or should we call it a...mamodo?
The old man had his cane, but was also leaning on the mamodo(who didn't look very happy) for support. He had gray hair that stood up, defying gravity, and bushy gray eyebrows. He had normal coloured skin, but piercing purple eyes.
But he was so old!
Zatch and Kiyo sweat dropped just looking at him.
"Uh, Kiyo, please don't tell me we have to battle against the old man and his fat sidekick," Zatch said.
"Um, afraid so, Zatch, they must be our next opponents," Kiyo said, laughing slightly.
The man slowly walked forward, closer to Team Kick Ass.
He looked up and said, "Excuse me, you are the young fella' with the mamodo, correct? Because the last 4 apartments before this were pretty mad when I blasted my way in. I can't imagine why! People these says, so freakin' rude."
"Um, yes, we're Team Kick Ass! We're here to...um, what's the line, Kiyo?" Zatch asked.
"We're here to kick your ass!" Kiyo filled in for Zatch.
"Bring in on, dorkos!" A high pitched voice said. It was the chubby little one. He had spoken!
"I am Katsuya, and my mamodo is Kennata. Now let's fight!" The old man said, suddenly, clearly, loudly. "We are Team Kaake, so let's go!"
They began the fight...
(1) Yup, just made 'em up.
Okaysie, 3 chapters down, now how many more to go? Hmm...we shall see!
Stay tuned next chapter, for the first fighting scene!
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