Hi!
My computer was rid of that annoying virus thing last Sat.(5/8/05), so I can write fan fiction!
Updates of me:
My grades are finally getting up, just in time for the end of school...though I'm losing my voice! And I just found out a friend of mine will never be able to drive(unless she gets eye surgery), because she's legally blind. Sad! Not the worst thing that could happen, but still! It'll get depressing next year when all her friends are getting their licenses and she's not...
Written On:
Cinco de Mayo,
May 10th, 2005
May 11th, 2005
Published on:
May 11th, 2005
Reviews:
29
Reviewers:
Sugarmaster15- Thanks for reviewing!
Mushra-Obsessed- Mushra is very rude:) Thanks for reviewing, and I'll keep on rockin..oops, ah, writing!
Shihiki- Are the squirrels really evil? That's what everyone thinks, but are they?
Electric Ammo-I wanna see Zatch accidentally eat a few mamodo book sandwiches! Funny :)
dragoonknight1- We all want to blow up an apartment and not be in trouble. It's actually been a life long dream of mine. :D
Summer Plans:
Hmm..summer's coming up soon, and I'll most likely be gone a bunch, though not as much as usual...so, I don't know how often I'll update! But, honestly, I'll try!
I have my stories on saved on my computer, and on a disk, so I'll never lose them Hahahahh!
I don't know why Ch. 4 is so unedited(no line breaks and such), I guess something messed up, but I'll go back and fix it.
On to the story!
Life With Zatch, Ch.5 The Balloon Babon
Zatch, Kiyo, Shara, and Suzie walked out of the apartment, doubling back to grab Zatch's coat.
" I don't see why you need your coat, Zatch, it's like a 100 degrees out here," Kiyo said in disgust, angry they had to stay away from the ice cream for longer.
"I always get cold when I eat ice cream" Zatch said in reply, sticking his tongue out at Kiyo.
"Ok, Children," Shara said. "Where should we eat, from an ice cream vendor in the park, or an ice cream parlor?"
"Um, how 'bout both?" Zatch asked hopefully.
"Sounds good to me!" Kiyo said.
"You pigs! My mom graciously invites you out to ice cream after you nearly blew up our apartment, and now you're trying to score as much ice cream as you can!" Suzie said, angrily, her hands on her hip.
"Suzie, calm down, darling," Shara said. "They're just greedy little boys, it's normal for them to want as much ice cream as they can get."
"Hey, who are you calling greedy little boys?" Zatch and Kiyo asked, narrowing their eyes.
"Um, forget it! Let's just go to both!" Shara said at the evil glares from Team Kick Ass. "We can go play or shop or something in between.
So they did. First stop, ice cream vendor in the park.
"Yummy, my frutti-tooti-rooti-lutti is delicious!" Zatch said, licking on his 32 scoop ice cream cone. "How's your strawberry, Kiyo?"
"It's fine," Kiyo said, sweat dropping, ashamed that a little kid could put away 32 scoops to his 3. Kiyo wondered if he'd even people able to finish his small cone!
"Our vanilla ice cream is very good, too!" Suzie said.
They walked in silence a few minutes, lipping up their ice cream, and making sure it wasn't dripping onto their hands or clothes.
"Oh, kids! I just remembered that I must meet Davela, Suzie's father, at a restaurant clear across town! I'm late, I'm late, for a very important date!(1)" Shara said, throwing some money at them and running off at the speed of light.
"Yes, now that the old lady is gone, I can definitely get Kiyo to myself." Suzie schemed quietly.
She turned around to talk to them sweetly. They were bent over, picking up the money.
"Free loaders," Suzie muttered. Honestly, boys. She briefly wondered why she even liked them. Then her thoughts; 'Kiyo! Kiyo, my love! He's why I like boys. Well, he's the only one I like! But he's so sweet, and kind..."
"Suzie! Get your butt over here! We're leaving, and I need you... to carry these balloons!" Kiyo shouted, 'very' sweetly and kindly.
"Wow, they sure work fast! How long was I drooling over Kiyo?" Suzie questioned herself, but didn't find an answer. "Huh, guess I'd better go help them!" She ran over to the boys.
"Okasie, Kiyo, you take this bunch, and Suzie, you take this bunch. He gestured to the vendor to hand Kiyo the blue and black balloons, and to hand Suzie the pink and red balloons. He himself took the orange, green and white balloons. Of course, Zatch is a little kid, and the balloons were very full with helium, so...
"Uh, Kiyo, a little help?" Zatch asked weakly and in pure terror.
Kiyo turned around. No Zatch. He then looked up as a small shoe fell on his head.
Zatch was floating up into space. Well, not really, but he was already about 7 feet off of the ground.
"Zatch! What are you doing? Get down here this very instant!" Kiyo shouted, shaking his fist at Zatch.
So he did. Zatch fell square on top of Kiyo. Naturally, this caused an uproar.
From Suzie.
"Zatch Bell! You're in trouble, mister! You better not have hurt my poor, dear, little Kiyo!" She ran over to Kiyo, and began stroking his hair.
"Ick, get off me, girl. I am totally fine," Kiyo said, standing up and brushing himself off. He swayed a bit. "I'm completely fine." He then passed out.
"Oh, perfect, Zatch, you just had to fall on his head. He had better not be hurt, for your sake!"
Zatch gulped. Get Suzie angry, and it's like you hit a wasp nest with a tennis racket, or like you are in the path of a charging herd of rhinos. In Deep Crap...that's what you are.
Thankfully, Suzie was too busy waking Kiyo up to notice Zatch sneaking off. Sneaking off to where? You'll see...
In the meantime, Suzie had somehow pulled Kiyo onto a wooden park bench. She sat on the ground next to him. She didn't care that her white skirt was getting grass stains. She just wanted to Kiyo to wake.
"Kiyo, are you otay? My poor wittle Kiyo, did that mean Zatch hurt you? We'll get my revenge, yes we will, my precious(2)," Suzie muttered, her eyes wide, with evil thoughts running through her mind.
Even though Kiyo was evil towards her sometimes, she knew that one day they would be together.
She sat like that, thinking and hoping, for a few minuets, hoping Kiyo would wake up. Little did she know, our little mamodo was returning...
Zatch spied Suzie next to the bench. Quickly, he ran over to a water fountain to go to the next step of his revenge.
After a minute, he stepped right behind Suzie. And then SPLAT! Down goes the water balloon right on Suzie's head.
"ZATCH! What do you think you are doing?" Suzie screeched, continuing to get bombarded by water balloons.
"Just getting back at you, for yelling at me!" Zatch said, throwing harder..
Kiyo stirred. He had been getting hit by the water ballons, cold water splashing on him, also. Waking him up.
He opened one eye. "Hello? Man, what happened?"
Suzie's eyes widened, and glistened. "Zatch, he's awake. Oh, my dear sweet Kiyo!"
"What the f happened?" Kiyo asked, sitting up, spitting on the grass. He was trying to act tough, though really he was embarrassed.
"Zatch here landed on you and knocked you out! Would you like me to hurt him for you?" Suzie asked, machete in hand.
"No, no, that won't be necessary, right Kiyo?" Zatch asked shaking his head and hands back and forth.
"Hmm...as funny as it would be to see Zatch get hurt, I'm fine. Let's get on to our next destination," Kiyo said.
K, next chapter: They are on to their next stop. Where is it? Is it a restaurant, an arcade, the movies, what? Stay tuned, and you'll find out!
I'm kinda' sad that school is ending. I won't get to see some of my friend till school next year, and I'm another grade closer to graduating, it's just so sad! Yet, I can't wait till summer!
Hugs and kisses to my reviewers! Thanks bunches!
(1) Yup, you guessed it, 'Alice in Wonderland'. At least, I think that's how it goes!
(2) Yeah, LOTR. Duh! Everyone should know this:D
Adios!