REVIEW RESPONSE
Rock Raider: Heh, Excellememt, I like that. I'll considir using Fifi La Fume and Furball in the future as well as other Tiny Toon characters. Thanks for the suggestion, and the reason I used the PSP, while I am a Nintendo nut, is that I don't want to seem biased towards Nintendo. To be honest, I do play games on other consoles (Particularly Looney Tunes Space Race on PS2). I will include DS in a fic at some point.
PurpleCobra247: Thanks for the applause (takes a bow). That action scene took a while to write, glad you liked it. I had already known how Jessica would reveal herself to Zach AND how he'd react for a while, glad you found that cute. Romance helps tie a action story together quite well if you ask me. This will also make it harder for villians to kill our heroes as they'll protect each other bitterly.
acosta pérez josé ramiro: The name 'Pranker' had been decided on for a while, in fact, I had decided on the name about half way through my first FoxFang story. Same with her being female, intended for a while. Glad you liked the ideas. Using Shirley to keep in contact with the heroes telepathically is only a temporary measure until a permanent is decided upon. I may keep it though, I'll think about it. Glad you like the Treehouse base idea. I don't read the Simpsons so I don't really know about the treehouse thing you mentioned in your review.
Nightw2: Heh, I have computer problems too. Sometimes my computer decides to crash just when I'm saving (shakes fist at computer). And thanks for the ideas for stunts the Pranker could do. I have a few ideas of my own that I may use.
Who is she
After a few minutes, the smoke in the area cleared. The jet that the Pranker was on was nowhere in sight and the whole party room had been ransacked. Luckily, no one was hurt but FoxFang and Cub were angry. FoxFang was punching her fist while Cub squeezed a Fangdart in frustration.
"DAMM, she got away!" FoxFang shouted. Cub looked back at the guests and did a quick head count.
"At least everyone here is ok." Cub added.
"Not everyone doc, I can't find my daughter anywhere." Bugs complained.
"Same with Zach, I can't see him." Melissa added. FoxFang could tell that this would come up and she had a solution planned.
"I saw two rabbits running down the stairs as we entered. I'm sure it was them." FoxFang replied calmly.
"Are you sure?" Lola asked.
"I'm positive."
"Ok, they'll probable be in the car by now."
"Right. We'll find them and send them back up."
"You'll do that?"
"It's our duty to protect this city. But once we have found your kids, we must go."
"Where?" Bugs asked.
"We need to find that maniac."
"Ok, good luck." Daffy said.
"We don't need luck." With that, FoxFang and Cub leapt off the building, using the grapple gun to slow their descent. Everyone in the party room was in shock about what had happened.
"I never knew this city was a dangerous place." Sylvester moaned.
"My head is still ringing from that buzzer." Penelope added.
"Does anyone have any idea who the Pranker is?" Elmer Fudd asked.
"I think I might know." Wile E replied. Everyont looked at him and gave him their full attention.
"Then, who is he?" Sylvester Jr. asked.
"SHE!" Buster and Babs snapped.
"Anyway, the Pranker was one of the villians the origional FoxFang battled about 300 years ago." Wile E explained. Shirley took an opportunity and began discrretely taking notes.
"So, is this girl really dangerous?" Foghorn asked.
"Extremely. There were rumors that she was able to discover the origional FoxFang's identity but died before she could reveal it." Wile E continued. Shirley was able to prevent herself from gasping when she heard this.
"If that's true, Jessica and her family are in danger." Shirley thought to herself. Wile E continued his explanation of who the Pranker was.
"The Pranker was supposed to be the leader of the most feared group of gangsters from that time period. There are records of a signature left at many of her crime scenes. It was usally a whoppee cushion that sprayed confetti and shouted 'pranker' when it was sat on. She left it at the scene of every crime she commited. Which led to her eventual downfall at the hands of FoxFang."
"Is there any idea who she was?" Bugs asked.
"No one knows. FoxFang refused to reveal the Pranker's identity." As Wiole E said this, the door began to creak open. Behind it were Jessica and Zach. They were both putting on a very convincing 'terrified child' routine, which had everyone except Plucky and Shirley fooled. They nervously looked around the ruined room before entering. They ran straight to their respective parents.
"Is it safe?" Jessica asked.
"Yes it is Jess, this Pranker weirdo has gone." Bugs replied. An employee went up to Wile E and whispered in his ear.
"But her minions have stolen a lot of devices." Wile E exclaimed. Shilrey quickly mind-read the employee and Wile E tolearn what had been stolen and jotted them down.
"What do you say we do?" The employee asked.
"For one thing, this place will not be opened until this person is caught." Wile E replied.
"So we might as well head home." Tweety said. He was holding onto Becky as tightly as he could. Everyone was still shaken abouut what had just happened.
"Jessica, until this person is caught, no one is to go outside unless absolutely necessary." Lola said sternly.
"And that goes for all of you." Bugs added.
"Why?" Jessica asked.
"Because she is very dangerous. It's best to leave it all to FoxFang." Lola replied.
"Everyone, go home and lock, I say, lock your doors. We'll all know when the Pranker will be gone, dfeeated that is." Foghorn instructed.
"Whilst I hate to agree with a chicken, he's right." Yosemite Sam added. Jessica and Zach then heard Shirley communicating to them telepathically.
"Come to the treehouse as soon as you can." Shirley instructed them. Jessica and Zach realised that she had something important to say so decided in their own minds to come.
"How should I get there?" Zach thought to himself. He delibrately did it so Shilrey would pick up that thought.
"I'll watch Daffy and Melissa and teleport you there when they are asleep." Shirley replied telepathically. Lola picked pu Jessica while Meilssa picked up Zach.
"Well we'd better go. It's ont very safe around here anymore." Bugs said.
"Well, goodnight to ya." Daffy replied.
"Hope you all sleep ok." Bugs added as they all went back to the car, with Jessica making sure she had everything.
Later that night, after everyone else had gone to sleep, Jessica, Zach, Plucky and Shirley were all in the treehouse base. They were discussing the incident and what they should do next.
"So, what did the Pranker get away with?" Zach asked.
"You didn't see?" Plucky asked.
"I only caught a glimpse but I couldn't identify anything." Jessica replied.
"I mind read the an employee and found that she has taken a Ruby, a neutronic motherboard, a punp, a bunch of solar pannels, a ton of steel, an LED and a dish." Shirley replied.
"Seems mostly junk." Plucky added.
"But do we have any suspects?" Jessica asked.
"Well, the only two people that weren't present were Porky and Petunia." Zach replied.
"I doubt they would be involved." Plucky protested.
"True, they are law abiding people." Jessica replied.
"Can you sense Porly or Petunia?" Zach asked. Shirley went into a trance for a few seconds.
"I can sense Porly but not Petunia." Shirley replied.
"That doesn't bode well." Plucky muttered.
"Jessica, Zach, there's something that I should say." Shirley instructed.
"What?" Jessica asked.
"I have some valuable information about the Pranker that you two should know."
"Really, what do you know?" Shirley then told Jessica and Zach what Wile E had said about the Pranker.
"So, the Pranker knew who the origional FoxFang was?" Zach asked
"It's rumored she did." Shirley replied.
"Which means that she'd be able to trace the family tree and then take revenge on is or her descendants." Plucky added.
"Which means the family of the origional FoxFang is in danger." Zach concluded. This made Jessica gasp ih horror.
"What's wrong?" Plucky asked. Jessica began hastily suiting up.
"Zach, suit up, quickly!" Jessica snapped.
"Why?" Zach asked, hastily putting on his Cub outfit.
"I know the family of the origional FoxFang. We have no time to waste."
"Who's family did the origional FoxFang belong to?" Jessica and Zach had fully suited up. Before putting her mask on, Jessica gave a sad glance around the room.
"My family"
Back at the Burrow, Bugs and Lola were fast asleep in their bedroom. Outside their burrow,a figure was looking down into the hole. The figure jumped into the hole and used a skeleton key to open the door. The figure was the Pranker. She lit up the room by releasing a bunch of glow worms and looked around the room. She could tell that it was the bunny's burrow by the family rest hanging on the wall. The family crest was a carrot with a spear right through the middle. On the blunt end of the spoear was a flag with more carrots.
"So, Brett's family still lives here. He should have been smarter, the old fool." The Pranker said to herself. She scouted around the house and saw every room excapt the bedrooms.
"All in all, much different to when I last came here 300 years ago. These new rabbits sure have cash to throw around. Time for some sweet revenge." The Pranker said evilly to herself. She pushed Bugs and Lola's bedroom door open and peeped inside. She saw Bugs and Lola fast asleep.
"Time to spoil the slumber party." The Pranker muttered to herself with a laugh. She pulled out the bicycle horn she'd used before and squeezzed it, creating a tremendous bellow blasting the two rabbits completely out of bed. Lola pulled the bedsheet covers off with her. The two rabbits looked up at their attacker, Lola holding the bedsheets close to her body to preserve her dignity.
"Oh my, did I disturb your sleep?" The Pranker asked sarcastically.
"What are you doing here?" Bugs asked sternly. The Pranker walked into the room and turned the light on.
"You don't know your families' history?"
"Well, not all of it, but what's it to you?"
"I don't need to know. I know all I need to know about your family." With that, the Pranker pulled out a flower from her pocket.
"I don't know what that will do, but I don't like it." Lola snapped.
"Come on, crack a smile for me please?" The Pranker asked sarcastically. The flower then sprayed laughing gas causing Bugs and Lola to start laughing hysterically. The Pranker jooined in with the laughter, only her's was evil.
"My, I never had this much fun with Brett!" The Pranker laughed. Bugs and Lola were laughing too hard to respond. The Pranker then pulled out a basketball.
"Payback is mine. Give my regards to Brett when you see him." The Pranker shouted hysterically before throwing the basketball right at Bugs and Lola. The ball exploded and enveloped them in a blue cloud, knocking Bugs and Lola unconscious. The Pranker then went and tried Jessica's room, but found it locked.
"Hmm, I wonder where she could be?" The Pranker asked herself sarcastically, she actually had a good idea of where she was. Before leaving, she stuck her mark to Bugs and Lola's bedroom door. She then left the burrow and disappeared into the darkness.
(A/N: Hope you liked that. So, what do you think will happen to Bugs and Lola? You can guess if you want. Read and review for now please.)
