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Accident and a Savior
It's December and almost time for winter break. A new student is to arrive at Kadic he moved here from America. But the day he and his father were on their way to their new home something strange happened. Dave had his life changed forever.
"Help! I need somebody. Help! Not just anybody. Help! You know I need someone," Dave's father sang as he played his favorite Beatles CD in the car.
"Dad do you have to sing while you're driving?" asked Dave.
"Sure I do," said his father.
Dave just shook his head and stared out the window. He didn't want to move out here but his dad just got a promotion and his mom who just died recently wasn't around to protest.
Down the street two cars that were racing each other were coming up to the intersection where Dave and his dad were approaching. Meanwhile there were two types of creatures watching. The Vampires are on top a building and the werewolves are in the bushes in someone's front yard. We go to the building first.
"Now you know your job," said Vladimir.
"Yes, I know what I am doing," said Yumi.
"Remember no one can see you, once we make the accident happen," said Vladimir.
"Yes I get it now just leave," said Yumi in an angry tone.
"Yumi, I will tell you this one last time, if you love Ulrich so much just bite him and make him a vampire," said Vladimir as he changed into his bat form and flew off.
His bat form made him at least seven feet tall. He had the face of a bat and the wings of a bat. The only thing that was part human was the rest of his body. Now we move over to the bushes.
"Amy, if the vampires complete their task then your father will never forgive us. We can't loose another potential werewolf to the vampires," said Kahn.
"Kahn I know and I won't fail my father. I just don't understand why we are fighting," said Amy.
"Listen enough questions, just do the job I'll be up on the building looking out for trouble," said Kahn.
Kahn then left Amy to do her job; he stayed in the shadows so he wouldn't be seen. Amy patiently waited for he accident to happen. She was happy that her friend Vex told her about the vampires plot to get another vampire on their side. Vex was doing a deed that could get her killed. Amy's father despised making friends with vampires but they needed 100 more werewolves to match the 100,000 vampires.
The three cars closed in on the intersection. One of the racers pulled a head of the other and hit the front fender of the car with Dave and his father in it. Dave's father hit the steering wheel with his forehead and he got knocked out. The car then hit the traffic light post. The vampire flew out of the front windshield and landed in front of his car. The second vampire slammed into the back of their car. The car lunged forward and the front end began to wrap itself around the pole. With the force of the impact Dave's seat belt broke and his body slammed into the dashboard. His head hit the windshield; the glass broke and a piece cut into his left eye. The second vampire slowly pulled himself from his wrecked car.
"YOU ASS HOLE!" yelled Pete.
"WHAT!" yelled Chris.
"YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO KEEP THE FAMILY ALIVE NOT KILL THEM!" yelled Pete.
"Shit, we should leave now," said Chris.
"No really, you just killed the newest addition to our clan," said Pete.
They looked up to see Yumi standing on top of the near by building. She was glaring at them. Chris and Pete took flight and flew away. Dave then managed to get himself out of the car. He stumbled over to the sidewalk holding his ribs. He was in so much pain that he couldn't stand. Amy took this opportunity and went over to Dave. She picked him up and left. Yumi followed in pursuit but eventually lost Amy when she went into the woods.
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