Wow 311 hits in total but where are the reviews that support the hits. Most hits are on CH1 but others seem to have read on. Leave reviews I don't bite. (anonymus reviews accepted)
To anyone who has reviewed thanks for doing so. This ch was so big it needed three parts
Night Pains p1
"VEX!" said Yumi with surprise.
"Yes, I have been watching your friend for quite some time now," said Vex.
Dave's jaw dropped. She was more beautiful than when he saw her in Amy's house. Every curve of her body seemed to mold together. She was wearing a black tank top and black pants. The only thing that made her stand out was her blonde hair. Yumi looked at Dave and closed his jaw. Dave stared at the ground, looking embarrassed.
"Yumi you should leave here. She will send others to come back and search for him," said Vex.
"But, she's not that dumb," said Yumi.
Vex came over to her and whispered into her ear. Yumi nodded and then smiled. She then brought back her serious face and turned around.
"Ok here's the plan I will leave and tell the others that Vex has taken care of you but she let you live. I want you to stay out of trouble," said Yumi. She winked at him, changed into her bat form and left.
"Ok, so then you leave and I get to live right," said Dave.
A wide smile spread on her face. Dave couldn't take his eyes off her. He still thought that she was serious. He was trying to respect her because Yumi made it seem like she was important. Dave looked at the ground again. He could feel his face getting red.
"Man you need to stop taking things so literally," said Vex.
She walked up to him and raised his chin. She smiled at him and started to laugh a little.
"You should see your face," said Vex. "Its so red right now."
"Well I uhh…" said Dave as Vex put a finger to his lips.
"Here maybe this will help you see why I had Yumi leave," said Vex.
Dave dropped his head again but Vex brought his eyes to hers. She then closed the gap between them and kissed him. Dave slowly began to return the kiss. After a few seconds she broke the kiss.
"What was that for?" asked Dave.
She started to laugh.
"What?" asked Dave.
"Remember when you were at Amy's house and I walked in," said Vex.
"Yes,' said Dave.
"Well I saw you look at me I felt like I had finally found someone that I could be friends with and not get into any trouble," said Vex.
"Well it seems like you took it a little further," said Dave.
"At least you accepted the kiss," said Vex.
Dave smiled at her, she put her arm around him and they walked back to the school. She knew that tomorrow he would be back at the mansion but she didn't really want him to be there. Now we go to the castle, Ulrich is just waking up.
"Uh, man my head hurts," said Ulrich.
"Just relax, here have a drink," said a voice.
Ulrich thought he noticed the voice but he couldn't see who she was. Ulrich took the glass though and started to drink. Then the light came on. Ulrich first saw Sissi, and then he saw Yumi in the doorway. Next he saw what was in the glass.
"WHAT THE HELL!" said Ulrich as he drops the glass.
Yumi ran over and caught the glass just before it hit the ground. She then turned to Sissi.
"SISSI YOU BITCH!" yelled Yumi.
"What?" asked Sissi.
"You weren't supposed to give him this yet," said Yumi.
"What's going on?" asked Ulrich.
"SHUT UP!" Yumi and Sissi yelled in unison.
"Now Sissi just leave me and Ulrich alone ok," said Yumi.
"You know what, just wait, he will dump you for me," said Sissi.
She gave Yumi a death stare and then left the room.
"Yumi what's going on? I wake up and I am in some weird room with Sissi and she gives me a cup of blood," said Ulrich.
"Listen there is no other way that you will be able to understand what has happened to you," said Yumi.
"What are you talking about?" asked Ulrich.
"Did you like the blood when it was given to you?" asked Yumi.
"Yumi what are you trying to tell me?" asked Ulrich.
"Ok, I'm just going to tell you flat out. You are a vampire Ulrich," said Yumi.
"NO! I…I DON'T BELIEVE YOU!" yelled Ulrich as he got up from the bed.
"Ulrich just listen to me," said Yumi.
Ulrich runs out into the hall and then runs into his mother.
"Mom," said Ulrich.
"Hi son I see your up," said Mrs. Stern.
"What's going on here?" asked Ulrich
"Ulrich I've been waiting a long time for you to join your father and I. Your father wanted to wait until you were sixteen to bite you but then you met Yumi and I decided that it was better if she did it. Welcome home son, " said Mrs. Stern.
Ulrich was shaking his head in disbelief. He turned around to run but instead bumped into Yumi.
"Yumi, am I really a…" said Ulrich as he trailed off.
She nodded. Ulrich got a very angry look on his face; he then went back into the room and slammed the door shut. He lay on his bed, tears formed in his eyes. 'Why does it have to be me?' he thought.
Part 2 is next don't forget to review.