Shadow-so we finally have done it and now the whole thing is hopefully better.
Spirit-yeah there still might be some errors but you can't tell us that every story doesn't have at least one. well here's the revised version.
A blonde girl banged against the door several more times. Her wrists were tied behind her back. She backed up and threw her body at it again. Multiple bruises were forming on her shoulder and arm, but those weren't the only wounds on her body. She had several slowly healing cuts and gashes on her face, legs and arms. The bruises were adding to the pain her body was already enduring, but she didn't care. The only thing she thought about was to escape. A small whimper sounded in the corner and she stopped her rein of attacks on the metal door.
"Usagi don't worry, we'll get out of here soon." she whispered.
She could make out her friends outline in the darkness. Her hair flowing freely around her, matted with blood and dirt. She herself probably looked no better. They had been trapped in this hell hole for three days. Minako had even been nearly raped by one of the guards. Luckily she had gotten him off her and had kicked the crap out of him. Giving him a broken ankle and she had shattered his elbow. After that the only time she was touched was by someone hitting or kicking her. She remembered what had happened before all this. What had started out as a calm clear day soon turned into a tragic nightmare.
Flashback...
They had been on a picnic with seven other friends. It was in celebration of Usagi and her husband, Mamoro's marriage. It was great. Rei was reading Hotaru's palm, while Minako and Makoto scoped out the guys. Haruka and Michiru were telling them about there career plans, while Ami and Setsuna were locked in conversation.
"How about that one Minako-chan?" Makoto asked, pointing to a tall dark skinned guy with slicked back black hair.
"So hot! Oi Rei-chan, Hotaru-chan are you sure you don't want to join us. You both do need a man." she called out to the two raven haired girls.
"Please like a really need a guy in my life." Rei snapped turning away from them. Hotaru just smiled.
"No thanks." she called out and let Rei finish telling her about her future.
"Like Haruka-kun's going to approve of any of those boys anyway." Michiru said smiling at her lover. Haruka grinned.
"What? I just don't think any of them are suited for our little Firefly." Hotaru threw a glare at her. Haruka laughed knowing Hotaru hated being called little. She was after all 18.
"When will you guys stop with this boy chasing?" Ami asked breaking away from her's and Setsuna's conversation. Makoto smiled.
"When you stop reading. Well actually at least till we finally get a guy"
"Then why don't you just ask one out?" Setsuna asked.
"Please if it were that simple, don't you think we would have done it? Besides it's more fun to play hard to get." Minako said. Ami and Setsuna shook their heads.
"Oh come on guys stop arguing and eat before the food gets cold." Usagi said from her position on Mamoro's lap. She kissed him on the cheek and he smiled. Rei looked shocked.
"You mean you haven't eaten it all!" she cried, which made everyone laugh. Usagi pouted.
"That's not funny Rei-chan." she said. Mamoro, knowing the two would soon start up, silenced his wife with a passionate kiss. All the girls ooed at the two and they pulled away blushing. They all gathered around and started eatting. That's when they came. Hundreds of mobile suits flew over head as a few stomped around on the ground. The Senshi all stood up in surprise.
"What's going on?"Ami asked. No one anserwed her as they had no clue either. Suddenly one of the Leo's took aim and fired apon some of the people on the opposite side of them. Their screams echoed through out the area.
"Oh my gosh! Quickly everyone transform! Moon Crystal Power! Make-Up"
"Mars Crystal Power"
"Jupiter Crystal Power"
"Mercury Crystal Power"
"Venus Crystal power"
"Saturn Crystal Power"
"Neptune Crystal Power"
"Uranus Crystal Power"
"Pluto Crystal Power"
(all) "Make-UP"
And the fight began. Ami and Rei were the first to die. One of the Aries had shot them from over head, before they could let loose their attacks.
"Mercury! Mars! NOOO!"Jupiter was able to bring down that one as well as several more before being cut down by a Leo. Uranus yelled for Neptune to get Saturn away, since she would be of no help in this battle, she was still in training to control her powers. Ignoring Saturn's objections Neptune grabbed her, and ran away from the scene. She looked back in time to see her lover fall in the hands of the same Leo that killed Jupiter.
Venus and Moon fought back to back. They tried their best to ignore their fallen comrades, but it was no use. A grounded Aries aimed it's gun at them and fired. The girls had no time to run, and the fact that they were frozen with fear didn't help. That was when Mamoro stepped into the shots way. Taking it for them. Usagi fell to her knees and tried to wake her husband up.
"Mamoro? Mamoro please don't die! Don't leave me please!" she cried letting her tears roll down her face. Minako told her he was gone, so the young princess fainted. Before Minako could respond something hit her from behind and all went black. The last thing she heard was Pluto's scream as she too was killed.
End flashback...
Seven hours later they awoke in this jail looking cell. Ever since then Usagi had been huddled in the corner slowly going mad, while Minako tried desperately to free them. From time to time she wondered if the two remaining outers had made it. She kept telling herself they had, but doubt lingered in her mind. Refusing to go away.
"I will get us out." Minako said throwing herself at the door with each word. "And we'll find the others"
"Mam-mamoro's gone...they-they're all gone." she heard Usagi whisper. She went over to her friend and kneeled next to her. When they had awoken Minako had noticed Usagi was slowly changing. Her best guess was that she was either going into a depressed state or losing her sanity.
"Usagi you have to stay with me. Please Usagi I don't want to loose you to." tears formed at the Senshi of love's eyes. Usagi was indifferent to her tears. Minako let her tears fall when she realized her best friend, her only friend, was no longer with her.