I'm so o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o sorry that I haven't updated in such a long time! I've been trying to figure out and ending. Sorry! Here is the person the reviewed for chapter 5:
sponge-fan: Yeah, I'm alive! Sorry again! I hate writer's block too! That's the first time I've ever had it and it was miserable! Well, You'll find out soon enough if you were right! I put in some chapter on the bottom that I needed a new title because I got a review that said this story was going slow, so yeah… I changed it. So I just decided on "Spongebob's Suspicion". Thanks for the nice comments on the story! That's cool about the Reader's Hint! I've got an idea about a story. It's about what would happen if Spongebob was a girl! But I don't know how the ending would be or anything so I don't know if that's going to work out. But, we'll see. Thanks for reviewing!
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Review of Chapter 5:
Spongebob started to get a little suspicious, but his suspicion started to grow and grow with each passing day (even though only a few have passed).
Finally, during the Krusty Krew's lunch break, Spongebob asked Squidward what was going on. Squidward just said, "Nothing, Spongebob. I don't know what you are talking about."
"Yes you know what I'm talking about!" accused Spongebob. "I've seen how you've been getting home later and I've seen a figure in the Chum Bucket on times that you are nowhere else. I don't know what you're up to, but I will find out. I'm on to you, Squidward."
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Time for Chapter 6 (or 7, whatever):
Later the same day that Spongebob talked to Squidward, Spongebob decided to start spying on Squidward. He started with the figure in the Chum Bucket.
The next morning, Spongebob got up early so he could go to the Chum Bucket. He woke up to his fog-horn alarm and quickly got ready to set out for the Chum Bucket.
Soon, he was up, dressed, fed, and ready to leave. He grabbed his pair of binoculars and his face mask, just in case Squidward was there, Spongebob didn't want Squidward to see him. Spongebob opened the door of his pineapple house and stepped into the sight of a beautiful early morning in Bikini Bottom.
He quietly snuck (with his face mask on) to find a good spot to spy from. He decided that behind a bush on the side of the road with a clear view of a window of the Chum Bucket would be the best place.
Spongebob got himself situated behind the bush when he saw the same figure in the same window of the Chum Bucket. He quickly reached for his binoculars and held them up to his big, clean eyes.
But what Spongebob saw in the window was not what he was expecting. Instead of seeing Squidward in the window, Spongebob saw Plankton's own computer wife, Karen! Spongebob was shocked at the sight. He never realized that the figure he saw before in the window could have been Karen!
Maybe he just hasn't come yet, Spongebob thought. Work doesn't start for another 45 minutes, so why don't I stay here and see if Squidward does show up. So Spongebob decided to stay at his post behind the bushes until work started.
In about half an hour, Spongebob hit the jackpot, or so he thought. . .
Maybe he decided not to go to the Chum Bucket this morning, Spongebob thought after 30 minutes of nothing but roads and boredom. But, work starts in 15 minutes, so I'll stay here until then.
Right after he finished that thought, Squidward came into view walked down the road. Spongebob again quickly jumped up, snatched his binoculars and shot them up to his eyes to examine Squidward from afar.
Spongebob saw nothing interesting; just Squidward walking normally down the road. When Squidward got to the intersection of the road and the little street with the Chum Bucket on one end and the Krusty Krab on the other, he walked turned and walked down the street.
"AHA!" Spongebob said quietly but excitedly to himself. "I knew he was scamming something!"
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That's it for this chapter! Thanks for reading Spongebob's Suspicion! I hope that you continue to read!
I think that the next chapter will be the last one, but it might not be, just to tell my readers.
Please R&R! It really motivates me to write more! Thanks!
Thanks,
Meredith