Digital- Tiffany: Well you have to read to know, ne?
FreaktheMighty: LOL yeah I like to play with my reader's minds...evil laugh
Hopefully everyone will like next chapter.
Rinny1: Making it sound like shape shifters? LOL well actually they kinnda do that in the anime, turning back from human to wolf on and off. I know what you mean, but I'm sorry, I have to mention that to the reader so they won't get confused. About the Tsume deal, well it's a fanfic, and besides, in the anime, Tsume IS really attached to Toboe more than Kiba or Hige, I just like to make it sound more touching. And last, about the human-like thing, I only mean his sane part, again, I only meant more understanding for the reader towards the characters.
Thank you for pointing that though.
dChronologer: Thanks a mil for your comments and support, yeah I'm thinking on doing that, but I also need to think what will happen to the others too. Thanks you though, you're a great help.
Midnyte Wolf : Yes! I love that movie. I didn't mean to copy or anything, but I wanted Tsume and Toboe's bond to be stronger (Brother-like. Sorry maybe I'll think on doing yaoi some other time) and for the reader to understand more how frail and weak Toboe was then.
Demonskid: Read the post above please, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ok that was a LONG review towards the readers, thank you so much for staying with me. I'm terribly sorry for not updating, but my lazy part got the best of me. Actually, I took that time to draw more stuff. If someone is interested to look at my art, please check here: http:www.elenath- And also, I made a small sketch of Toboe! Thank you if you checked!
Towards chapter 6!
Disclaimer: You know the drill.
"Cry to the Moon"
"Crimson Tears"
Kiba growled at the enemies, they had found them, or was it...that they had found Cheza?
Cheza whimpered as she saw the men surrounding them, pointing their weapons at them from every single direction. She stood her ground as she continued to tend to the boy.
Toboe opened his eyes by all the sudden commotion surrounding them, then... he saw her.
Her beautiful crimson eyes, silky, flowing silver hair, pale, soft skin to the touch, and a scent of Luna Flowers.
Was this?
"Flower maiden?" he spoke softly, noticing he didn't hurt anymore, well he still felt some pain, but most of it was gone.
How did this happen?
In the blink of an eye, men were everywhere, and for the group, escape was not really an option.
"I am not afraid to die...!" Kiba rambled on and on in his mind. The hatred he felt towards those creatures was greater than his fears.
He looked back at Cheza, who was now standing, beside her was Toboe, fully healed. Kiba felt a wave of calm overtake him as he saw Toboe well, but was soon forgotten by the creatures who imposed more than danger to the wolves, but to Cheza.
Tsume stood beside Kiba as the men were starting to walk towards them. Hige did the same, protecting the flower maiden was more important than his life right now. And even though he knew they would most probably not make it, it was better to die on your feet, than to die on your knees.
The first shot rang through the air, and the group attacked.
Blood was shed as the wolves took many victims as well as wounds. Toboe stood frozen with Cheza by his side. He was frightened to death, maybe the others were not afraid to die...but what about him?
He took Cheza's delicate hand in his as other men started shooting at them. Toboe did what he could do best, so he ducked as much as he could, running away with the maiden.
That's what his friend's would've liked.
They ran as fast as they could, Cheza kept on saying Kiba's name on and on.
That made Toboe's heart ache terribly, he knew that she wanted to stay with them, to give herself up so that they would live, so that they won't have to suffer. But no one knew what men would do to their only hope to reach paradise... men could not be trusted.
Men could not be trusted...
That's what the group had been saying to him since the very beginning... yes, men could not be trusted, and this proved it. But then again... there were some good men somewhere. There had to be... or were there not?
They stopped abruptly as they reached the very edge of the mountain...where a very steep fall was waiting for any unfortunate soul to fall over of.
Cheza whimpered as the men approached them. They were behind them...and they were coming to take her.
Toboe squeezed her hand tightly, his brows furrowed as he stood in front of her, protecting what was most important to every wolf, to his friends, to him. All trace of fear was gone, as bad men stood in front of them, guns ready.
This were bad men...
Bad men...
And they wanted Cheza.
Toboe kept on saying in his mind, convinced that there was nothing but the inevitable.
"Bad men only have a bad ending..."
They shot at him as he sprang forward his fangs bare and a growl was the only thing that could be seen and heard as blood of evil men was shed to the ground. Toboe fought not only for his life, but also for the protection of what he most valued. He did not let them get close to Cheza, but even though his courage was that of a real wolf, his body was still that of a pup.
He panted and gritted his teeth against the pain on his side, his growl was faint, but it was still a growl of a wolf that would not give up.
He felt warmth behind him...Cheza had wrapped her slim arms to his neck.
"Toboe...please, don't fight. Stop. This is enough." "Cheza... no, I can still fight. Cheza, they won't take you away, I promise...!"
Cheza tightened her arms around him, warm tears making their way down her pale cheeks. "Toboe..."
When everything seemed lost and the men were about to shoot at him, there was a blur of white gray and brown. "Kiba!" called out Cheza as a smiled traced her features again.
The men were taken down, but more were coming. Cheza held to Kiba as the pack made a run for it.
Tsume looked at Toboe, who was still panting. He decided not to take the matter further so he carried the pup on his back, quickening the pace. Toboe had not the energy to muster to complain any further, he had done what he could, and he felt good about it. He had protected Cheza until the very end, and they all knew it.
TBC
AN: Shortest chapter ever!
Please don't kill me, I did what I could.
Right now I'm moving to an apartment for a month because the house we bought is still not finished, and other people has leased the house we are leasing by the end of July.
So what does that have to do with my bad writing?
Well... the apartment is so tiny, so crappy that it has no Internet connection!
So that means I can still write, but I can't submit to the net... sorry, but hey... it will be just a month.
I promise I'll give you guys a HUGE chapter full of suspense, fights and Toboe!
FreaktheMighty: LOL yeah I like to play with my reader's minds...evil laugh
Hopefully everyone will like next chapter.
Rinny1: Making it sound like shape shifters? LOL well actually they kinnda do that in the anime, turning back from human to wolf on and off. I know what you mean, but I'm sorry, I have to mention that to the reader so they won't get confused. About the Tsume deal, well it's a fanfic, and besides, in the anime, Tsume IS really attached to Toboe more than Kiba or Hige, I just like to make it sound more touching. And last, about the human-like thing, I only mean his sane part, again, I only meant more understanding for the reader towards the characters.
Thank you for pointing that though.
dChronologer: Thanks a mil for your comments and support, yeah I'm thinking on doing that, but I also need to think what will happen to the others too. Thanks you though, you're a great help.
Midnyte Wolf : Yes! I love that movie. I didn't mean to copy or anything, but I wanted Tsume and Toboe's bond to be stronger (Brother-like. Sorry maybe I'll think on doing yaoi some other time) and for the reader to understand more how frail and weak Toboe was then.
Demonskid: Read the post above please, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ok that was a LONG review towards the readers, thank you so much for staying with me. I'm terribly sorry for not updating, but my lazy part got the best of me. Actually, I took that time to draw more stuff. If someone is interested to look at my art, please check here: http:www.elenath- And also, I made a small sketch of Toboe! Thank you if you checked!
Towards chapter 6!
Disclaimer: You know the drill.
"Cry to the Moon"
"Crimson Tears"
Kiba growled at the enemies, they had found them, or was it...that they had found Cheza?
Cheza whimpered as she saw the men surrounding them, pointing their weapons at them from every single direction. She stood her ground as she continued to tend to the boy.
Toboe opened his eyes by all the sudden commotion surrounding them, then... he saw her.
Her beautiful crimson eyes, silky, flowing silver hair, pale, soft skin to the touch, and a scent of Luna Flowers.
Was this?
"Flower maiden?" he spoke softly, noticing he didn't hurt anymore, well he still felt some pain, but most of it was gone.
How did this happen?
In the blink of an eye, men were everywhere, and for the group, escape was not really an option.
"I am not afraid to die...!" Kiba rambled on and on in his mind. The hatred he felt towards those creatures was greater than his fears.
He looked back at Cheza, who was now standing, beside her was Toboe, fully healed. Kiba felt a wave of calm overtake him as he saw Toboe well, but was soon forgotten by the creatures who imposed more than danger to the wolves, but to Cheza.
Tsume stood beside Kiba as the men were starting to walk towards them. Hige did the same, protecting the flower maiden was more important than his life right now. And even though he knew they would most probably not make it, it was better to die on your feet, than to die on your knees.
The first shot rang through the air, and the group attacked.
Blood was shed as the wolves took many victims as well as wounds. Toboe stood frozen with Cheza by his side. He was frightened to death, maybe the others were not afraid to die...but what about him?
He took Cheza's delicate hand in his as other men started shooting at them. Toboe did what he could do best, so he ducked as much as he could, running away with the maiden.
That's what his friend's would've liked.
They ran as fast as they could, Cheza kept on saying Kiba's name on and on.
That made Toboe's heart ache terribly, he knew that she wanted to stay with them, to give herself up so that they would live, so that they won't have to suffer. But no one knew what men would do to their only hope to reach paradise... men could not be trusted.
Men could not be trusted...
That's what the group had been saying to him since the very beginning... yes, men could not be trusted, and this proved it. But then again... there were some good men somewhere. There had to be... or were there not?
They stopped abruptly as they reached the very edge of the mountain...where a very steep fall was waiting for any unfortunate soul to fall over of.
Cheza whimpered as the men approached them. They were behind them...and they were coming to take her.
Toboe squeezed her hand tightly, his brows furrowed as he stood in front of her, protecting what was most important to every wolf, to his friends, to him. All trace of fear was gone, as bad men stood in front of them, guns ready.
This were bad men...
Bad men...
And they wanted Cheza.
Toboe kept on saying in his mind, convinced that there was nothing but the inevitable.
"Bad men only have a bad ending..."
They shot at him as he sprang forward his fangs bare and a growl was the only thing that could be seen and heard as blood of evil men was shed to the ground. Toboe fought not only for his life, but also for the protection of what he most valued. He did not let them get close to Cheza, but even though his courage was that of a real wolf, his body was still that of a pup.
He panted and gritted his teeth against the pain on his side, his growl was faint, but it was still a growl of a wolf that would not give up.
He felt warmth behind him...Cheza had wrapped her slim arms to his neck.
"Toboe...please, don't fight. Stop. This is enough." "Cheza... no, I can still fight. Cheza, they won't take you away, I promise...!"
Cheza tightened her arms around him, warm tears making their way down her pale cheeks. "Toboe..."
When everything seemed lost and the men were about to shoot at him, there was a blur of white gray and brown. "Kiba!" called out Cheza as a smiled traced her features again.
The men were taken down, but more were coming. Cheza held to Kiba as the pack made a run for it.
Tsume looked at Toboe, who was still panting. He decided not to take the matter further so he carried the pup on his back, quickening the pace. Toboe had not the energy to muster to complain any further, he had done what he could, and he felt good about it. He had protected Cheza until the very end, and they all knew it.
TBC
AN: Shortest chapter ever!
Please don't kill me, I did what I could.
Right now I'm moving to an apartment for a month because the house we bought is still not finished, and other people has leased the house we are leasing by the end of July.
So what does that have to do with my bad writing?
Well... the apartment is so tiny, so crappy that it has no Internet connection!
So that means I can still write, but I can't submit to the net... sorry, but hey... it will be just a month.
I promise I'll give you guys a HUGE chapter full of suspense, fights and Toboe!