All right, so here is part two. Thank you sooooo much to all of those who reviewed. I love you guys! I hope you enjoy this part also. Just to warn you, it's kind of sad.
Part 2
You ask who I am? I am a boy and my name is Tanlin. All of my life, and that has been an immense amount of time being how I am six years old, I have dreamed of growing up and being a great Jedi. Don't tell anyone, but my friend Koeth and I sometimes pretend that we are Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi together. If Master Yoda found out, he probably would not be very happy because we are supposed to always remain focused and not let our mind wander in games of fantasy. But it's okay for me to pretend, because one day I am going to be a great Jedi, just like Master Anakin. I want to save the galaxy from all of the bad men that hurt people.
But now they tell me I cannot. I do not completely understand, even though I am six years old, but they say I am dead. Is this all a bad dream, because I cannot seem to wake up like usual. Why am I no longer in the Council chamber with the other younglings? Where are we? I remember feeling cold and sad all over. We all hid in the corner, trying to escape from the hurt and the bad men, but we couldn't see anyone.
All of the other younglings began to cry, but I did not cry. I am a brave Jedi and I know that someone will come to rescue us. But the hurt lasted a really long time. And then I felt scared again, which was kind of funny because that was when help arrived. I watched from my hidden corner as Master Anakin came into the Jedi Council room. My hero had come. Running out from the others, I called out to him, told him the bad men were here.
Now I remember. He looked at me with a mean look and it scared me. And then he took his lightsaber and he hurt me. Now I cry because I understand what dead means. It means that my hero is gone and my dreams are gone. I am gone and that is why I cry.
Sorry that it was really short, but I will try and make the next part longer. Thank you so much for reading and please review!