Reviews
kimmi craft: the story is ok so far but for the second chapter i waant some more romance like inuyasha surprises kagome for her birhday or something
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only: I must say. The conscience thing is extremely popular. But, nontheless good.
jessica: Happy B-Day you! I would think you deserved to go to bed late(say 2 and finish the fanfiction'-)Well anyways please write soon i'm dying of Ahem...CLIFHANGER SYNDROME
Thanks for all the great reviews and Jun 8 was my best bud b-day!
Birthday Candles
Chapter 2
Mating season -
"MOM! I'M HOME!" said Kagome.
"Hi dear, how was the feudal era?" asked Mrs. H (Hey! I can't spell her ok?)
"Don't even ask." said Kagome
"What are we doing for birthday?"asked Mrs. H
"Made be I can have a home party inviting my friends." suggested Kagome
"Fine with me." said Mrs. H
In feudal era
InuYasha is sitting on the god tree
(Inu's POV)
And he smelt a wolf and some one that he envied so much when he went near Kagome
and he saw Koga and he asked " Where is my Kagome." and I said " At home."
"Oh Fuck !" said Koga
"What's fucking wrong with you?" I said
"It's mating season and I was going to asked Kagome if she wanted to be my mate?"
said Koga
" I guess have to go." said Koga
Koga turn in to a tornado and he was gone
"Oh yea? It's soon to be the end of May, that's mating season starts(the end of may)." I said
I have to ask Kagome before Koga ask Kagome to be his mate WAIT I had a fight
with her, Damn it ,and I can't tell her that I love her ,she loves that hobo , well I can
try at lease?
In the present
Kagome finish making the Invitations and toke a shower , brush her teeth and wash her
face and fell into bed and fell asleep.
!#$&()!#$&()
The End
I finish it ! Yah ! 2 pages ½ more than I ever done, I want 11 review by the time I start to make chapter 4 for my birthday because 15 is to much for you people and read my first Fan Fiction " I love you Kagome and only you" I'm going to make chapter 4 after I finish so I am almost done and I copy this and paste this script that Angel made and done so bye and review!
Read this script ma friend wrote at Chinese school (I have Chinese school on sat.
and we holidays and summer holiday) her nickname is Angel and here it goes.
InuYasha punches Shippo
Shippo: What was that 4?
InuYasha punches Shippo, again
Shippo: WAHHHHH... KAGOME, INUYASHA HIT ME, WAHHHH.
Kagome: SIT! SIT! S-I-T ! SIT!
Shippo: That's better.
InuYasha:...Why she have to do this to me?
The End