Disclaimer: If I'm not wrong the one who owned Naruto is Masashi Kishimoto and I'm absolutely sure that wasn't my name.

Author's Note: No suing my grammar or vocabulary! This chapter was edited by Wolfgirl13. Hope you enjoy it!

Chapter Five

Naruto or rather Naruko right now was eyeing her summon in satisfaction. She has managed to summon the same toad Jiraiya summoned when they first met after 5 days of hard struggling. The blonde genin didn't know why, but it seemed that when he was currently a she, his chakra control was better than usual. He wondered when he could summon the toad boss, Gamabunta. But true to his word, that Ero Sennin really did train him—her…no matter. He would meet him for 5 hours from 1 p.m. to 6 p.m. After all, he did still need to practice and hone his other abilities. Lately he'd found a somewhat unusual but effective strategy. He planned on using both kage bunshin and bunshin no jutsu at the same time. His opponents would get confused on telling which one was the true him and which ones were his solid clones. If they tried to destroy usual bunshin they would be surprised to know that it was just an illusion, but on the other hand if they didn't and if it was a kage bunshin he would be in trouble because the hit he got would be real. Of course with Neji having the Byakugan, it dampened the effectiveness of this technique because it could tell which ones were the regular bunshins. But he bet that he couldn't see beyond his kage bunshin. There was a reason why this technique was a kinjutsu.

The payment for Jiraiya's training was only to allow him watched him train. He said that even if he wasn't naked, he was still sexy (Naruto froze and shivered for being called sexy) and would still be a great inspiration for his novel. He found out later that it was him who wrote all of the dirty novels Kakashi read, much to his disgust. And of course he has to kiss him—on the cheek, that is—when he finished teaching him. The old man sometimes wandered off to find 'inspiration' when he trained, not that he cared as long as he was taught something useful.

Naruto closed his eyes to remember the sensation when Kyuubi's chakra filled him. Soon his belly grew hot and the warmth spreading to his entire body. This was it! The sensation he felt! He opened his eyes and found himself covered by red chakra instead of his normal blue chakra. He bit his thumb and started to make seals.

"KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU!" his palm connected with the earth and the seals spread on the ground before a loud sound and smoke filled the area within the radius of 100 meters. Naruto felt the ground beneath him shake and he was raised to the sky with it. When the smoke was clear a huge frog wielding a sword on its hip and a pipe in its mouth was seen. Naruto grinned.

The toad looked confused at his surroundings before getting angrier by the second.

"Who dares to summon me? Jiraiya, you'll soon see why I am called the toad boss!" It bellowed in anger.

"I was the one who summoned you," Naruto showed himself across his eyes so it could see him.

"You? A mere child summon me?" it laughed at the girl (AN: Naruto is in disguise, remember?)

"Yes, I am. Something wrong?" he asked rudely.

"That is impossible."

"Well, I'm standing on you, aren't I?"

"Where is Jiraiya!" the huge toad roared.

"Probably in a public bath peeping on women."

"…I see. Very well, I'll accept you as my summoner if you can stay above me till dawn," And without waiting for his agreement the toad jumped and started to rock his body to make him fall.

4 hours later when the sun dawned, Naruto breathed a long sigh of relief. His legs were wobbly and he didn't doubt that he would have been overthrown if this continued for 10 more minutes. He laughed as his last stamina was spent. Not realizing, he slipped from Gamabunta's skin when he didn't use chakra to stick himself anymore. His eyes closed tiredly as his body plummeted to the ground below. At the last moment the toad boss slid his tongue out and caught him. His sexy no jutsu slipped out and went in a poof revealing his true identity. Gama-oyabin raised his eyebrow.

"…Arashi…" he noted the resemblance between the kid and his former summoner. He crosschecked the boy's girl face that resembled that woman whom Arashi loved and the boy's current face and concluded that he was their son, the carrier of Kyuubi, the kitsune youkai that he had sealed inside the belly of his only son and child.

He twirled around when he sensed another presence nearby. "Jiraiya, he is…his kid, isn't he?"

The white haired sennin stepped out from his hiding place and smirked. "He is. Remarkable isn't he? He could control a bit of Kyuubi's power and use it to summon you already in such a short time. And he is changed from the short boy I have seen. It was like being in the henge of a girl for such a long time affected his body. I wonder why, and if it has something to do with Kyuubi," he then chuckled. "And he was still thinking that I don't know that he wasn't a girl."

The toad shook his head in exasperation. What was he thinking when he agreed to be summoned by him? He must be drunk at the time. He laid the boy on the ground and poofed out leaving the toad sennin to take care of the boy. Sighing, Jiraiya slung him on his shoulder and headed to the hospital.

Naruto left the hospital the next afternoon feeling much more refreshed than any other day. This was his first time he slept for more than 4 hours in a month. And he was ready to begin another set of extensive training. Since his summon training was over all he needed to do now was to further train his new ability.

One week later

Naruto was currently wondering whether or not to buy a pair of dark sunglasses (AN: for someone—sorry I forget your pen name, only remember your review—who reviewed me about sunglasses, just to let you know that I have written this chapter long before you reviewed). If he bought it he didn't have to worry when he used the Byakugan and Sharingan and was afraid of anyone knowing anymore. On the other hand it would raise quite suspicious looks, especially from Iruka, Sandaime, his…classmates—he didn't know whether he could call them his friends, and perceptive shinobi. And of course the eyes' range and ability would be dampened somewhat.

He paid for it later. The teller obviously didn't know who he was since she didn't give him the 'eye'. Thinking of that…he'd never seen her before. The usual shopkeeper was an old man that always gave him scorn and ridiculed him. Oh well. Putting the glasses in his jacket pocket he went back to his home. Tomorrow he would rest because the final exam would be in 2 days. And when that time came he would beat Neji senseless.

…It sucked with no training! He was bored! He has read all of the goddamn scrolls and he had nothing to do and he couldn't sleep. Well, a little training wouldn't hurt, right? …

"O man, that wasn't so little, I'm chakra exhausted," Naruto collapsed on his bed right away and slept before his head even touched the pillow.

"SHIT! SHIT! SHIT! DOUBLE SHIT!" Naruto threw himself from the bed and hurried to the bathroom after taking a closer look at the clock. He needed to get to the exam grounds in less than 15 minutes. He forgot to turn on his alarm and look what it got him. He he'd fallen asleep. Would anyone believe that! After a quick cold face washing, Naruto took out a blue tanktop and dark red jacket that resembled his orange jacket. Fastening his shuriken pouch and other weapons, he took off his weight bands and dropped them with a clang, leaving a dent on the floor. After he got his sunglasses, Naruto ran to the door, opened it, and then locked it again. No need to give the villagers ideas about his things, right?

Without his weight bands he could run freely. His speed still didn't match Rock Lee's normal speed, but it came close. And he thought that it was a good improvement considering he only started wearing them 4-5 weeks ago. Running at blinding speed, he didn't see Konohamaru or Hinata on his way. Two minutes (AN: just how long is the range between the stadium and Naruto's home?) later he arrived at the exam gate, getting the attention of the 2 guards. The blonde boy stopped to catch his breath first and then he entered the podium. He sat himself beside Neji, not looking up at him. Inside he was excited and wanted to get the exam started soon. He then noticed that Sasuke hadn't come, and neither did the Sound guy.

"Ara? Where is Sasuke and the Sound guy?" he asked Shikamaru.

"Saa na, it's too troublesome to think about them," came the lazy reply. The Kyuubi's vessel shook his head exasperatedly. Trust Shikamaru to say that.

Sandaime made his speech and started the final exam. Genma as the examiner introduced himself and told them the rules.

"First match, Uzumaki Naruto Vs Hyuuga Neji" the crowds cheered.

From the crowds Naruto could see Sakura, who was…gaping at him? He squinted his eyes to see if he was just hallucinating. Nope. Sakura was indeed gaping at him, so was Ino, and Chouji whose hand gripping a potato chip stopped in the air. The question was…why?

"Is that really Naruto?" Ino asked to no one bluntly. She then turned to Sakura who had the image of a gaping fish. Boy, that guy surely had changed in just a month. The boy grew taller and developed more muscles. And just what's with the change of wardrobe anyway? Maybe he finally realized that orange just wasn't for him.

The blonde girl observed Naruto from afar. The boy's height had shot up and now he was around 150 cm (AN: sorry guys, but I don't know the normal height of 12 years old boy). His skin had tanned more and she could see the muscles beneath his jacket. And even though his chubbiness remained, he'd lost some of it and his face sharpened making him look more matured. She whistled loudly, snapping Sakura and Chouji from their Lalala world. He seemed like the exact opposite of Sasuke. Like the sun and the moon. Naruto had a bright attitude while Sasuke was full with the air of mystery. Naruto's hair was so blonde that could be mistaken for gold, while Sasuke's was as black as an abyss. Naruto's skin was tan while Sasuke's was pale. If Naruto was handsome in a more manly kind, Sasuke was…pretty? Nah, more like handsome in a girly kind… wait a second that's not right. Uh… Sasuke was handsome in feminine ways? God… she must stop thinking like that. It was so…wrong…

"Woah, Naruto has surely changed, hasn't he?" Chouji commented, once again starting to eat his snack.

Sakura eyed Chouji incredulously. "Are you kidding? When I met him 4 weeks ago he wasn't like this! How in the hell did he grow so much in just such a short time?" Sakura wondered.

"Begin!"

Naruto made 2 kage bunshins before he himself hid in a tree to observe the fight with his sharingan and byakugan activated to copy Neji's gentle-fist style. Making a few handseals he formed ice shards in the air above Neji and rained them down on him. He needed to force the Hyuuga boy to use his trump card as soon as possible for he could only hold both sharingan and byakugan for 12 minutes (AN: it improved after he trained for 2 more weeks). The Hyuuga without looking up immediately spun around fast like tornado and deflected all shards.

"KAITEN"

Many Jounins, ANBU, Sakura, and Sandaime were shocked to see the ice shards. After all, Konoha wasn't really into water jutsu, they were more focused on fire jutsu. In Sakura's case, she was shocked to see something that so resembled with the Mist missing-nin she and her team had fought against in Wave country. Even Neji understood that there was something amiss going on.

He caught a kage bunshin's kick and since it was solid he thought that it was the real Naruto, not knowing that the one he was thinking about was currently sitting on a tree studying his style. It spun mid-air and released another kick while its other leg was caught. Neji simply deflated his back to avoid it, but what he didn't expect was that it changed its course of attack and its foot hit his face. Naruto's kage bunshin drew its first blood.

Enraged, Neji dashed to it. "You're within my field of hakke! You can't use your chakra after this," the boy from Hyuuga branch used his jyuken. Naruto especially concentrated when Neji did it. His sharingan saw his movement in slower motion and copied it while his byakugan saw the chakra he used and how he manipulated it.

The kage bunshin poofed out of existence when Neji finished with 64 hands, shocking him who jumped back to avoid 5 kunais that struck the ground where he was before. Unlike the first bunshin, Naruto prepared the second one to test Neji against long-range attack. He put more chakra on this bunshin so it could use Haku's bloodline limit for 4 minutes before it ran out of chakra and poofed out of existence. Naruto deactivated his sharingan and byakugan and just watched the fight with his blue eyes that were keener than other people's, courtesy of the Kyuubi inside his body. When he had practiced his byakugan he noticed that it had a weakness that he had just discovered 3 days ago. This ability had a blind spot and even after he trained and it became somewhat smaller, the weakness was still there. He wanted to know whether it was only his byakugan or if all byakugan-wielders have it.

Forming handseals, it fashioned something that Naruto had done before, just with more shards so that it almost enveloped Neji like a blanket. With the last seal the shards shot towards Neji who spun around once again. The dust clouded his figure so that no one could clearly see what happened. When it dissipated they saw Neji cough blood. Hiashi's and the other Hyuugas' eyes widened at the sight. Two shards were imbedded behind his upper back, but his hand gripped the bunshin's neck. Forming chakra on his left hand and made it sharp, Neji struck its stomach and it exploded with a poof.

In the podium, two shinobi near Sakura, Ino, and Chouji watched the fight with interest.

"What do you think about them?"

"The Hyuuga boy is good, but unfortunately he was too hot-headed to notice that the ones he fought against were only Naruto's kage bunshin that even with Byakugan could only be seen as real person. Fox boy is interesting though. He could use a jounin level jutsu: Kage Bunshin. His first bunshin tested Neji for short-range combat while his second one tested for long-range attack. His…ability to use water jutsu is…interesting for sure. Are you really sure when you say that he was the last of his ninja academy classs?"

"That was what was written on Iruka's report."

"Well he's certainly not dumb. He was clever enough to use his bunshin to test Neji. That means that he either acted stupid or his brain just kicked in." They went back to see the fight with no Naruto on sight, but not before they smirked. They had the first candidate for chuunin, now the boy only needed to prove his worth.

"Naruto! Show yourself!" Neji pulled out the shards from his back and winced. How could a dead last like him wound me like this? I won't accept it, it is not my fate to be defeated by him.

"What's up, Neji? Can't handle my attacks?" he taunted the Hyuuga boy.

"You wish!" he snarled back, which made Naruto chuckle at his irritation. "Come out of hiding! Or are you scared to fight me by yourself?"

Kyuubi's vessel whistled. "But I have fought you by myself. Incase you don't know, bunshin is shinobi's jutsu. And why don't you search me with those pretty eyes of yours? Or is that only served as a display?" he mocked even further. Neji concentrated on his byakugan, his anger making his blood vessels appear more. Unlike the Hyuuga clan, Naruto didn't have the blood vessels of his eyes bulged out. He thought of this being an advantage of having the demon fox inside his body.

Looking around he spotted Naruto standing on a tree branch. He dashed toward him. Knowing that he has been spotted, Naruto only grinned as his hand went to his pouch and drew out a black ball. With his other hand he took out his sunglasses and put them on before throwing the ball towards Neji. The black haired lad dodged it to the left, but from the corner of his eyes he saw it exploded and he turned his full attention toward it. Big mistake though, because as soon as it exploded, it let out a very bright light that almost blinded everyone in the podium. The Hyuuga in the podium quickly covered their eyes so not to be hurt, but Neji didn't have the luxury. Being in the nearest vicinity and his byakugan activated optimally, his eyes were hurt so much by the intensity of the light. He covered his eyes in pain and cried out, but the damage was already done.

Naruto smirked wider. His plan was successful. He had found the idea after he'd bought the sunglasses and remembered from Sakura's story that byakugan could see everything with more intensity than others'. He then bought a flash grenade and being a prankster he knew how to modified it to his expectations. The bomb worked much more. He only wanted to modify it to blind everyone in a 20 meters radius, but it seemed he poured more than enough substances inside it. He was sleepy at that time and even fallen asleep in the middle of modification, so it was no wonder if the result was disastrous.

"Those eyes of yours really are sensitive, aren't they?" he jumped down to the ground, looking at Neji whose eyes could only see blurs.

"Kisama!" the Hyuuga prodigy growled. "A loser like you can't defeat me!"

"Whatever," Naruto shrugged easily. "That was for hurting Hinata. I have to ask you though, why did you almost kill her? You're her cousin, right? Or is it because of the seal placed on you?"

"YOU! How do you know about the seal?" he snapped. His eyes felt better now, though he could still only see blurs, but it wasn't hurting anymore.

"I researched a little about the Hyuuga clan, that's all. So it's true, then? You beat her because she is from main house?" Neji gritted his teeth. "You're pathetic, blaming something like that on her who didn't even do wrong to you."

"What do you know about me! Because she was kidnapped my father died, and you don't have a cursed seal like this on you!" Naruto gave off a bitter smile.

"Oh, maybe I don't know about what I would feel if my father died, but that's because I am an orphan and didn't have any parents at all to care for me. You're lucky, you know your parents, unlike me. And as for the seal, I know about it more than you do," he didn't elaborate anymore causing Neji to become curious as to what he meant. "Still you were wrong to beat her," Naruto growled out.

"It is her fate that she is weak. Destiny allowed me to defeat her and it is destiny that will make me defeat you too!"

"Do you really believe in that crap? So it's destiny that makes you, but didn't you come from Hyuuga branch? Is it destiny that your father had to die? But if you really believe it then, why did you try to defy it?"

"I didn't defy them!"

"Really? Then why did you beat Hinata? If it is your destiny to be born as a Hyuuga branch member then why did you not protect her instead of harming her?" Neji wavered at that. "But I don't believe in destiny. I will make my own path. I will make everyone recognized me as Uzumaki Naruto, not what they accused me of when I didn't even do anything wrong. You're too weak to accept everything that's happened in your life so you then blamed it on others by saying it was your destiny," he snorted. "Funny, really."

Neji growled. Now that his eyes were much better he could see Naruto clearly. The blonde genin was making 3 kage bunshins and circling him from 4 directions.

"As you could see and feel yourself not too long ago, my bunshins weren't normal. They have solid bodies and if I poured more chakra into them they can do jutsus too. Interesting. Isn't it?" Each Naruto activated byakugan but since he still has his sunglasses on the others couldn't see it. Neji and the others were astonished when the 4 Naruto's made the familiar stance used by the Hyuuga. "You're within my hakke field," they chorused much to the disbelief of the Hyuuga boy and many others.

"2 hands," 4 pairs of hands struck him on different tenketsus. Neji's eyes widened when he felt the pain inside his body and his tenketsus closed.

"4 hands, 8 hands, 16 hands, 32 hands," With the last cry Naruto finished it. "64 hands!" He fell to the ground beneath him.

Was he right about me? Am I too weak for not accepting my life?

Meanwhile Naruto was feeling lucky that he has both byakugan and sharingan. With sharingan he could copy his moves and jutsus, but he still need byakugan to see his tenketsus. His '64 hands' was much weaker and more inaccurate than Neji's because it was his first time and his control was still not good enough, but it still served its purpose. But he knew that he needed for himself not to rely too much on both doujutsus.

"Why did you struggle against your destiny?" the defeated Hyuuga asked as he gazed into the sky not looking at Naruto.

"…because I don't want to be called a loser"

Genma was astonished to say the least. Here he was thinking that Neji would beat Naruto only to see just the opposite. He snapped out of his thoughts, "Winner, Uzumaki Naruto!" the silence was changed into cheers that were deafening.

"You know what kid?" Genma asked Neji. "Even a bird, if it's clever enough will get out of its cage using its beak."

Naruto grinned, closed his eyes, took off his glasses and deactivated his byakugan before opening them. He walked to the place where the competitors of the exam were. Behind him he could see the medics bringing Neji in on a stretcher. He thanked God that he didn't need to use more chakra than what was spent already.

"I can't believe it. Naruto actually won," Shikamaru chuckled, happy for him.

In the other place, Sakura still couldn't believe her eyes. She was gaping and there was no indication that she would close her mouth soon, so Ino snapped her from her mind.

"Ne, Sakura, aren't you glad that your teammate won?" She smiled when she saw the shy and timid Hinata look happy although she could see there was confusion in her eyes, not that she would blame her, Naruto has just used her family taijutsu style!

"No way!" a shout of disbelief brought their attention to the source. Kiba, with Akamaru on his head, exclaimed. "Naruto wins?"

"Well, well, if it isn't dog boy who lost to Naruto a month ago," Yamanaka girl taunted him. He and Akamaru growled angrily, but a pained cough from Hinata brought his attention to her. Concerned he went to his teammate.

"Hinata, are you okay?" she nodded with a smile, but he could see she was in pain. Her wounds hadn't healed properly yet. "Come on, let's go ask a medic-nin to treat you," he gripped her wrist and not wanting to argue, Hinata nodded and went with him. Kabuto was eyeing them behind his ANBU mask when they headed towards him. "Excuse me, Anbu sir, could you tell us where the nearest medic-nin is? She needs help."

"I am a medic-nin. I'll treat her," he said.

"Thanks." Kabuto's hand was enveloped by chakra as he healed and put her to sleep. When he was finished he made Kiba and Akamaru unconscious too.

In the medical ward, Hiashi was eyeing his nephew in sorrow. He vowed that he would tell him the truth of the death of his father years ago. He wanted to patch everything up. And he owed it to the Kyuubi boy to make Neji opened his eyes. And speaking of him, he wondered, how could he use jyuken?

Naruto walked to the railing beside Shikamaru who congratulated him. "Thanks."

Kankurou was worried, the signal still wasn't there. That meant that he needed to give up, so Karasu's secret wouldn't be revealed. He eyed Naruto closely. This boy wasn't the same boy he saw a month ago.

Naruto looked around, where was Sasuke? He could be disqualified!

The spectators also booed out and became angry. The kages of the 3 nations discussed about it before informing Genma of their decision. "The match between Uchiha Sasuke Vs Sabaku no Gaara will be moved to the last match. Next match, Kankurou Vs Aburame Shino."

"I give up," the sand boy said, much to the disbelief of others. Shino looked at him closely from behind his black glasses. The crowds booed again. Temari eyed the unsatisfied spectators annoyed. She brought her fan out and jumped to the ground below.

"If you all wanted the match, then I'll go!" she snapped.

Genma looked over the Third who nodded. "Winner, Aburame Shino by default. Next match: Nara Shikamaru Vs Temari."

"Oey, oey, why did my match come so soon? This is too troublesome. Maybe I should just give up like him."

Irritated by his lack of motivation, Naruto slapped his back rather hard and made him fall to the ground. "Go, Shikamaru!" On the ground below, Shikamaru muttered curses to Naruto with his back on the ground.

Naruto and the others watched as Shikamaru fought the Sand girl. She cornered him for a while before he suddenly came up with a trick and succeeded in binding her. When she almost gave up, the lazy boy did something unexpected. He gave up. Naruto and the spectators yelled at him, but he ignored it. The fox vessel wanted to strangle him. It was so close.

It was Sasuke's turn now, still there was no sign of him. The crowds were getting impatient and so was Naruto. He eyed Gaara from the corner of his eyes. The red head was as indifferent as ever. Naruto felt something from the boy. Something that was similar to his own. Something strange was going on…He has felt it since yesterday, like something bad would happened. The cheers from the crowd got his attention and he saw a whirlwind of leaves appeared and diminished, leaving Sasuke and Kakashi in the middle of the exam ground. He grumbled inwardly, leave it to Sasuke to show off like that. He had a smirk on his face that he wanted to wipe off. A bit of anger rise within him when he saw Kakashi who stranded him with Ebisu and left him for Sasuke. Shaking his head, Naruto shouted to him.

"Oi, Sasuke!" the boy turned up to him. "You better win this match cause if you don't I can't kick your ass myself!" A look of surprise flashed from his eyes before he smirked. Naruto frowned. Was he that weak before that he thought he couldn't win from a Hyuuga? "Ne, Shikamaru, let's go to the others," he nodded and followed him to the spectators' podium.

Lee saw them come closer and he brightened. "Naruto!" Ino, Chouji, Sakura, and Gai turned to him.

"Hiya, thick brows!"

"Naruto!" Sakura shouted. "How in the hell you beat him?" she accused off.

"Hey," he was offended. "I beat him fair and square, big deal!"

"Then how come you could use the Hyuuga's taijutsu style?"

"I observed him," he replied simply, not wanting to divulge any information. She wanted to shout something else when the silver haired jounin appeared. "Kakashi-sensei!"

"Yo!"

"Kakashi! How come you arrived late! You're a jounin and should act like one, just like me, the Konoha green beast!" Gai bellowed, earning him multiple sweatdrops except from his prized pupil who watched him with adoration.

"You were saying?" The Fourth's pupil lifted an eyebrow. Naruto tuned it out from there, not wanting to hear the nonsense one-sided talking.

"Congratulation, Naruto. I heard you won to Hyuuga Neji, eh?"

"Aa," Naruto gave a fake grin. They went back watching the match started. Deep inside Naruto was fuming that he didn't give him more attention such as asking how he did it. Of course if he had, he wouldn't tell him the truth, but still he was his jounin-sensei dammit. At least he had given him attention, no matter how small it was.

Sasuke was attacking Gaara, who had the sand defend him. Naruto noticed that his speed was improved from before. That's it? Kakashi-sensei denied me training just to make his speed raised? Hell, I can move faster than him, although not by much. And I did it on my own. He glanced at his sensei. No, Kakashi must have taught him something…special. Gaara formed a ball of sand to envelope him.

He found what the special thing was when Sasuke ran to the wall and stood there holding his wrist with his other hand, and he could see something was formed there. The sound of birds' voices greeted his ears when blue electricity crackled in his hand. He then started to run toward the Sand boy with his lightning leaving a trail of crushed wall. The Uchiha boy sank his chidori into the ultimate defense and it started to crack.

From then on, everything went down hill…

TBC… …

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