Life As a Tomb Robber
Summary: A girl named Amunet has been a tomb robber since she was a child. Her village was destroyed by the pharaoh and she wishes for revenge. (as would I.) Amunet runs into another tomb robber, known as the king of thieves. Or, Bakura.
Genre: Romance
Authoress notes I: Amunet has dark brown hair, cut above her shoulder, courtesy of her favorite dagger, and bright emerald eyes. She's is around 5'5 and is slim. (like i care) Her attitude and pride gets her into trouble at times. She can be childish and naïve at times. She is a strong fighter, better than Bakura. In this story at least. This story will contain parts, therefore making the chapters longer and easier for me to write. There will be at least five parts or more in each chapter. Some chapters may be written different. Whoever has written it will post their name atop the part. Set in ancient Egypt.
Authoress notes II: Aparrently this is turning out to be more about Bakura than Amunet. I've become a major Bakura fangirl, so that's all I can write. Help!
For example:
Part IV (written by ?)
Get it?
The ages are quite simple. I will mark what they do and I'll add that at the same time. Gender will be added as well. I will mark my OC's.
Amunet: F 17 OC Tomb Robber
Bakura: M 18 Tomb Robber
Yugi: M 16 Slave
Atemu: M 18 Pharaoh
Seth: M 19 High Priest
Mahado: M 45 High Priest
Ryou: M 15 Slave
Jonouchi: M 17 Commoner
Serenity: F 14 Commoner
Ishizu: F 21 High Priestess
Malik: M 18 Bounty Hunter
Marik: M 19 Tomb Robber
Rebecca: F 12 Commoner
Duke: M 20 Tomb Robber
Raphael: M 25 Bounty Hunter
Koru: M 11 OC Tomb Robber
Kuro: M 11 OC Tomb Robber
Moswen: M 15 OC Healer (name means light skin)
Re: M 12 OC Tomb Robber
Raziya: F 27 OC Seer and mind reader, etc..
Tsekuni: M 17 OC Tomb Robber
Okay? I hope whoever-you-are understood that.
Some small things:
'...' Amunet thinking
(...) Bakura thinking
"..." someone talking
/.../Marik thinking
Last chapter:
Amunet hurried across the desert on her horse and looked around while riding. She caught sight of the familiar white hair in the distance and hurried there. When Amunet got there, she saw Bakura sitting on his horse and gripping the mane firmly. Amunet hurried over and grabbed at his robe. "What's with you?"she asked, climbing on behind him and holding him to her chest. Bakura was convulsing with shadow magic and growling wildly now. "Shit!"yelled Amunet, noticing the odd object hanging from his neck, then she saw it. "I thought there were only seven!"yelled Amunet, then noticing a figure in the distance. "Marik!"
I need ideas! Vote:
Should something bad happen to Amunet?
Should Atemu burn down the thieves home and kill them all, causing Bakura to go nearly insane? (marik and amunet being the only ones left)
Yugi and Ryou make love to each other and Yugi (or ryou) gets pregnant, then when the pharaoh plans to kill the slaves one tells the other to escape without him with the baby because he's too weak to live?
This will happen.. Hehe!
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"Marik!" Amunet cried. Bakura was trying to pull away from her arms, growling louder and screamed. The points of the item he was wearing had stuck through the skin in his chest and blood was gushing from the openings. Marik finally arrived, jumping off his horse and grabbing Bakura's wrists. "Calm down!"he yelled. "That item!"cried Amunet, pointing to Bakura's chest. She saw Marik's eyes widen as he tried to pull the item away. The action caused Bakura to scream in anguish and pain. "Take my horse Amu! I'll take Bakura back to find out what to do."said Marik, having Amunet move out of the way and replacing her there, holding Bakura's arms to his side with one arm. "I'll meet you there."said Amunet, leaving with the two horses and soon disappearing out of sight. "Come on Bakura, cooperate."said Marik, finally getting Bakura's horse to move. "We'll save you..."
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Amunet was entering the thieves grounds. Something didn't feel right. She looked into the distance and gasped. Everything was on fire, burning. Now Amunet could hear the protective yelling and panicked and pained screams. Then she saw him. Pharaoh Atemu. Her vision turned red as she let go of Marik's horse and charged forward. If she did this right, he would die. Then a familiar cry pierced her hearing. "No.."she whispered, looking into the direction of the scream. Khepri was in front of Akila, spear through her abdomen and Akila was covered in blood next to her. Then she felt someone slash at her and all went black.
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Marik begged his horse to move faster, seeing the smoke and flames in the distance. Bakura was still flailing and such, screaming at the top of his voice and blood starting to fall from the corners of his mouth. "Shh, Baku.."said Marik, putting a finger over Bakura's lips. Surprisingly he did calm down, falling limp into Marik's chest. Marik looked up again and gasped. Fire, blood, and soldiers everywhere. Then, he saw Amunet. She was lying limp on the ground ahead and blood on her side. "Amunet..."he breathed. As soon as he said her name, Marik felt Bakura perk up and open his eyes. At seeing all this he whimpered, then when his eyes caught sight of Amunet he jumped off the horse and ran to her.
"Amunet?" Bakura said, cocking his head and holding her. "Bakura!"yelled Marik, seeing the pharaoh aiming a spear for Bakura's head. Bakura looked up as the spear quickly lowered and even if he could've easily moved, he stayed. He didn't notice the ring glow and the pharaoh disappear out of sight. Marik ran to the two and noticed Bakura was crying. He checked Amunet's pulse and smiled. "Don't worry Bakura, she's alive."said Marik, cupping Bakura's cheek in his hand. Then he noticed something, Bakura's eyes were glazed over and unfocused. He was reliving the past. Marik saw Bakura stand and trip, landing beside him. Marik pulled Bakura close to him and ignored his struggles. "Don't worry, we'll save you."
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Gahigi died and now Malik had come down with sickness. Raphael cared deeply for the boy, ever since he found him wandering the desert. Malik, his sister Ishizu, and his older brother Marik were seperated in a fire. Malik was reunited with his sister, but Marik was nowhere to be found. "R-Raphael... Can I see my sister?"asked Malik, coughing lightly. "I'll go find her."said Raphael, hurrying throughout the corridors and searching for Ishizu. He finally found her. "Ishizu your brother wishes to see you."said Raphael. "Okay."said Ishizu, following him to Malik's bed. When they got there, Malik was coughing hard, laboring his breathing. "Brother.."said Ishizu, going over and softly pecking his burning forehead. "S-Sister..."whimpered Malik. "You wished to see me?"asked Ishizu, smiling sweetly. "I l-love you.."said Malik, becoming silent and losing consciousness. "Dear brother, why must you always be cursed to suffer?"
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