Ok, I managed to find another character to put in a first person POV. But, I don't know if its that good. I didn't feel like working on a story, and there were no stories I had been reading that have been updated, so I chose poetry. And like I said, I don't know if this one is that good... please tell me what you think! And sorry if it's too short!
And... WOW! I got a flame... heehee... OK, now I'm a lil' annoyed at the reviewer... For those who did not flame me, just continue reading and ignore this paragraph unless you feel like reading it, which, either way, doesn't bother me a bit. Now... To the reviewer, "Sherrie", why do you think this is "crap"? A lot of other reviewers like this, and if you think that this poetry I've made up is worthless pieces of garbage, then I suggest you don't read them. This is justa style of poetry that isn't exactly a certain 'type' but just something thatI like to do for FUN.Now, I'd appreciate it if you weren't so rude, but I understand that people just act like that and you can't do anything about it. So, you have two options. 1) You stop reading this. 2) You can actually give me suggestions on how to make this "crappy" poetry better. Now, that's all I have to say. Okay? Okay!
Anyways, now that that is over with... I don't really have anything to say now except please read and review!
Oh, and now I've just remembered something... I don't really know of any characters from Zatch Bell that would be good enough to put in a poem and make it in first person POV.
So, would you peoples like me to do different characters in new poemseven if I've done them already? Just wondering... well, read and review!
Who's Gonna Be My Girl?
Who's gonna be my girl?
One that's hot with sandy hair
And goes up in a cute curl,
One who's got eyes that seems to flare
And has a soft voice
That is always giggling
I don't care about history
But my legs go jiggling
When I see another girl
So, who's it gonna be?
Dude, maybe that one!
Or that one!
Which one should I choose!
Hyde may always say
That I'm still worthless
But day after day
I still can't choose
And he still continues
To give my esteem more abuse
So what? I can't help it
Girls are all that mean to me!
So who's gonna be my girl?