AN/ Hey guys. Im here with a new update. Thank you so much for your reviews, it really inspired to me get this chapter up quicker.
To My Reviewers
Bianca HaliwellThanks for the review:D
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StreakofFuschiaOops, i forgot to mention it. Chris' whitelight is called Declan
Phoebe-x15In the very beggining of this story, Piper and Leo were both real jerks towards Chris. Over the time of my writing for it I thought the story would benefit more from having them not being jerks, just generally forgetting about him alot. In case you havent noticed, I updated the first chapter to reflect these changes.
CaseyWell im definitely gonna try and follow this story through to the end. It really depends on how much you guys are interested in it. Thanks for the review
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mizunderstood writerI considered slipping this information in, but im not very good at that, so i decided to make it a stand alone chaptert. Thanks for the review.
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Chris Haliwell threw the last of his books into his locker and shut it with a bang. Slinging his bag over his shoulder he walked out of the school. Not being able to orb really sucked. Wyatt and Prue could be home in seconds, while Chris was forced to make the tedious walk home.
As he walked through the school grounds, he spotted his brother. Wyatt was surrounded by friends as usual. Chris rolled his eyes and continued to walk. Put of all the people that picked on Chris, Wyatt's friends were by far the worst offenders. They were constantly laughing at him, spreading rumours about him and just plain making his life a living hell. Sure Wyatt stuck up for his brother, but there was only so much one teenager could do.
As Chris turned a corner, he found himself in an unfamiliar dark alley. As he continued his walked, he started to feel as if he was being followed. Chris shrugged it off and quickened his pace. As he was coming to the end, he felt something pounce onto him. The force of impact sent him flying through the air. He landed with a crash on a couple of discarded boxes. He tried to stand, but couldn't as he was pretty sure his ankle was broken. Staring up helplessly, he saw to dark figures standing over him. They may have been evil, but hardly demonic. Chris was being attacked by two of Wyatts friends - Aaron and Brad. He tried to get up once more, but discoverd he was now pinned down.
The punches started coming, first to his stomach and then to his head. It was some of the most excruciating pain he had ever experienced. Although Chris felt the torture had lasted hours, it was really only a few minutes. The two teenagers stood back and laughed to each other, before turning around and leaving.
Chris had been reduced to a bruised, bleeding and sobbing lump. As he felt himself falling into a world of unconsciousness, he muttered a weak call for his whitelighter before everything around him disolved into a world of black.
Declan had orbed in just as Chris lost conciousness. Although he managed to heal al his cuts and bruises, Chris still remained out cold. Declan placed a hand on the boys shoulder and orbedthemback to the manor.
Wyatt, Pam and Peyton had been lounging around the manor when the two orbed in.
"What the hell" said Wyatt, when he realised his brother was unconcious "What Happened"
"No Idea" said Declan "I just orbed into find him out cold on the ground, I mean I healed him and all its just that Im still new to this."
Peyton, who had till now been silent, spoke up.
"I dont get it, what kind of demon would just leave him there, would'nt they like wanna take him or something."
As Pam shifted positions on the floor, her hand brushed againt Chris and she was sent zooming into a Premonition. In it she saw Chrisbeing savagely beaten up, it wasn't until the end that the attackers revealed. As she came to, she grimaced and informed everyone abotu what had happened. A look of pure rage crossed Wyatts face, as he orbed out.
"I better get him to bed, will you two be right to orb home" said Declan. The two nodded in reply and Peyton grabbed her cousins arm and the two of them dissapeared in a flurry of white and blue lights. Declan lifted the sleeping form of Chris gently, and orbed the two of them upto Chris' bedroom.
Chris awoke with a jolt late at night. Squinting in the darkness, he made out the sleeping form of Wyatt across the room. As memories of the afternoons events came rushing back to his mind, he started to feel unworthy and weak. How come he had frozen up like that during such a crucial moment. Rolling over in his bed, he uneasingly drifted off into a very awkward and uncomfortable sleep.
AN/ So that was the end of chapter 2. I hope you all really enjoyed it. In the next chapter look out for some character bios, as I am way to lazy to type them up now. Anywayz, thanks for taking the time to read this and please drop me a review with your opinions.
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