Sequel to Unrequited love AU Hao has created his world of only shamans and as Kisha is born into it she is grateful to be close to her love, but things are never so easy…
Carly-chan: It has come to my attention that I left this story very open for a sequel. Right now I'm having a bit of a writer's block with A Clash of Gold so I put a little thought into it and although originally Humanity's Unrequited Love was written as a One Shot Fic I've decided to take on a sequel. And now to answer a little question that points out how this story turned a bit flawed
'Why didn't Hao-sama kill Kisha?'
This is fairly simple… I screwed up. Although I love to let my stories just bend and roam as far away from their original outlined plot as they like I really should have kept this one under control. You see my major flaw in that was how I let the character development stray from how it originally should have gone. As I developed Hao and Kisha together their relationship was supposed to blossom a bit and Hao was supposed to have felt the smallest bit of kindness and compassion for her. But just the smallest bit, he is Hao after all still. Kisha was also flawed with this, originally Kisha was supposed to be the kindest most gentle person when it came to Hao-sama but a ruthless assassin of humans for him too. However, both turned out with barely any kindness at all, they were both cold. Even Kisha was cold with her love for him as she followed him but never really made any attempts to grow close to him. SO in the original plot of things the reason Hao-sama didn't kill Kisha was that he saw in her eyes the kindness and love and remembered all that she had done to help him. She executed many humans for him so her death could wait until that time came for all humans. In the new version that we have now though…. I have no idea why Hao-sama didn't kill her. I hope that cleared it up at least a little
Oh by the way, in case you won't notice the first paragraph is to put a final end to Humanity's Unrequited Love then when we go to the second paragraph we transition to sometime years in the future in a first person viewpoint.
SGCred: Yeah I'm glad we're talking again too! Yay you're interested! Okay I may not have an update for A Clash of Gold for a little while 'cause of that writer's block I explained before. Yes….my poor little Kisha…huggles her Yesss… I explained with the why he didn't kill her thing up there points heh…yeah…it's kind of funny how that happened like that. smiles For your other questions you shall see.
HAO-Addictive: It's not a one-shot anymore lol. Gee I never thought people would like it much…but…yay! Also I think I'm getting this one out fairly soon (which may not be saying much compared to how slow I normally am.)
Any reviews that weren't replied to for chapter 1 here will be replied to in chapter 2 so don't worry.
Humanity's Death and New Rebirth
Chapter 1: Too close to my love
Hao had rejoined his group of followers and they walked on off onto their next destination. As they walked a loud noise rang out into the distance, a bang, a small explosion… a gun shot. And then the loud sobbing cry of a girl, of the girl they called Kisha. Filled with sadness and pain from her rejection and without a place in the world she let her sorrow place her smoothly into the hands of Death. She had stolen her own life, a serious offence, yet somehow she was able to return to this world in a new form in later years.
Many years after that fateful day where I took my own life I was reborn into very different world. This world, a perfect world for only shamans, was a symbol that my beloved had accomplished his dream. As I was born into this world I could only be a shaman, to me this world was a symbol that I could finally be with my beloved Hao-sama.
I was born into a good life which allowed me to be close to Hao-sama almost all the time. That made me an extremely happy girl. As I grew I began to notice how much older he was than me, I didn't care though. I had waited years for this beautiful life and I wasn't about to just give up my love because of a petty thing like age. I had waited for so long to be born into this world again as something, anything but a human and I felt blessed that I could be a shaman like he was.
When I was born they gave the name Rena to me. I was young and unable to deny the name so I had lived with it for many years. My mind was the same as it was so many years ago, the same memories but with the wisdom of the afterlife, but outwardly I still developed as a child would. All my life I had planned for one day quite a ways down the road. That day was my fifteenth birthday, when I would tell them all what my true name was and I would confess to my love who I was.
By my tenth birthday I had become aware of a horrible reason why my love and I couldn't be together. Once the humans were all gone and the world began to strive and be at peace once again Hao-sama was able to settle down a bit and regain the fine emotions that were lost in his hatred for the human race. He was able to feel love and kindness once again like he had so many, many years ago. He fell in love with a shaman woman. He was in love with another woman and they had a daughter together, that wasn't the worst part though, not even close.
The daughter of that woman Lyn and Hao-sama was… me, the man that I had loved through my life, my death ad again in my rebirth was my father. My love was unacceptable especially because it was him, creator of the perfect world and the most powerful shaman, what would his world think if he were to be in love with his daughter that way.
I pretended like there was nothing strange about my feelings, I adjusted my feelings when I was around him and other people so that it seemed as if I had only daughterly love for my father. I went on in that way for years until I was fourteen years old and it was just a week before I was to turn fifteen. I couldn't go through with it, I couldn't confess to my father or anyone who I really was, someone might remember me.
As the happy celebration of my birth ended and that day drew to a close I grew sadder and sadder with every passing moment. I ran from my home down to the river, the waters were clear and beautiful and the starry night sky… on any other night it would have been enough to brighten my heart. I heard footsteps coming up to me from behind, they stopped just a few feet from me as I sat down by the riverbank. "Rena." Came the calm and sweet voice of my mother Lyn.
"Mother! Don't look at me! I'm horrible!" I cried out, my eyes welling up with tears as I brought my knees up to my chest and hid my face.
"You father would like to see you."
"No!" I cried out sobbing " I can't face him mother! I'm so horrible!"
"Fine dear, I won't take you to him then." My mother said as she walked off.
Many moments later someone approached me again. "Rena." Came that familiar voice, one word and it seemed as if my heart had shattered right then and there.
"Father please… just leave me… forever. I'm so horrible and I'll only cause you to suffer."
"Dear… I know who you are and I know that you love me, I know you Kisha." He said calmly but with a trace of pain.
"Father… you… know? How?" I said slowly rising to my feet and turning to face him.
"Yes Kisha I am an empath aren't I and you aren't horrible, you'll just have to wait longer to love me."
"But Hao-sama! My beloved Hao-sama, my father! How can you expect me to wait longer than I have already? How can I live like this and how long should I have to wait? Can you answer those questions for me Hao-sama?" I cried out in hysterics.
"No Kisha…I can't… I'm sorry." He answered with an ever present calmness, yet… I could see it more clearly now, he was hurting and it was all my fault.
I began to step backwards towards the river, as I did I summoned an obedient water nymph and called upon it to cast the water into rapids as if there were a storm. Once the heels of my feet touched the edge of the earthen wall along the river I cried out in a voice full of sorrow, pain and being defrauded of my right to the love of my beloved, "I can't take this anymore! I can't go on!" With that I loosened the grip of my feet on the wall and allowed myself to fall back into the waters that began to rage more wildly as I entered them. As I fell I could see the terror in his eyes as he came running toward the river.
He couldn't save me though, the waves crashed up the earthen wall like a barrier between him and me. There in that water as the crushing waves washed over me death washed over me as well. I had caused the waves and once again I had caused death to take me. I knew though, that because of the strong love burning purely in my heart I would be able to return to this world to find my love. It was also vivid to me that it was impossible for me to come back as a human, humans were extinct, none would ever live again. In a new life I would surely make this work, I would surely capture the heart of my love.
Carly-chan: Because I wanted to get this story out to you guys as soon as possible and I don't really have time today to type the next part I've decided to break this up into chapters. The next chapter will most likely be the last where Kisha will finally get Hao-sama… hmm I wonder if I can write a story that ends clearly happily, I don't know. I may decide to make this run a few more chapters though if I can gather enough ideas of different lives that Kisha could lead (feel free to give ideas smiles) but no more than 4 or 5 because I have to get back to work on A Clash of Gold.